A Ram Lakshman SS-Lakshman through Ram 's Eyes ~Updated Chapter5 Pg11~

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mandy001

@mandy001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Great, Great, Great👏.

This Ralaksh bond never fails to impress me. I must say u came with a very nice idea of celebrating laksh's b'dy. Ram's love for laksh is beyond any description. Am sure he is making a portrait of Sita/silaksh or something like ds😆.

Really amazing part nd loved it to the core.

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

This was such a sweet one! Loved it to the core!

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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

This is beautiful, Sumi!

I love it. It's so original and unique, and it's sweet to read. So much fluff and love between the brothers.

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

❤️

Dou Shareer, Ek Praan.

That one sentence was exhibited throughout the entire chapter kid 👏👏 Raghunandan's worry for His Laal, Laal's worry for His Sita Ma, and His refusal to celebrate His birthday; I loved it Sumi 😳

Perfectly written and imaginatively thought! ❤️

Dekho, I reviewed. Ask Shivu Bhaiya to review, and put up the new chapter 😛

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: moviefan-pooja
Super ❤️I really really loved it, please update the next chapter asap

Thanks Pooja !!! 😃 Sure Updating !!! 😳😉

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Aree wah! This was so cute!
Specially Lakshman being asked to get ready in Ram's chamber ;)

Thanks Mahi jaan😆 !!! 😃😳 It is !!! Ram- Lakshman 😉😳

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lexy_rix
Great story!
I loved the chemistry between Ram & Lakshman in your story! 😊

Thanks a lot Divi !!! 😃😳

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SenAnu
Sumi Sumi Sumi Dear!!!!!! 🤗👏
Lovely and just lively!! ❤️😃

Every word, every scene and every emotion was perfect and spot on! 👏👍🏼
Ram Lakshman ❤️
I know how much you love them, and it clearly shows 😆
You made me fall in love with them even more! ❤️

Can't wait to read what happens in his birthday!! 😳
Do update soon 🤗

Anu !!! Thanks for the rainbowish 😆review !!!! ❤️ 🤗

It means a lot for me 😳 I love Ram Lakshman bond to core !!! ⭐️

Big Surprise for Lakshman and for u all is coming your way in next few chapters !! 😆😉

Yeah , updating 😃

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: KanhaKiChutki
Sumi!
I loved this chapter, it was brilliant! I loved the whole chapter, the roller coaster of emotions.
It is easy to sense the love Lakshman has towards his Bhaiyya and his Bhabhi as well!
The surprise for Lakshman's birthday huh? 😆
This is so so adorbs. I can imagine his refusing to celebrate and then Ram doing this for him! I even loved the part where you spoke about Ram and Urmi's relation 😃

Overall, wonderfully scripted, and I am looking forward to the next part! Update soon, see I unressed the same day 😃

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I do not like cliffhangers 😭 You better gimme an update ASAP! 😆

Chutki !! 🤗

Thanks for this detailed review , it's means a lot !!! ❤️ 😳

Lakahman 's love for his bhaiya and bhabhi was boundless. 😳

Ram is a big protective bro for Urmi !!

I planned Lakshman's birthday to be something very special for him , You will get to know 😉

Updating , thanks a lot 😃

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: mandy001
Great, Great, Great👏.
This Ralaksh bond never fails to impress me. I must say u came with a very nice idea of celebrating laksh's b'dy. Ram's love for laksh is beyond any description. Am sure he is making a portrait of Sita/silaksh or something like ds😆.

Really amazing part nd loved it to the core.

Thanks a lot swatz !!!! 🤗

I loved Ram - Lakshman bond very much and it's true that never failed to impress us !! 😳

It is , Two bodies but one soul !! 😳

Well , u are near to what Ram is planning , it will be revealed soonish 😳 😉