OS: He Defeated Me - Page 2

Originally posted by: NusiSg

even I was eagerly waiting fr dat cardiologist Viplov FF.. 😆 lkn ye bb ne 360 turn lelya hai.. 😆

aur kitna taunt maro gi tum dono..🤣 arey mujhe thodi pata tha ke cardiologist banne mein itna time lagta hai..😆😆 woh toh mere do safed coat wali friends hai isiliye socha ke vipu ko bhi safed coat pehena doon,,

Haan haan koi baat nahi 25 ka b chale ga.. we'll drool over him too.. chhoden ge thori...☺️hamare profession ka tha tou hume kaafi lagao hogya tha usse..😳 I wish tu woh ff b complete karty.. chalo if it's not possible fr u I can understand .. lakin it was too good actually..😳

Originally posted by: NusiSg

Haan haan koi baat nahi 25 ka b chale ga.. we'll drool over him too.. chhoden ge thori...☺️hamare profession ka tha tou hume kaafi lagao hogya tha usse..😳 I wish tu woh ff b complete karty.. chalo if it's not possible fr u I can understand .. lakin it was too good actually..😳

haan 25 years ka MD🤣 yeh soch ke mujhe bhi hasi ati hai😆😆 25 years mein toh MBBS bhi complete nahin hoti hai aur viplav MD banke renowned doctor ban gaya🤣

Matured Os...😛 dekh lo kahi woh likhne k baad icu mai admit naa hojaao..😛
Abhi itna adventure thek nahi tmhaare liye..🤣

haan lagta hai sahi kaha.. itna adventure karungi toh jaan hi nikal jayegi🤣

Haan tere liye ye simple pure love wali cheezain better hain abhi.. zyada heroic stunts bhaari pad jaaenge ... 😆

wese I unress on pg 1..😳

Barbs

Originally posted by: NusiSg

UnRes.. 👏 ⭐️
BB...fab fab fab... such logical n sensible OS.. they need to sit n TALK.. the ViDha's ISHQ which we ve witnessed in last 10-11 mnths.. is all about ths UNDERSTANDING..!!! Indeed..! Dhani itni samajhdaar.. 😆 sach mai maza aagya.. ur simple writing has made ths os even more beautiful 😳
The night atmosphere has added the beauty to ths os..as if she's herself tired of ths inner turmoil of hers n in need of peace now...!! loved reading every bit of it..😳
I hope u keep gvng us such os ofc if time permits. . 😆
Luv u.. 😳

thanks SS..🤗 kitni tareef kardi meri.. mera mood achcha hogaya..😆

Originally posted by: Magnolia2

Barbs

Lovely writing!Dhani's stubborness will always be defeated by Vipu's impossible love...you have projected this feeling really well through this simplistic story. The descriptions are beautiful too.

I want to also congratulate you for securing admission in engineering. Great news! 👏

Kothai bhorti holi?Ami toke byaktigoto shondesh pathanor chesta korechilam(hansi pacche amar kintu tui bujhe nish) 😆

Gelo na.

Sorry for a late reply.. went to visit my relative ..returned today😆

Chup chup ke pad ke nikal sakti thi,par not pattardil to not even appreciate the brilliance n credibility of ur writing...Always had been a gud writer from day1!!Well done n keep churning more..!Lovely..appreciate it