FAN FICTION:THE TWO OPPOSITE POLES CH7 ON PG14 UP14/11.

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THE TWO OPPOSITE POLES
CHAPTER1
A reminiscenes of nearly fifteen years would drive the essence of the cute people who could be juxtaposed in terms of scenario,character,status and even manners.Sun had raised from the eastern direction and it had coloured all the beautiful shades of the city,sweet chirping of cuckoos and crickets could be heard all around the streets,bells of the temple santicified the intensity of the holy city,it was Banaras,the city known for its pride and privilege of standing as an ever fixed mark for personifying holiness.A sweet cry was heard from the temple of the city,it was a picture perfect reality to be freezed in camera ,it was soothing,it was lovely,pearl drops started to wet the ground and it was a mourning of a little girl and she was as white as milk,her lips was as red as blood,her hair was black as ebony wood,her cheeks could make any creature in this world to fall for the pure innocence she possess within herself on the whole she is entirely an angel being personified on Earth.Any person who regrets her countenance is considered to be a mere paradoxical figure on land,but there seems to be something that disappointed that girl which made her scream out of pain and wheel into tears but the reason was a treasure becz no one had the interest to hold their ears for providing a remedy to a cute little girl of 5 .The next part of the scene is juxtaposed to a magnificient house with holiness painted only in its exterior,a boy who is charming ,highly enthusiastic and energetic rises up from his bed after the long cry of the holy bells of the temple and immediately screams with anger and pledges that today he is going to break these bells which spoils his dreams and sleep "I am coming bells,wait for me" by saying this to himself he rushes to the temple.
He rushes into the temple and finally reaches the place where the girl was constantly seen weeping for nearly an hour,he hurried in a jiffy to reach the place but he stopped for a moment,he had seen something that is strange,''WOO,WHO IS SHE I THINK SHE IS AN OXYMORON,SHE LOOKS BEAUTIFUL BUT WHY DOES SHE CRY".He was a boy of 8 years,his mindset could only lead him to view trivial aspects as significant issues and insignificant as significant problems. Then after staring at her for nearly 5 whole minutes he rushed upto to her and asked her what was the issue,why is she constantly weeping .The girl was a bit petrified at the initial level and then she finally started explaining him regarding her cry which was for holi colours and how her mother had refused to get it for her.He was now stuck in a turmoil she started pondering his thoughts in order to make up her issue.He immediately caught up with his idea and told her that she herself resemble a cute little milky chocolate,then why does she needs colours to make her look wierd,the girl replied no I love colours ,I LOVEEE COLOURS and she constantly weeped,he just ran away from that place and the girl called out to him and somebody tickled her from her back and she grinned she turned to look at it immediately he poured Red brick powder and turmeric powder on her she giggled for a moment and was glad by the outcome of his result,he had made brick powder from the bricks near the fire and had collected few turmeric from the temple .She was rejoicing and asked him "What is ur name?" first tell me ur name came an instant reply,she said her name as Dhaani and he replied "I am the princeViplav" she laughed and asked him ,"Then where is ur horse,ur sword?'' He blushed and exclaimed "Oh my god I left in my palace, next time for sure I will bring it with me for sure" Dhaani laughed with joy and both laughed constantly.That was their last meeting ,they had not meet each other after that ,becz he is an aristocrat belonging to a sophisticated family,while she is from a middle class one who is considered to be a low rank in hierachy as far as the society is concerned.He left for America ,to persue his degree while Dhaani 's life had complete twists and different in a way makeover.
Guys this just an attempt from my side hence I have made this chapter in a short format,if U guys like it I will continue PLS DO POST UR COMMENTS.
INDEX:-
CHAPTER I ON PG 1
CHAPTER 2 ON PG 2
CHAPTER 3 ON PG 3
CHAPTER 4 ON PG 4
CHAPTER 5 ON PG 7
CHAPTER 6 ON PG 11
CHAPTER 7 0N PG14
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeah I'm the 1st one here but sorry last one to comment too 😆
Sorry yaar studying for my exam, so just now got to read, wonderful start Rosey 👏
From the description of nature to Dhani & Viplav, the charming Prince & a cute Angel
Wonderful opening, though it was too short I loved it please Rosey continue it yaar 😳
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Did u like it yaar,can I continue.
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very good yaar...
i think u should continue...👏👏
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well done. we were discussing just the very day how it would be wonderful if Dhani and Viplav knew each other in their childhood. glad you transformed it into an FF.
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Originally posted by: tarun1234567

very good yaar...

i think u should continue...👏👏

Thank u soo much yaar.
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Originally posted by: napster

well done. we were discussing just the very day how it would be wonderful if Dhani and Viplav knew each other in their childhood. glad you transformed it into an FF.

Thank u soo much yaar.
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I will try my best to continue it soon.
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What a beautiful story Rerose.
I loved this cute couple.

You know what? Even the grown up ViDha are cute like children.

