FAN FICTION:THE TWO OPPOSITE POLES CH7 ON PG14 UP14/11. - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Chapter 05😛
Wonderful chapter😉
Viplav the saviour saling our Dhani😉
Dhani has atleast started to feel some thing good about her rakshas😆

Can't waite for the next chapter Jenni😛
Doing a great job dear 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rerose

Ohh thank u soo much my sweet dr Radnes ,even I am waiting for such scenes to happen in our show,it would be beautiful na..

No more thanks dear 😳
It would be really beautiful Jenny
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Chapter 05😛

Wonderful chapter😉
Viplav the saviour saling our Dhani😉
Dhani has atleast started to feel some thing good about her rakshas😆

Can't waite for the next chapter Jenni😛
Doing a great job dear 😛

Ya Dhani's love if expressed will be so very good but u people have to wait until the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rerose

Ya Dhani's love if expressed will be so very good but u people have to wait until the next update...

Hard to wait Jenni😆
But ready to wait as you will surprise us just like our CVs😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Hard to wait Jenni😆
But ready to wait as you will surprise us just like our CVs😆

Cv's are sounprecidatable dear radnes but u guys can predict my story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: rerose

Yup..but the little surprises you hold make the chapter good..the drawing..viplav visiting Dhani😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Guys I am back after a long break to update my FF,hope u people like it.
CHAPTER 6:-
DHANI'S CHANGE IN BEHAVIOUR.
Dhani was now not in a situation to think about anything,she was continuously recalling all the incidents that happened in the morning,Viplav 's strong works to save her made her cool like a melting snow,her mind began to refresh ,her voice began to soften,her heart began to think lighter now a huge bug of immortalizing effects rattled up upon her ,which made her feel unrealised of her presence too,the cool breeze that calmly kissed her cheeks made her minds shift to a world filled with wonderful memories only picturising Viplav on her fate as well as face...
Wow ,she thought to herself,now she was damn sure that,she can't ever voice out to call him Rakshas,now he turned out to be her mighty saviour who has protected her from the hands of crime,she was keen to just make sure of one major thing,What could it be??
It was how to name him,what name can she now call him,inorder to refer him,her brains both the left as well as the right side organises a competition for power packed thinking about the name to provided but she thought to herself,this is a very simple task and it requires only 6 words to plung on to not the mighty brain to make a fuss on to that,his name is sweet than why ,I need an another name to refer him...VIPLAV...T H AT I S S O C U T E...
People in this land could never ever try to believe,is this Dhani,who's face grins and blushes out heavily that too tends to seek the skills of complete mesmerization while just thinking of the man whom she used to scold and blame regularly.
Time can make anyone or anything to zoom up to it's structure and thinking,time beholds a philosophy which uphelds life as per the personality and the behaviour and qualities possessed by person,now Dhani is under the play constructed by time which organises her mind and makes her seek ideas which are apart from the reality she thinks of and cares for .
These particular thoughts kindled her mind and heart and fought battles with her slumber,atlast slumber was siezed by these imaginations and Dhani woke up late in the morning.
After getting up she planned to visit the temple owing to some work,today without any company she went alone,who was the reason,for her bravery which muddled up her in a short brewity,it was Viplav,she knew that if Viplav is there ,no one can humiliate her,harm her a sigh of relief refreshed her body,mind and soul as days began to fly like the huge groups of birds on the sky ,her trust on Viplav began to strengthen,his actions keep on pondering her mind,daily as a habit she used to visit the temple even when she had no work out their her mind owing to the desire,that one or the other day,she will meet him and chat for hours with him,express her grateful thanks to him as she didn't even spend any time to thank him the day he saved her.But for now Dhani was hell sure that she can't meet Viplav at any cost inspite of that her bosom just urged to have a single look at his face for just one single minute,her heart ached to meet his eyes that would only be her medicine for the present unsteadiness she is facing.Her body resisted to take in life saving food,her breath just completely resisted and felt shame to give out it's fresh air,her lips was immoveable and her tongue's articulation was lost ,her sweet voice and her broad smile everything was fading day by day.
As Dhani's normal life in Ashram was haunted by her Rakshas,ohhh nahiii...Viplav,she was always jumbled up in chaos as well as clustered in a pathetic turmoil .Suvarna came to Dhani and she was about to open her mouth by referring as Viplav Babu and Dhani's voice once again broke out as super strong echoes from the mountain and her excitement went to high pitches but Suvarna's news made Dhani feel better as well as bitter.
Suvarna told Dhani that while she was there in the temple for cleaning the stair,she heard Maha Pandit Ji talking to Pandit and while the Pandit enquired about his grandson,he said that Viplav went to Delhi for some work ,immediately Dhani was relieved that she some how managed to fetch some news about him but one particular thing nade her feel bitter because Suvarna wasn't able to collect informations about his arrival back to Banaras which made Dhani feel awkard.
These changes in behaviour of Dhani,clearly would have prtrayed an idea in the minds of my readers,I believe ya she has fallen into an unrealized awesome feeling ,a feeling of love which can extend the habits of longings and make people awake in nights as well make us even more sensitive...
So when is she going to realise her love,hopefully in the next chapter,okk guys until then I am leaving a clue in the form of a precap...
PRECAP:Dhani hears from Rajalakshmi that Viplav was seen praying in the temple ,she runs like a marathon racer to reach the temple ,there she found...
Edited by rerose - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
aww lovely update jenny...🤗
dhaani running like marathon racer!!I want to see this type of scene in our serial😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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what a mesmerizing update of dhani inner turmoil ...loved it as always jenny dear🤗...having hectic routine these days🤢 thanks for lighten up my mood with this beautiful update😳
Precap was awesome...😆 dhani running to see viplav..awww😳

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