ATBJLH part 5
Hello dazzling.. enjoyed the endearing meeting between the brothers, certain distance however remains. Question arises, will Viplav speak his heart out to his sibling? Well I am as speechless as Viplav, understatement surprise package ![me wondering is this some FB? or some triangle, a much used formula of telly land?]ok so all is clear now.. dhani performing a mahi replacement ..i.e looking after Vidhaan. It does cross my mind, Vidhaan, being a jet set metro male can he not manage himself?.. ah! needs a soft touch.. Underpinned by a hidden agenda? Overall liked the blending in of the sequence dazzling. Nothing like a day out, between two disenchanted parents, steered by their child totally in command. Loved how the events flow , rather effortlessly ,one can feel Vidha pulls the shots. Bless her, she inadvertently harmonizes the miffed parents during the fun time. Some bonds do not shatter completely .. past memories hold the connection. Although Viplav's heart is in the right place, there is remorse, residue of his past with Dhani, with Vidha as a side effect. He may just blow it with the assumption that he can sail back into her life, and that she'll accept him. Seems like it's payback time for him, courtesy of Dhani. Erhhh.. seems her spirit was strong but the flesh very nearly gives in! Viplav mulls over.. the target is to win Dhani's love and trust ..as that is which strengths and will eventually see them both through the inconsistencies of life, and not the subject to change physicality, that suffers the throes of time.. Thanks very much Dazzling, for an engaging chapter, please continue, now waiting for the surprise ..thanks for keeping the forum alive with your popular fan fiction .. regards hamlet53.
