OS: My Heart Beats In Your Chest - Page 2

Originally posted by: hana_y

i used to write Ff Ss in other forums but then i leave it cant stay long in mob due eyes problem feel sad i cant write on vidha
but happy to got you hansa n other who
write well on vidha thx a lot

Originally posted by: hana_y

i dont have words to say how it is barb
you show us how viplav really dont need
any thing when dhani is around him
how she stood for her viplav n ans back to kanak n most last line my heart beat in his
chest wow viplav sleep without injection
kanak thx dhani wow she is not vamp here thx to write such an awesome Os .

thank u so much hana for appreciating...u guys were inspiring me since my first OS so I got the courage to write it...oh so u r also a writer...i never type from mobile...the eyes are stressed...i type the story MS Word and copy paste it here 😃

Originally posted by: adhiabhi

Super dear. I can imagine all the scenes. Kanak's reaction was good. She hates dhani but understand their love .

thank you abhi...i am glad that u liked it 😳 yes in my story kanak is a human and not a stone hearted machine 😆

Originally posted by: Magnolia2

Barbs

A beautiful title to an equally beautiful story. I loved reading it. The title itself sums up in entirety the special bond between Viplav and Dhani. Their souls are one and their hearts beat together-what else is this if not supreme true love?

OMG some wonderful writers are appreciating my OS.. 😳 amr seriously lojja lagche 😆 thanks for reading this OS and commenting here 😊 😊

That was simply beautiful yet emotionally stirring OS !

Barbs kya superb likhti hoo yaar. its too good. Only After Seeing Vipu so serious in hospital tumhari talent bahar aayi hai. Please don't stop and keep giving such nice posts

Barbie 👏👏 very well written!!

My heart beats in his chest...!!!!!!👏

Tu Eng mein ache numbers lati hogi...jhoot mat bol!😆 It was grt yaar!! no exaggeration...nothing..just to the point...no dragged hosp drama...🤢😆