I hope you continue writing. I'd love to see them meeting again.
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CHAPTER 2
Fifteen years back...
The sky was so clear,the climate was so soothing,the birds were chirping soo enthusiastically and everything was fine in the holy city of Banaras.It was soo chill becz the climate assumed as it will rain as soon as possible the wind was blowing heavily and the peacocks near the river started dancing.There was someone who crossed near the temple,he was an handsome ,charming and well polished guy,his eyes stole every girl who walked pass him he was none another the guy who run after the temple bells inorder to punish,the boy who had a wonderful heart he was Viplav,now he is not the same old 8yrs kid but a fair handsome young chap of 23,girls called him dudes even aunties loved him a lot.He is now walking by the road near the temple to reach his house,he has returned from the United States by finishing his degree in law .
"Wow ,what a lot of changes in these five years,everything is changed all the old buildings,gardens,parks which I used to play once everything is completely altered but these changes are awesome to look at"by saying this he walks into the temple
He views the temple bells nd says to himself"OMG,What a sort of child ahe yaar,I am I was always interested in breaking the bells of this temple,I was too small to understand it's sanity,but now I have turned into a mature boy,I can do anything fair"
He hurries to pray as it is high time nd he has to reach his family whom he has missed since ages. Viplav was given a warm welcome by the pandit becz he was the grandson of the great DT.He started praying to the lord and suddenly some sound interrupted him,he couldn't exactly figure what it was,he couldn't make out exactly,but sound was approaching from the backside of the temple ,he ran to see what was going on there nd as he wasn't wearing his chapals he hurt himself with a broken glass piece ,he screamed with pain."OH!! My God,U have hurt me,U can't do this ,but from did u come?Tell me yaar?? as he was constantly making debates with it,more pieces of glass rolled from one corner,he was eager to know the source of it and hence went more and more closer to it and he was shocked to see a girl who was being devalued due to her condition
"Mera Bhaghavan!!Ohh!! ham kaa dekhatha,me bilkul samaj nahi aatha ,iss ladki ka karthi ,iss ladki hona bhagut choti thi phir is ladki ko ithna assambhav iss sublog karthikhe, kya zarurath thaa,ohh iss sublog kahe nahi janthi he iss ladki ko dilke dard" by saying this he went even more closer.It was actually a girl who has recently become a widow was made to perform the ritual of removing all her nishaan of marriage.
He was so disturbed by the act nd decided to stop it at any cost and made his footsteps right to the place,but he was stopped by the Pandit,the pandit requested him not to interfere in these sorts of rituals,as this is a holy city which respects these rituals,he insisted by the Pandit took him away
In a jiffy,he started to loosen his grip from his hands but initially as he was moving his eyes got struck to her ,the young widow he said to himself"I could remember her,she resumes someone whom I have met in my life at sometime,but I can't exactly figure it out".
He then enquired the pandit about the widow,"PLEASE,Will u do a favour for me,can u tell me something about the young widow,What is her name?How did she become a widow???,likewise he poured out instant questions inorder to know about her.But the Pandit remained just like a statue not even a movement could be observed,from his face.He wasn't giving up nd insisted him to answer."OKK U won't let me anything right,that's fine,I myself will let to know everything ,I can do it so legibly than u thank u for ur misresponse, Namasthe!!
"DHANI!DHANI!DHANI! a voice called out,it was her badiamma she asked Dhani to change her dress and get ready inorder to get back to the Ashram."Dhani ,I have heard this sometimes before,this name is soo familiar to me ,but When?and Where?, NO,it is just my own imagination,nothing more than that " by uttering these words he started to walk away from that place
But he heard the Pandit's voice talking to a someone ,who had the voice of sweet little cuckoo."Dhani beta,ham tumara iss vidhva kool ke dikathi bhagut aajeep say rakthiyo,tum bhachhaan see iss mandir ko,tumhara bhagut sundar ka hassar se pura karthiyo,tumhara ronekeliye iss mandir bilkul khush rakthiyo beta phar aaj tumhara ronekeliye iss mandir aur hum bhaghut parishaan rakthiyo beta" by saying these his words dropped from his mouth and he weeped even the girl was bitterly upset and failed to respond to him.
Viplav the one who was standing and watching those people by now had recollected something,he had the reminiscences of his childhood,"Ohh now I get who is she ,she was the girl whom I met at the temple nearly ages back and who became my friend from then on,but Why I wasn't able to meet her after that incident,I couldn''t get it ,but she is as same as i have seen her nearly 15 years ago,not even a single change,but she had grown olde by age and by now she is a young girl,but OMG OMG OMG she was the one who loved colours soo much,she even screamed nd made me helpless at the cost of not getting colours,but now she remains with holy white,she is pure,her sanity is exuberabant,but How can I leave her like this she was one of my lovely buddy,the very first girl buddy,whom I have once meet in my life,hence I have to do something inorder to make her happy.
PRECAP:Viplav gets to know from his friend that Dhani was forced to do a child marriage nd her husband ,died recently ,without even living with her.He says to himself,"OHH ,okk guru,I can't leave her like this ,I must teach the importance of colours in life to her".


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