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Hello Guys.. Came with an OS..Read and appreciate if u like it..😆

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I stepped out of the house into the lonely lanes of Mumbai.. It was midnight. The sky was cloudy. I could not see the shinning stars and the moon clearly.. It was complete dark around me.. It felt as if my whole world was slipping out of my grisp..

I had received a jolt when I saw him with Kamini a week ago... Yes I know that she is married to him.. She is Mrs.Tripathi...

"Dhani, don't u know me..? How can u think like this..? Kamini was coming down with fever.. She was shivering, so I covered her with the blanket and gave her a side hug to assure her that she will be fine soon.. Atharva needs his mom.. He cant stay without her and they both are my responsibility.. I hugged her but I don't love her.. I love only u my dear.."

I looked at him with anger and gave a tight slap across his face..

"You lier.. 5 years back I saw u with her.. I saw u in her arms.. and today again I saw u hugging her.. U still think that I will believe that u love me.?. Go away from my life Viplav, just get lost", I was fuming with anger..

"Huh.. u slapped me.!!. I am in this city only for u.. only to convince u about my love.. I love u and my little vidha.. But now I seriously think that I need to go away.. "

He stood there for a few more secs, was looking at me with teary eyes.. Perhaps he wanted to enter my mind through my eyes which were not even ready to meet his.. I turned away my gaze.. And he walked away..

I picked up Vidha from his hotel and came back..

I had reached the Mumbai Sanorita Park.. No one could be seen around me.. I sat down on an empty bench.. All the hatred had surfaced again, the moment I recalled the incident.. Viplav covering Kamini with the blanket and giving her a side hug saying, "don't worry u will be fine.. take the medicines in time".. Why does he have to take so much care of her? He had called the doctor, that was more than enough.. But my anger and restlessness was not because of kamini.. Then who do I hate? Viplav?? But why should I hate him?.. He was taking care of his wife.. Why am I jealous then??

Viplav was still staying at Mumbai.. I had thought that he would leave the very next day.. But he did not.. Yes I had called at the reception of the hotel in which he was staying.. I had enquired about him and the receptionist said that he was still staying there.. Then why did he not come to meet me ..? He had been here in this city since the last month.. everyday he had come to me to ask why did I go away from him? Why did I not inform him about Vidha? So many questions.. never ending questions.. He wanted the answer for all those questions.. He repeatedly said that he loved none but me. I repeatedly rejected his love.. Mentally tortured him by putting up an act of being close to Parshiya.. I had wanted him to go away from Mumbai, then why am I sitting on this empty bench at this late night and shedding tears for the man who I hate..?

Was he really very upset this time for my rude behaviour? It scared me no end, the realisation of losing him again.. I felt like throwing away everything, burning this whole world even at the thought that he will leave for Benaras again..

I tried staying away from him, working myself to death.. but I could not stop thinking about him.. I could not forget that he had waited in the rain, the whole night only for my answers.. he did not leave me for a second when I was in hospital.. He was the one who had protected me from the rioters, brought me back safely... Why did he do all these if he think that it was his mistake to marry me? And my Mangalsutra.. I cant forget the day when he had put it around my neck and promised me to love me forever and stay by me.. Why did he still keep my mangalsutra with him if he did not care about me..?

I had been waiting for 7 days to catch a glimpse of him.. I was sure that he would come to me to convince me that he had never loved Kamini.. But he did not come.

I had no other option than to give in to the truth... That the very thought of losing Viplav scared his Mrs. to death..

What had happened 5 years back, i dont want my past to ruin my present.. It was nothing but a MU.. My eyes could not betray me, that was what i used to think.. Then whatever I saw in this 1 month, how could I ignore that? It was only Viplav who had been trying to clear away all the MUs. I did not even care to have a sensible conversation with him.. It was my fault too.. If my eyes could not betray me then my heart which beat for Viplav could never betray me too..

I looked at my mobile screen.. It was 12:45am.. I let out a deep breath and dialled a number..

"Dhani..?"... I was ready to bet my life on my guess that Viplav was crying.. Not my guess.. I was very sure he was.. Five years had passed but still I could easily understand his state of mind..

After 40 minutes

A car parked at the gate of the park.. I was still sitting on that empty bench.. He came and sat beside me.. He did not utter a word, nor did I.. We sat there together, don't know for how many minutes or hours. With great effort, i lifted up my face to look into his eyes.. His innocent face looked angelic in the dim streetlight.. I slide close to him and rested my head on his shouders.. He did not waste a second and immediately pulled me into a tight embrace.. My heart melted..

