OS: My Heart Beats In Your Chest - Page 3

Originally posted by: mehraan

Ek danda milega for hiding ur talent in writing...!!!

Excellent...I can really see happening infront of my eyes...CHUPIRUSTUM...!!!

Carry on n entertain us...

apko lagta hai ke mein bohot talented hoon?😆..its only and only for viplav or u can say mishal...after IKRS i think i will return to my old version and then again i will not be able to write a single word on my own...but as long as IKRS is there i will try to write😳😳

Originally posted by: cocoatree

That was simply beautiful yet emotionally stirring OS !

What a title! All I can imagine my couple ! aww ! Keep in writing Barbs !!

thanks dear archu..😳😳...u too write very well and i am glad that some better writers liked my OS😃

Originally posted by: Annu_2402

Barbs kya superb likhti hoo yaar. its too good. Only After Seeing Vipu so serious in hospital tumhari talent bahar aayi hai. Please don't stop and keep giving such nice posts

thanks annu😃...yes vipu ko dekh ke my dimmag started working😆..thanks for reading and praisng😳

Originally posted by: nandyy55

Barbie 👏👏 very well written!!

Blue, Red & violet color r amazing part.

Loved kanak & Dhaan's part hope they will patch up in the show too..😉

Cv's shud study ur OS & can copy ur love scenes😉😉.

Title Really touching..

And dont think abt our talks few days back..

Keep writing OS, FF ...

this was all my imagination...when i saw the precap that raja stabbed vipu, i wanted the hospital scene to become something like this..so wrote it down...thanks nandy...surely will try to write again if i can😳

Originally posted by: revathirk

My heart beats in his chest...!!!!!!👏

Dis one sentence gave d full essence of d story...simply wow wow wowww Barbie...I luved it...so beautifully written ..luved ur strong dhaani...!!!! Just commendable yaar...please keep writing...😊😳😳

dont know how this title came in my mind...i too loved it...sab MR ke pyar ka jaadu hai😆😆...thanks for appreciating reva😳

Originally posted by: Spreeti98

Tu Eng mein ache numbers lati hogi...jhoot mat bol!😆 It was grt yaar!! no exaggeration...nothing..just to the point...no dragged hosp drama...🤢😆

I hope CVs yeh padhe!!😳 nd copy kare!!

acha likhing tu!! aur v likh...!!😃

class 8 ke bad kabhi 90+ nahi mila re pretu...and my mind is working only for MR...i can never ever write a single word for any other show...😆😆...sab vipu or mishal ke liye...😳...i am glad ke tujhe achcha laga...woh word toh nahi bol sakti jo sab ko boli.😆😆..toh mein kya bolun?😕...chal tu age bhi meri tareef karti rehena😆

Originally posted by: Meenakshi-rg

Hey barbie kya shot maara hai . seedha chakka.

Wow barbie , really i mean it . and sorry sorry for being so late.

The best part was dhani giving it back to kanak. wow. dhani will not live if anything happens to viplav. Hope this kinda convo happens in the show too yaar. will really have an effect.

And dhani rushing in without waiting for anyone's permission . Atta girl , that's what needs to be done. viplav loves you and he wants you to take charge of his life in all ways.

Barbie at least here toh strong dhani mili kanak ke saamne. thanks.

But kanak hugging dhani 😕 That's a dream !!!!! And i want dhani to push her this time.

And ek aur baat Vidha ne hum sabko romantics bana diya yaar.

😆😆 Haan we are thinking about hug scenes with villain also😆😆...may be in my next story i will write dhani kissing kanak😕😕

Superb writing dear😳😃 do continue it...I was just imagining your words...beautifully protrayed👏

Originally posted by: pearl82

Superb writing dear😳😃 do continue it...I was just imagining your words...beautifully protrayed👏

thanks for appreciating😳😳...itna achca tha kya?..I am overwhelmed with the responses of my friends😃