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Posted: 7 years ago
I dunno di...what should i say... I m speechless...updates were eminent...
How arjun got ready to hit the fish target...
The way u put up all things together...was just superb...
Uma and shankar, pandu, shantanu, indra dev and everything...
Arjun's humbleness... Remembering his guru befire his very proud moment... And the way u elaborated his hitting the fish target...
It felt like i am reading it for first time ever... I was literally sitting in the edge of my couch... And i jumped as soon as he hit the target...[ I CANT HELP BUT ADMIRE MY HERO MORE AND MORE] AND U R JUST BRILLIANT...

and i seriously dont know how should i say it further...
I am awestruck...
Plz plz update soon...
Dont go with my dazed state. I am actually waiting for update...
Thanq u for making fish target hitting moment so memorable...for all ardi lovers and
ARJUN ADMIRERS...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks Divu for the response...Truly the feat itself is such that it is like a moment of celebration for every Arjun admirer. I feel blessed if I can do my bit by exposing the extraordinary skills that made the most difficult target look as simple as possible.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Suddenly claps were heard from all around the hermitage making the midnight brighten up with the cheering sounds sadhu sadhu.

Every resident stood up and praised Arjun...Hail the third Pandav the greatest archer ever born..They shouted in one voice.

Parikshit could not control his excitement. He made Arjun stand up and touched his feet..He clasped his legs and confessed." Proud of you Pitamah... No one can stand on par with you.. You are the best... His voice broke with excessive emotion.

Pragati approached him and hugged him along with Parikshit.
Bheem lifted Arjun and Nakul shouted " The greatest archer of Aryavarth ...our brother ...long live Pandava glory...

It did not look like night time.. Hand torches were lit by young sage boys who danced in circle shouting " Victory to Arjun..Phalgun Parth...

Arjun's queens could not control themselves but they have to as revered sages are present. They are so proud of him and expressed it through their endearing looks.


Kunti wiped her tears... Indeed this is the best narration she ever heard about her son's feat.


But what did she do? She demeaned his excellence by sharing his reward with her other sons.
Kunti side glanced at Panchali . The princess for whom Arjun accomplished the difficult task is uninhibited as usual in expressing her undaunted love for her third son. Her lotus eyes are dreamy ..showering and drenching him with her ..passionate love..


Arjun praised Suka." You made my feat look extraordinary by your orator skills. Really your narration made the task more interesting and absorbing.


Suka smiled and answered with clarity." My father Sri Ved Vyas told me that you are humble and that is why you are worthy to be acclaimed as the best. Now I realise why he said so. You did the greatest feat but you attribute it to my narration ! So Arjun like..

Ved Vyas who just came placed his hands round Suka's shoulders and said " Did I not tell you? He is like that. Hence he is loved by the God incarnate Krishna..

As the sage took his son with him..to his hermitage Arjun wondered at his fatherly love..


Panchali could not even sleep for a moment. Suka's wonderful narration of the most beautiful event of
her life and his life...made her witness and experience the thrill all over again.. She reminisced how she felt when she saw the handsome Brahmin youth hit the fish eye with such great precision..


Drisht could not believe his eyes. He just witnessed the stupendous feat done by the Brahmin youth who is placing the bow in it's place casually.

He raised his hand and shouted at the top of his voice." Pita shri here is the victor who displayed amazing skills... Let us honour him with due respect."


Drisht approached the Brahmin youth and patted him on the shoulder. Then he bowed and said." What a great exhibition of technique I have seen before my eyes... You are great.. You proved still someone is there to elevate archery to dizzy heights..


The Brahmin youth smiled and bowed acknowledging his praise.


Drupad is in confusion. He is feeling relieved at the success of the event but the question nailing him is " Who is this Brahmin ? How could some one other than Arjun can win the test.But true to his word he should fulfill his promise. He looked at the Brahmin suspiciously. Why is he looking familiar to him? Especially those eyes,the curly hair,the smile,the physique..


Drupad sighed and walked towards his daughter and said." Let us go Krishnaa.

Panchali looked at Krishna who nodded his head with a smile.

As she moved forward Malini and other maids accompanied her with the swayamvar garland.

By that time Bheem reached Arjun and lifted him above much to the astonishment of Duryothan Dussasan and Karn

As Arjun managed to stand on the ground he saw the princess approach him with steady steps..


Panchali could not help but wonder... Who is this Brahmin youth ..he captivated her at the very first sight itself.. She felt the attraction ,that certainly is a new feeling for her.. Is this love? She is confused. But how is it possible that someone other than Arjun posess her...she is born for Arjun.

She looked into his hazel eyes...the eyes that are making her drool over.. The unkempt curls that are luring her to touch and feel them

The confident smile that is teasing her...by saying like.." I know the innermost feelings of your heart..

Where is Arjun? Who is he? But he won her rightfully. She is fireborn. How could she desire someone other than Arjun?

Panchali stopped..there is a two feet distance between them now. She bent her face feeling electrified by his proximity.. She closed her eyes and remembered the physical discription of Arjun by her father .

Once Drupad told her.. Krishnaa apart from being a great warrior Arjun is so handsome.. He has hazel eyes,curly hair..tall,lanky,with mighty shoulders..

