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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter one: The first meeting

" Viplab beta, bohat der ho gye hain, uth jaldi, aj tera appointment haina?" "Hmmm, mujhe sone do princess," Viplav Tripati, a lawyer by profession, currently enjoying his late morning sleep." Utho nehi to pani dalungi tum par", Dadi replied. Viplab looks at his dadi with half opened eyes. Yes, his dadi is his princess. Those who know this 30 year old Viplab, know how much he loves this old face. Sushma Tripati is the only motherly figure of his life, as his mother left his father long back for another man. Like many seasons in many years, this face showed changes, wrinkles came, skin faded, hair became gray, but the smile, this is the same 30 year old smile, the motherly affection never changed...neither did it became old to viplab, always new. Like the morning sun, a new beginning, for another day, to live.

"kya dadi, sone nehi dogi kya?" replied viplab. " Thik hain thik hain you win". Viplab removes his curtain to get up from bed.


"Hello viplab, what's up?" Anything new going to happen today? Or the same old boring schedule. You know how much I hate the smell of medicine? ughhh and those vampires with white coat, sucking the blood out of me...scared at the sight. Muses viplab, looking at himself in the mirror. "Come on rock star, you can make it even today."


It is 12:00 noon India. Viplab is almost there, near the front gate of Varanas Institute of Medical Science. He was heading towards the Outdoor unit, but suddenly some chaos pulled his attention. "you #bit**, useless inhuman doctor, you have killed my brother, yes you have killed him. I asked for help and u didn't saved him but, u killed him.You don't know who I am and what I can do. I will make sure that you end up in jail." "Are time kya waste karna , abhi akkal thikane lagaenge iske, khul e aam zinda insan ko mar dali, isko saza milna hi chahiye, woh bhi abhi k abhi." said someone from the crowd. "

"Please let me explain, what I was doing was my last try to save the patient. I had to give him CPR'' viplab hears a soft voice, anxious, frightened." I didn't kill him." ''Chup kar, warna yehi dafna denge tujhe. Areee aplog dekh kya rahi ho, maro isko."




There is a huge gathering in front of ER. Those present there didn't seem to b anxious for a serious patient. Rather they looked like they are ready to kill. " May be someone is in trouble, in the midst of these illiterate people", thought viplab. "Maro isse" someone shouted."Chal viplab, madat karte hain iske." muses viplab. Then what he did was heroic yet stupid. "Areee kya kar rahe ho ap sablog, pagal ho gye kya? Aurat pe hath uthana kaunsa mard k kaam hain?" He comes forward from behind the mob and shields the damsel in distress from the ready-to-kill mob. Breaking of glasses of the window of ER, stones and slippers coming out of nowhere towards them is all Viplab could sense. He turns towards the one he was trying to save, and suddenly something hits him and warm blood comes out of his forehead blurring the vision of his one eye. But the other eye could not stop admiring the beauty of the one he was trying to protect, a lady in white, what a beauty!!!Thinks viplab. "Incredible, is she a dream?"


Sorry dear readers, like u all, i too have forgotten about something i started. but i hate unfinished projects.so here is my attempt to finish what i started.thanks for reading.
Edited by ratan24 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ratan24



hi Dazz, one ff writer to another😆, i visit the forum often, i read ur ff. good job dear.


Thanks for the appreciation, Ratan! 😊 I read your first chapter and it's quite appealing. Please do continue. I'm excited to visualize the love story between Dr. Dhani and Advocate Tripathi. 😉 So, Dhani's older than Viplav? Very interesting. Please do post the next chapter soon. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Vidha SS:101RIAD chapter 1.

Hiya Ratan! Firstly a very well done for overcoming the humdrum of life and attempting to continue the SS. Hamlet is pleased that you kept many Ishq members desire to continue, and posted the first chapter. Across the forum where numerous favorite serials come to an end, avid viewers change into avid readers! getting yet again another chance to relive their favorite story and characters through the pen of writers. Hence thank you for carrying on with Vidha moments.

Liked the reference to the elderly figure in blessed households. Grandparents are a sure symbol of family consistency and continuity for those grandchildren who are involved in the care of age concern. In this family of course it is Viplav who needs emotional nurturing in the absence of a doting mother, who chose to live her own life, her way. Sure thing every professional needs some form of pep talk to self motivate. Seems Viplav the white coat is being eroded with professional drudgery.. intimidating hospital staff in Accident and emergency is not unheard off, even where I live. Hospitals have a strict policy of behavioral code of conduct which is strictly adhered to by both staff and public under care. Putting in security guards and local police link ups come in handy. On the other hand patient's family reaction to a serious outcome is understandable too. Ratan I enjoyed this scenario as it also became an ideal setting for the hero's entry to save a damsel in distress! And what a scene, very dramatic! I agree he could have tried to diffuse the fracas, by calling the hospital security services, veered away the patient's family, in particular! from the scene to offer explanation about patients grievances procedure .But of course Ratan, had Viplav jumped through the hoops, we wouldn't have got the knight in shining armor scene!

Last word, very engaging start, do continue with chapter 2, sure would like to see and hear what the damsel in distress has to say about the gallant knight who saved her from the riotous mob and in doing so, injured himself too, how heroic! Now carry on writing Ratan please... regards hamlet53




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for writing ratan...😃

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