ViDha SS #Dreams Come True

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Dhaani

Its already half past 9, Maayi is still sitting in Baba's study room. We are leaving this house today.Its already 2 hrs. since she has come out of the room.

"Baba, wish you were here, we miss you."

I noted in my diary. "Kya kar rahi Dhaani beta?"

I was quick to hide my diary under my pillow. I don't want it to be read by anyone.

"Badi Amma, kuch nahin. Was just sitting. I lived 15 yrs. of my life here. Its very difficult to leave this place,"

She came near me and hugged me just like my mother. If it had not been her, then me and my mother would not have any place to live today.

"Dhaani, everything happens for a reason, you need to forget things." Tears rolled down my checks, as i whispered to myself "I can't somethings are just not meant to be forgotten and forgiven." I hugged her tightly as i remembered the happenings!!

Some months before,

Viplav

"Guru, wake up..., wake up Viplav...Viplav..!."

I rubbed my eyes,"kya hai Raj subah subah kyun...yeh kya hai" i sat straight. I could see the open sky above me.

"when did i sleep outside?" i scratched my head.

Then, there was a sudden jerk which caused me to fall back,"ouch..!"
I sat straight again, and looked around and down. Pankaj woke up.

"why are the trees running?" he questioned.

"Kyunki tum bus k upar baithe ho..!" Raj smiled.

My hand went up, and hit his head hard, "Pankaj looks like he knows everything. Ask him about whats going on."

Pankaj looked at Raj and they both laughed.

"Acha toh ek hum hi hai, jisse kuch nahin pata! did i drink so much? how the hell did i reach here?"

Raj,"humein kya pata tum yahan kaise aye?" he stopped laughing.

I barked,"saaf saaf batao!"

"Kuch nahin guru, we just kidnapped you last night." Pankaj's smile vanished as Raj hit him on his head.

"Chup nahin reh sakte the." Raj shouted.

They both looked at me as i stood up to drag them to the edge.
"Aaj toh tum donon gaye"




P.S. i had this written from days before, but never posted it. Aaj yaad aya ki i was writing one FF..!😆
I know ki yeh chota sa hai. Btw if i ever continue this, then it will be a finite series of 10/15 episodes. 😊




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...acha hai!!!continue

Shit mujhe yaad aya...I hve to rush to my Ss now🤣
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Preeti Darling 😳..i saw the title of the post but thought will read it later since its an FF..but did not notice the name of the author..notice karti to pehla reply mera hi hota😆😆..nice start please continue...only 1 question (u knw i am going to join CID soon..so ques poochna to banta hai, nahi??😆)..its going to be a lovestory of vidha na??..i mean dont forget that u have to write a vidha FF..not trikan, phookan or Kanja's daastan-e ishq 😆😆..we will be waiting for the next part😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pree this looks promising. .. I hope u continued. . Dikkat kia hai .. likho naa.. oh god y trees are running? 😆 it was so Viplov-ish..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehraan

Wow...acha hai!!!continue

Shit mujhe yaad aya...I hve to rush to my Ss now🤣


Formality nahin sahi se bolo kaisa tha..??😆 because i am really bad at writing FF,SS...or anything..!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: revathirk

GUD ONE...CONT...😊👏


Hey! Reva good to see your reply here! Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

Preeti Darling 😳..i saw the title of the post but thought will read it later since its an FF..but did not notice the name of the author..notice karti to pehla reply mera hi hota😆😆..nice start please continue...only 1 question (u knw i am going to join CID soon..so ques poochna to banta hai, nahi??😆)..its going to be a lovestory of vidha na??..i mean dont forget that u have to write a vidha FF..not trikan, phookan or Kanja's daastan-e ishq 😆😆..we will be waiting for the next part😊


Makes me feel like a real writer..!🤣 pehle reply karti..!! Why?? Itna maska kyun maaring?? Kya kaam hai saaf saaf bol..!😆 tu CID join karegi?? Plz karle tere ques k wajah se crimes kam ho jayenge..!😆 btw mujhe pta tha ki this sort of ques is coming issliye i mentioned ViDha in the title itself!🤣
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

Pree this looks promising. .. I hope u continued. . Dikkat kia hai .. likho naa.. oh god y trees are running? 😆 it was so Viplov-ish..!!


Nus...promising??? No formality plz!😆 to be honest my stupid head doesn't have any ideas now..! 🤣
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Originally posted by: Spreeti98


Makes me feel like a real writer..!🤣 pehle reply karti..!! Why?? Itna maska kyun maaring?? Kya kaam hai saaf saaf bol..!😆 tu CID join karegi?? Plz karle tere ques k wajah se crimes kam ho jayenge..!😆 btw mujhe pta tha ki this sort of ques is coming issliye i mentioned ViDha in the title itself!🤣

tere dimaag mein kuch nahi hai..sirf trikan aur phookan aur kanja hai😆😆 maaska kyun marungi?? i meant i thought i will read this FF later..if i had noticed that u are the writer to mein tabhi pad leti and reply karti...samaj mein aya..😆😆..now i dnt want to spoil ur FF thread by chatting..let me search ur long live post😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nahin keep chatting here..this way comments will increase nd adrishya aatmayein will open this thinking this to be a superhit FF..!🤣 then i cn live peacefully singing ullu banaya bada mazaa aya..!😆😆

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