Panchali opened her eyes and raised them to look at her to be husband. By then Drisht made him step nearer to her to make the garlanding process easier.

He has hazel eyes,curly hair...

Panchali suddenly felt a strange feeling.. Her whole existence looked merging into his ..Everything around her faded.. Only he and she standing before each other.. His hazel eyes caressed her with love...and she felt the same love reach him touch him and envelope him through her lotus eyes..

Panchali bit her lip..if she is meant for Arjun..he must be Arjun..as Govind said..

Drisht asked her to place the garland round his neck

The old priest raised his voice and chanted the mantras..all the Brahmin's joined him..

Panchali's fingers touched his heart while placing the garland..She could feel the thrill and could not raise her eyes. She knew he is drowning her in his passionate gaze..

Like Chandra and Rohini,like Indra and Sachi like Agni and Swaha and like Vishnu and Lakshmi may you live happily forever .. May Shiv and Parvati bless this couple..


The Brahmin priest continued the blessing mantras...

Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wowww!!!!!
Awsome...the whole update was awsome... And I just loved the way you described Draupadi's feelings... Sooo awsome... Now eagerly waiting to see Arjun's feeling... Please di...Update as early as possible
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Posted: 7 years ago
MINDBLOWING DI...
YOU REALLY DESCRIBED ALL THE EVENT SO WELL THAT I DUNNO HOW TO DESCRIBE MY FEELINGS WHICH CANNOT BE RESTRICTED TO WORDS...
Thanx so much di for writing pre swayamvar, swayamvar and hopefully post swayamvar posts...
Now back to update... Everyone hailed arjun... He is such a precision...he derves it really... Parikshit and pragiti.. Their excitement n delightness is understood... Arjun is so humble and sweet... Besides being a great warrior his humbleness is also reason for his being BEST... kunti realised what she did( i dont wanna talk about her here)...
N not talk to talk about the stunning way with which u described panchali's feeling towards the brahmin youth aka our hero ARJUN... That was phenomenal...
Its always a treat to read about my child hero n his feasts...
Waiting desperately for next update...
Update real soon di... Thanq u
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update! The way you have described the happenings after the narration of the event at the Ashram was so amazing. It was simply brilliant!👏
Please post the continuation soon, eagerly awaiting!

Thanks very much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Di please update soon...please.. Just can't wait more...please
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Posted: 7 years ago
Please update soon, eagerly awaiting! It would be awesome, if we can get an update today...
Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
The day broke with Sungod reluctant to start his journey as deep clouds covered the sky ...any moment rain may start...
Sages did start their Vedic chants by lighting up the fire in pits. Cool breeze blew over ...trying to indicate the forthcoming rainfall.

Sahadev looked at the sky and predicted rain..." I suppose in fifteen minutes it may start..he said.

Bheem ordered his cooks to make it fast.." The rain will hinder the fire effect...he said.

Pari became ready to drench himself in rain much to the displeasure of Subhadra. She scolded him seriously.." No such things entertained..here. In a couple of days we start for Hastinapur. So be a good boy.. Uttara smiled at her son mischevously. She knew he will have his ways to fulfill his wishes.

Pragati sat with Kunti keeping her occupied with her queries. She is trying to goad her dadi Mata to accept her plea..that she will stay some more days... at the hermitage.

Kunti declared firmly." Don't wish for such things. You are young. Be with your parents and spend time . They need you more.

More than me they need each other...Pragati quipped and then bit her lip for her lose tongue. She looked at Kunti with hesitation.. Will her dadi Mata admonish her ? She has no idea.

Just then Panchali came with a jug of milk and offered them both in vessels..

Pragati sighed with relief and asked." Mata where is Pitasri?..
Draupadi nodded her head indicating she doesn't know ..

Kunti looked at her serene face and wondered... How could she retain her beauty intact ? None of her cowives managed to look that young... Yes. She is fireborn..hence..

Kunti 's face turned pale..the fireborn princess...arrived here for Arjun but destiny made her the wife of five..she survived..and proved that come what may her love will remain unsullied.

Arjun warned Parikshit." Don't persuade Suka to continue the story. He needs rest..

They are in the spacious hut built for dining purpose.. eating break fast..The drizzle started making the atmosphere cooler.

Pari looked reluctant but did not dare to argue with Arjun. Alli supported him playfully." Pari..don't worry. We will listen to the story..As such with rain predicted through out the day we can't even go around sight seeing.

Chitra joined instantly." Yes Ofcourse I am dying to hear the aftermath.. The fight with Karna.. I heard he accepted defeat and left..

Arya lowered her voice and said." But I would like to hear the garlanding part...

Arjun looked at her helplessly and remarked." You too Arya... Surely they spoiled you..

Chitra confronted." Who? We? Say it again please..

Ulupi laughed and teased Arjun." Answer her now.. You are cornered.

Rekha said." But he knows how to escape..

Subhadra laughed and retorted." Escape from whom ?

Just then Panchali entered ..she is coming from Kunti..offering her milk.

Her red Tilak stretched a bit due to the raindrops..that caressed her face...the curls covered her forehead making her moon like face look cute..

To be continued..


Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
So nice, it was so wonderful, covering conversations of all wives of Arjun...
Simply superb, please post long updates soon!

Thanks so much!

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