Drabble: Agamani

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Avyakta

@Avyakta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Awesome write-up Radhika ! ' as it embraced the first stream of dawn light. --skin as white as the swan,--Complexion as bright as molten gold, --smile seemed to reflect the glow of happiness itself.

Simply you adorned the write up with all these splendid similes , given an opulent visual to our imagination !

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Amazing Drabble Proteeti😃

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

My dear Radhike,

In one word, exquisite. Exquisite in conception, exquisite in the description. The words bring out so beautifully the divine beatitude of the Jaganmaata, the daughter of the Himalayas: both the little 8 year old Uma that she will always be for her mother, as also the effulgent, radiant Durga Parameshwari that she is for us mortals.

I was unfamiliar with the aitheeham that Saraswati and Lakshmi too are children of Durga's. I find it very interesting, reaffirming as it does the total primacy of both Parvati and Mahadev within the Holy Trinity. Your descriptions of each of Durga's four children is most evocative.

All in all, a lovely piece of writing.

Shyamala Aunty

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

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Team Arjun

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Radhika , a wonderfully written drabble . With your extraordinary descriptive style , you simply brought Devi Maa , Saraswathi , Laxmi and Ganesh in front of our eyes with all their spiritual spark and divine power ! Excellent work .👏

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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+ 11

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Priye I wonder how you do it every time 😆
Pro, it's fantastic!
Call it intuition, I knew you'd post something, it's the beginning of Puja after all!

Wonderful and feminine! Loved it <3

Thank you so much Mahi! I'm glad you liked it! 😳

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ramya06
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What shall i say Pro? I'm in awe at the way you weave beauty with your words. I love the way you described each one of them. Fabulous piece!👏❤️

Thank you so very much for liking this Ramyadi!