A poem/OS on the pot making scene of Vidha. - Page 4

This show has santified the Vidhwa's and is especiaal going to talk about the furture and a destiny of a Vidhwa that is soo cool.

rerose... jolly good! you captured the spirit of the pottery scene.. the images you used, the similes especially to bring out her beauty were extraordinary.. well done for maintaining the rhythm throughout.. made the scene immortal..
many thanks,love hammie

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

rerose... jolly good! you captured the spirit of the pottery scene.. the images you used, the similes especially to bring out her beauty were extraordinary.. well done for maintaining the rhythm throughout.. made the scene immortal..
many thanks,love hammie

thanks Rose beautiful poem enjoyed it please continue.

Originally posted by: rerose

METAPHSICALLY,I AM PHSICAL.

Divinity is what I have to define,

When it comes to her refine,

beautiful yar...how artistically u penned down the essence of their relationship in just two lines..

Red rose my guys,U are not the reddish alive,

As her lips are the lovely red than anything that survive,

My dear cuckoos u no longer be prejudiced of ur voice,

As I have found an damsel,more sweeter than ur voice,

People may ask ,How can I refer her as a damsel?

lovely comparisons...very cute

But she is the sublimity of holy,she is my heart shell,

U ebony wood,please do accept ur defeat,

As her hair is the mixture of silk and shine that is elegant to make ur defeat,

Round flat circles just try to fall at her feet,

As her face is the serene of all the wonders of world that u would urge to meet,

bang on...superb...u describe vipu's pov so beautifully...he is finding peace in her...nothing in the world fascinate him now as his world is summoned up in her ..

Something that is more sweeter than ice cream cone,

It is her nose that assumes a perfect cone,

My god ! how many days do u spend in order to create this beauty,

Whose eyes are like the heavenly treasure on the Earth that is no doubtly holy,

Amul babies please get suggestions from her,

As her nourshiments ,stands as a testimony for the milky cheeks in her,

U pots ! I exactly know that ur having a soothing pleasure,

As the hands that are making u is a cotton and silk mixture.

this was cute 😆

Cool breeze u please don't make her face hidden from me,

Why do u cease to pull out her hair while I am staring the divine,

U pots! u are the one who made me close to her,

But I have put a big smile on her face by making u a blunder,

Does beauty have an infinity?an end?then it is with her,

does beauty have an infinity...answer...beauty is a joy forever 😉

How does she make me fall for her cheeks,

And capture my intensity through her peeks,

I am a melting like an ice glacier,

As her heart is so very prettier,

My looks always make me feel confident,

But she through her looks had made me so diffident,

I love the ambience of the place when she is around,

And try to extend it's take to infinity beyond,

She is a white Angel on my way,

Who can even defeat the galaxy's milky way

Blushing is what I have ever tried in my life,

But this girl has made it as a part and parcel of my life,

She is born to purify my soul,

, Who is a combo of Earthly and heavenly soul.

Originally posted by: tahera57

thanks Rose beautiful poem enjoyed it please continue.

Originally posted by: ..Roopal..

beautiful rose 👏

u just left me mesmerized

so nicely penned down...i loved the different effects u brought out and transition from one to other...

the soothing effect of the essence of their love story, his pure love and then switching to see her from his eyes...added with some fun lines in mid...awesome...

ossam work 👏

order order..i want ur next one asap 😉

Awaiting for today's episode,watching repeats.

Red chunri promo must be aired today,I am waiting for it.

Originally posted by: --SudhaS--

Beautiful poem, rose ⭐️