I whispered, "I am sorry.. and.. and.. I..".. I was unable to hold back my tears.. He hugged me tighter..

"I love u too and I love only you and no one else"

"I know..".. I tried to smile.. He broke the hug and planted a kiss on my forehead..

I hugged him again..

"So pack ur bags.. I will come tomorrow to pick kaki,u and my vidha.."

"Hmmm", He kissed my hair.

"Ayodhya Niwas is waiting for Mrs. Viplav Tripathi and our Flower Fairy"..

I stood there in his arms, defeated.. His love defeated my ego, my anger..And I never wanted to win.. Every time I tried to hate him, I only end up loving him more.. It was because of Viplav's Ishq For Dhani..

Ishq Ka Rang Safed.. His Love for me is pure and fresh.. which could fight with every odd to win back my love..❤️❤️❤️


THE END😃😃😃


This OS is dedicated to my sweethearts- My dearest Hammie, Swathi, Nus, Joya didi and my Pretu darling.. I am indeed very lucky to have u all..🤗

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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UnRes...this is for you 👏⭐️ will be back dear.

Hey BB thank you soo much for dedicating it to me and other angels 😆🤗 You are a swetheart yourself...good thing you brought this post was actually searching for it...wow your stories are getting so much better ...you are a brilliant writer dear...do keep writing more for us...I have absolutely enjoyed reading it...You bring in the right emotions and make it sweet n short...n the best part is I expect more n more while reading 😆 mast hai re teri fictions...I am myself very lucky to have met you n others in this forum as well. Behana yeh lo 1000000000 stars tere OS ke liye ⭐️ Waitign for more such stories from you...pagli u have underestimated yourself before...You are a brilliant writer n I love your stories. Itna tarif kafi hai aaj ke liye 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.
Very romantic! very lovely and touching. Thanks a lot for penning this beautiful OS. It made my night.

How I wish Dhani uses her mind like this in the show!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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UnRes.
Oi tor ff complete na kore os?

As OS it was a brilliant portrayal of d inner conflicts within dhani.khub valo hoeche re.
Just one thing ,jodi conversation er style e rakhish tahole aro valo hobe.
U r a brilliant balika titu.love u.
Edited by simple2joy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UnRes.. 👏 ⭐️
BB...fab fab fab... such logical n sensible OS.. they need to sit n TALK.. the ViDha's ISHQ which we ve witnessed in last 10-11 mnths.. is all about ths UNDERSTANDING..!!! Indeed..! Dhani itni samajhdaar.. 😆 sach mai maza aagya.. ur simple writing has made ths os even more beautiful 😳
The night atmosphere has added the beauty to ths os..as if she's herself tired of ths inner turmoil of hers n in need of peace now...!! loved reading every bit of it..😳
I hope u keep gvng us such os ofc if time permits. . 😆
Luv u.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: awida

Wow.

Very romantic! very lovely and touching. Thanks a lot for penning this beautiful OS. It made my night.

How I wish Dhani uses her mind like this in the show!


yes i too want dhani to use her mind a bit.. Her heart should hear what viplav wants to say..
Thanks dear..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: simple2joy

Res.
Oi tor ff complete na kore os?

huh.. dont talk about that FF.. I was so excited to write my first FF.. suddenly the PH came up with this horrible idea of changing the female lead.. at first it was difficult for me to accept the new dhani.. uske baad saare doston ke saath forum mein panga ho gaya and i have forgotten the plot.. .. 😕
So i am concentrating on new IKRS's new stories😆😆.. and now I am quite happy with the show.. isiliye thought of writing a Vidha OS😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SS tune bola tu nahi aae ge.. fir cousin ne kese aane dya..😆
acha abhi nahi..I'll read tgs os sukoon se... abhi im a bit preoccupied. . Fir unress karun ge..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: simple2joy

Res.
Oi tor ff complete na kore os?

even I was eagerly waiting fr dat cardiologist Viplov FF.. 😆 lkn ye bb ne 360 turn lelya hai.. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

SS tune bola tu nahi aae ge.. fir cousin ne kese aane dya..😆
acha abhi nahi..I'll read tgs os sukoon se... abhi im a bit preoccupied. . Fir unress karun ge..😳

mein kal subah ko jayungi😆😆

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