OS: He Defeated Me - Page 4

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

barbji...this OS.. is such a delight to read.. because it has what readers want an undelayed happy ending.. you have written it very well.. from beginning till the end.The middle of course portrays the issues she has.. how hard it is to forgive and move on, you have expressed very well indeed. The story is in keeping with the contemprary track of the show.. dhani's angst about what she saw five years ago and worse still .. how that image culminated in the end.. viplav marrying kamini eventually.. the image you portray is that of Viplav as a good husband to kamini.. but not so good to dhani.. but you bring out the perseverance of VIplav.. which is backed by the greatest virtue love.. and whats more he awakens that very love in dhani's heart too! and the green fiend of jealousy in her being expels from dhani' .sets her free! till only the colour of his Ishq .. true pure love remains...
thanks barbs for this priceless treat.. for me and all others on ISHQ.. yours always, hammie..

Originally posted by: neha_021

hello buddy😃...got to know through post about ur admission congrats🤗...loved reading ur os ⭐️⭐️...simplicity and right amount of emotions makes reading enjoyable ...depicting dhani inner turmoil perfectly😳😳...bht logical bhi hai 😆😆...last para❤️ when she says his love defeated her ego ...okay i was chup chup ke stalking 😆😆 nd read ur comment in hammie take and will download that video thankyou fr telling😆😆😆... tum wh ff nhi likhogi aage😒