Lame attempt by a Dumb Writer/Pt 5 uptd, Pg 4

Story starts after the infamous night, viplov saves dhani and in turn gets a tight slap and viplov-Tanya engagement breaks.

Next morning...

Kanak sees dhani's and viplov's picture in the news paper, she gets furious she calls TT and asks him to bring dhani to the same temple. Tripu calls Suvarna and tells her that he has got a job for her in the temple and asks her to bring dhani too. Stupid suvarna agrees.

Dhani initially refuses to go but in the end relents, both dhani and suvarna arrive at the temple. Not finding Tripu there, suvarna leaves dhani and goes in search of him. Kanak finds dhani alone and starts taunting her, she signals PC and he and his gang also join her in insulting dhani. Safed gang gets to know about it and rush to the temple. War of words between KT, dhulari and Badi amma. Kanak throws the new paper at dhulari. Dhulari is shocked, she slaps dhani, badi amma intervenes and stops dhulari. Kanak smirks, she warns dhani to stay away from viplov and leaves. Safed gang back to the ashram.

Dhulari screams at dhani, dhani tell the previous night happening, everyone is shocked. She curses the time she met viplov and blames him for all that happened. Badi amma pacifies everyone. She calls up viplov and asks him to meet her at the ghat.

Badi amma shows viplov the news paper, viplov is shocked, but he explains her that he did what he was supposed to do, save dhani. He is trying to find the person behind this dirty game. Badi amma also tells him about the ruckus his mother created and how she insulted dhani. Viplov is shocked. He assures Badi amma that he will speak to Kanak.

Viplov confronts Kanak, Kanak accuses dhani of seducing him. Viplov gets frustrated, he tells her that it was his choice to save dhani and she was not even aware of the happenings. He asks her to apologize to dhani. Kanak refuses.

Viplov in his room in a frustrated state, daadhi, his princess arrives to pacify him. Viplov asks her, why did Kanak do such a thing. Daadhi explains about the inequality in the society. She tells him that though, people saw the pic of both viplov and dhani but still they taunted only dhani, they didn't say a word against him, because he is DT's grandson and dhani is a poor vidhwa. Society always treats the privileged and the under privileged differently. Kanak has the same mind set. She knows dhani is innocent but she is showing her frustration on dhani because she can't show it to him. She questions his own actions and tells him that he played all those pranks with dhani because she was a innocent girl, but he would not dare to such a thing with someone like Tanya. Viplov starts contemplating. He thinks if he was the reason for this mess and then it's his reposibility to clear it.

Viplov leaves home with his bag and baggages. DT, daadhi and Kanak try to stop him but he tells Kanak in clear words that till she apologizes to dhani, he won't return to AN. DT scolds Kanak, he tells that she should be ashamed that she forgot her maryada and created a scene in public and now because of her mistake, viplov has left AN. He warns her not to do any such thing without his permission and do something and bring viplov back to AN.

Viplov in front of tarini ashram.

To be continued...

Index

Part 1 page 1

Part 2 page 1

Part 3 page 2

Part 4 page 3

Part 5 Page 4

And please do not degrade yourself by calling yourself lame or dumb.

U should cont as an ff.

Ver logical

Hope writers churaoed ur story

Once again I reiterate I am not a good writer, this is my first attempt. So don't have high expectations. I will try my best to present a decent story in the most logical way.

All sorts of comments and inputs are most welcome.. Will try to update the next part shortly.

Thank you.

Dhani tries to talk to dhulari, but gets completely ignored. Sadly, she goes to her room. Suvarna and Raju follow her. Raju being Raju asks her how it felt to be in viplov's arms. Dhani gives her a killer look. Raju continues...how she wished it was her instead of dhani, a beautiful girl I.e. herself in the arms of a rich handsome guy...a dream come true for her. Dhani looks at her disgustingly and leaves, both Raju and suvarna giggle.

Badi amma calls out at dhulari for being rude with dhani, she asks her to trust her child more than anyone else. She explains that had viplov not saved Dhani, she would be dead now. Reality dawns on dhulari. She goes and hugs Dhani. Both mother-daughter pacify each other. A loud knock at the door.

Raju opens the door and just stares at the uninvited guest in disbelief. Suvarna joins her. Viplov with his mischievous smile asks both to move. Safed gang is shocked to see viplov. Dhulari questions him. He politely tells her that, he has been thrown out of his home by his family due to the previous night kand and his previous client has not yet paid him, so he has no money to rent a accommodation. Dhulari asks him to go and demand his money form his client and Viplov innocently tells her that, he is here for that. Safed gang has not yet paid him for the ashram case. Dhani angrily asks him, how much should they pay, he coolly tells a lac rupee. No prices for guessing the safed gang reaction...shocked. Viplov tells them that either they pay him his dues or let him stay at the ashram.

On DT's instruction TT follows viplov, he informs him about viplov at the ashram. DT is annoyed, he tells him to instigate the neighborhood against the safed gang and also tells him to take care that no harm comes upon viplov. TT with his own agenda, instigates all and sundry in the neighborhood, not only against the safed gang but also against viplov...he tells them that just because he is Mahant's grandson, he is doing his manmaani and no one questions him. A crowd gather in front of the ashram and starts shouting.

A man shouts at the safed gang, asks them how can they house a young man at a vidhwa ashram. Dhani retorts that viplov has jabardasthi come to stay at the ashram. Viplov frowns...another man starts questioning viplov, he says just because he is Mahant's grandson doesn't mean he will do anything. There are other men in the town to question him. Viplov gives a loud laugh, he goes to the man and hold his arm, asks him, where did the other men go when dhani was about to get attacked by a mob at this same place. Where did he go when Lala's goondas harassed safed gang, in which hole he was hiding when PC and his gang insulted dhani. He tells him, the safed gang owes him one lac, if he could arrange that money on their behalf, he would happily leave the ashram.

DT comes there, seeing the situation, he takes viplov to a side and asks him, what is he up to. Viplov tells that he is in the ashram for a cause, until it gets fulfilled, he won't leave the ashram. He goes inside the ashram. DT goes to the crowd tells them that viplov is staying in the ashram for a reason and on his advice and asks them not to worry. The crowd gets disbursed. Badi amma confronts DT..he tells her that viplov is staying here because he wants Kanak to apologize to dhani, he tells her that viplov is very ziddhi and no one can talk him out once he decides. So he assures her that he would come up something to bring viplov back to AN, till such time she should let him to stay at the ashram.

Badi amma realizes, under the mischievous and carefree viplov lies a man with a good heart and noble intentions. She goes inside and tells that viplov will stay in the ashram, dhani and Dhulari are about to question but she tells them that they have no option, since they can't pay his fee, they need to accommodate him. She tells dhani to clear her room for viplov. Dhani leaves the place agitated, suvarna and a elated raju follow her.

DT confronts TT and asks him how did the crowd go against viplov, and TT lies that he instigated the crowd against the vidhwas, but viplov as usual, interfered and turned the tide against himself. DT leaves irritated. TT smiles thinking, every dog has his day...Jai Shankar.

Viplov enters the room and asks, is this a room or a pigeon hole. Dhani asks him to leave, if it is that small, but he says no, he can't and he will adjust and flashes a wide smile at her...dhani stares at him and thinks, she won't let him stay here for long and storms out of the room with her belongings. Thus starts a new saga...

To be continued...