Vidha SS:Beintehaan[chapter one updated on page 3]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Everyone.I am new to this forum but a silent reader.I wanted to write a SS on vidha and here it goes.Hope you people will like it.😊


Prologue:

It was a bright sunny morning. Viplav woke up from his morning sleep.After finishing his morning chores,he was standing in front of the mirror deeply thinking about how his life took a complete U-turn.Just then his mother arrived holding a new stitched kurta in her hand.Placing it on the bed,she said to her son "All are waiting for you viplav and dadaji has sent this for u.Get ready soon and come down quickly ".She gently caressed his hair and said "I know what you are thinking but don't worry,we are performing this pooja just for you (and muttered in a low voice) iss havan ke baad kaash woh buri saaya teri zindagi se chali jaaye ".He asked "maa kuch kaha aapne?".She replied "Nothing viplav,I said may god bless with you with all happiness. Come soon" and she left his room.
Downstairs,dadaji was performing durga pooja for the well being of his family,especially for the happiness of his laadla grandson viplav. He came there,smiled at his mom.She asked him to sit next to his dadaji. Just about when he was about to move,he collided with her who was carrying a plate full of colors. As she was about to fall he helped her,his hands surrounded her waist thus stopping her from falling on ground.As a result,the colors which was in the plate,fell on them.Their eyes met for a moment.This moment was broken by blabbering of his mom who said "can't you just see and walk?by the way what are you doing here?I had warned you not to attend puja. What are you doing here? hey bhagwaan mujhe maaf kardena apshagun hogaya".As kanak insulted her in-front of everyone,her eyes filled with tears. Kanak continued "apart from crying what else do you know manhoos,just go away from here". Looking at all these he raised his voice and shouted at his mom "stop it maa,you cant just talk to my wife like this". Kanak said "Viplav woh". He stopped his mom in between and turned to his wife and said "Maa ki taraf se mai tumse maafi maang tha hoon,mujhe maaf kardo dhaani".She looked at him,he stared at his mom and took dhaani's hand in his and took her with him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Madhu first of all welcome to this wonderful forum, Iam soo happy to read ur SS it was awesome u gave a wonderful start dear,pls do continue soon.
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welcome to the forum Madhu, nice SS please continue.
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Welcome to the forum
Good start
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rerose

Wow Madhu first of all welcome to this wonderful forum, Iam soo happy to read ur SS it was awesome u gave a wonderful start dear,pls do continue soon.



thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rerose

Wow Madhu first of all welcome to this wonderful forum, Iam soo happy to read ur SS it was awesome u gave a wonderful start dear,pls do continue soon.



Thank You😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

welcome to the forum Madhu, nice SS please continue.



Thank You😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: stranger2rose

Welcome to the forum
Good start



Thank You😊
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warm welcome to the forum dear...
so interesting one...
continue dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A very nice start👏. Welcome to the forum dear 🤗

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