OS: He Defeated Me - Page 3

Originally posted by: pearl100

UnRes...this is for you 👏⭐️ will be back dear.

Hey BB thank you soo much for dedicating it to me and other angels 😆🤗 You are a swetheart yourself...good thing you brought this post was actually searching for it...wow your stories are getting so much better ...you are a brilliant writer dear...do keep writing more for us...I have absolutely enjoyed reading it...You bring in the right emotions and make it sweet n short...n the best part is I expect more n more while reading 😆 mast hai re teri fictions...I am myself very lucky to have met you n others in this forum as well. Behana yeh lo 1000000000 stars tere OS ke liye ⭐️ Waitign for more such stories from you...pagli u have underestimated yourself before...You are a brilliant writer n I love your stories. Itna tarif kafi hai aaj ke liye 😆

haan darling bohot tarif kar diya..😳 ab mein kya bolun.. thanks bhi kam pad jayegi// but phir bhi thank u behena.. I love u..😳

Originally posted by: mehraan

Chup chup ke pad ke nikal sakti thi,par not pattardil to not even appreciate the brilliance n credibility of ur writing...Always had been a gud writer from day1!!Well done n keep churning more..!Lovely..appreciate it

He he I have stopped writing..😆 for who will I write??

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

thanks SS..🤗 kitni tareef kardi meri.. mera mood achcha hogaya..😆

waise mein wapis agayi.. 😳

Originally posted by: simple2joy

UnRes.
Oi tor ff complete na kore os?

As OS it was a brilliant portrayal of d inner conflicts within dhani.khub valo hoeche re.
Just one thing ,jodi conversation er style e rakhish tahole aro valo hobe.
U r a brilliant balika titu.love u.

didi🤗 thanks for ur tips.. I will remember this.. conversation style e lekhar chesta korbo next OS theke.. tumi khoob bhalo.. thank you so much😃 and love u too😳😳

barbji...this OS.. is such a delight to read.. because it has what readers want an undelayed happy ending.. you have written it very well.. from beginning till the end.The middle of course portrays the issues she has.. how hard it is to forgive and move on, you have expressed very well indeed. The story is in keeping with the contemprary track of the show.. dhani's angst about what she saw five years ago and worse still .. how that image culminated in the end.. viplav marrying kamini eventually.. the image you portray is that of Viplav as a good husband to kamini.. but not so good to dhani.. but you bring out the perseverance of VIplav.. which is backed by the greatest virtue love.. and whats more he awakens that very love in dhani's heart too! and the green fiend of jealousy in her being expels from dhani' .sets her free! till only the colour of his Ishq .. true pure love remains...
thanks barbs for this priceless treat.. for me and all others on ISHQ.. yours always, hammie..

hello buddy😃...got to know through post about ur admission congrats🤗...loved reading ur os ⭐️⭐️...simplicity and right amount of emotions makes reading enjoyable ...depicting dhani inner turmoil perfectly😳😳...bht logical bhi hai 😆😆...last para❤️ when she says his love defeated her ego ...okay i was chup chup ke stalking 😆😆 nd read ur comment in hammie take and will download that video thankyou fr telling😆😆😆... tum wh ff nhi likhogi aage😒

Originally posted by: neha_021

hello buddy😃...got to know through post about ur admission congrats🤗...loved reading ur os⭐️⭐️...simplicity and right amount of emotions makes reading enjoyable ...depicting dhani inner turmoil perfectly😳😳...bht logical bhi hai😆😆...last para❤️when she says his love defeated her ego ...okay i was chup chup ke stalking😆😆nd read ur comment in hammie take and will download that video thankyou fr telling😆😆😆... tum wh ff nhi likhogi aage😒

Hello lady Einstein lovely to see u back.
U have increased ur posts.bahhh.

joya lady enistein with that shock type hairs🤣...meri post ki speed tortise jaise hai😆😆

Originally posted by: neha_021

joya lady enistein with that shock type hairs🤣...meri post ki speed tortise jaise hai😆😆

Same here.
Tumhe sach mein waisa shock lagke hair straight ho gya kya?

aise shock lagega th ek bhi baal nhi rahega😆😆😆