A poem/OS on the pot making scene of Vidha.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys the pot making scene of Vidha is one of the most admirable scenes of all,hence I hereby had an idea to present a poem on Viplav's perspective accordingly,it is said if a girl likes someone then she will try to speak it out but when a boy likes someone then he will express it by staring with admiration,it is true in case of Viplav,now let's look at how he thinks in his mind while staring at her.


METAPHSICALLY,I AM PHSICAL.
Divinity is what I have to define,
When it comes to her refine,
Red rose my guys,U are not the reddish alive,
As her lips are the lovely red than anything that survive,
My dear cuckoos u no longer be prejudiced of ur voice,
As I have found an damsel,more sweeter than ur voice,
People may ask ,How can I refer her as a damsel?
But she is the sublimity of holy,she is my heart shell,
U ebony wood,please do accept ur defeat,
As her hair is the mixture of silk and shine that is elegant to make ur defeat,
Round flat circles just try to fall at her feet,
As her face is the serene of all the wonders of world that u would urge to meet,
Something that is more sweeter than ice cream cone,
It is her nose that assumes a perfect cone,
My god ! how many days do u spend in order to create this beauty,
Whose eyes are like the heavenly treasure on the Earth that is no doubtly holy,
Amul babies please get suggestions from her,
As her nourshiments ,stands as a testimony for the milky cheeks in her,
U pots ! I exactly know that ur having a soothing pleasure,
As the hands that are making u is a cotton and silk mixture.
Cool breeze u please don't make her face hidden from me,
Why do u cease to pull out her hair while I am staring the divine,
U pots! u are the one who made me close to her,
But I have put a big smile on her face by making u a blunder,
Does beauty have an infinity?an end?then it is with her,
How does she make me fall for her cheeks,
And capture my intensity through her peeks,
I am a melting like an ice glacier,
As her heart is so very prettier,
My looks always make me feel confident,
But she through her looks had made me so diffident,
I love the ambience of the place when she is around,
And try to extend it's take to infinity beyond,
She is a white Angel on my way,
Who can even defeat the galaxy's milky way
Blushing is what I have ever tried in my life,
But this girl has made it as a part and parcel of my life,
She is born to purify my soul,
, Who is a combo of Earthly and heavenly soul.
POST UR COMMENTS GUYS ,WHICH WILL BE USEFUL FOR ME TO KNOW REGARDING UR OWN PERSPECTIVE OF THE POEM .
DEDICATED TO ALL VIDHA FANS AND SPECIAL THANKS TO VIPLAV FOR MAKING ME POETIC BY HIS EXPRESSIONS IN THAT SCENE.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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now the poem is complete...it has perfect beginning and perfect ending...so beautiful...loved it completely...thnx for this wonderful poem
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Originally posted by: tarun1234567

now the poem is complete...it has perfect beginning and perfect ending...so beautiful...loved it completely...thnx for this wonderful poem

Thank u soo much Tarun dr.
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I'm Dumbstruck
Awesome work
Wow
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Originally posted by: stranger2rose

I'm Dumbstruck
Awesome work
Wow

Thank u soo much rose😳
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Superb.
MashaAllah. You are a wonderful poet Rerose. I enjoyed your poem ..it is soo beautiful and meaningful.
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Originally posted by: awida

Superb.

MashaAllah. You are a wonderful poet Rerose. I enjoyed your poem ..it is soo beautiful and meaningful.

Thank u soo much Awida dr😳
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Originally posted by: awida

Superb.

MashaAllah. You are a wonderful poet Rerose. I enjoyed your poem ..it is soo beautiful and meaningful.

Vidha has increased my creativity skills and imaginary perspectives especially Viplav,thanks to them.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am very happy after reading your poem. It is very beautiful and awesome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pressu

I am very happy after reading your poem. It is very beautiful and awesome.

Thanks u soo much pressu dr wow ur sticker is soo nice,I loved it.

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