The Beginning Of Their Eternity- a Krishna-Bhama TS(completed pg 9)

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deejagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Shrutha, lovely piece of work. it explains how even the eternal couples have to face the human instincts, insecurities and pain. Waiting for the meeting 😉😉

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: deejagi
Shrutha, lovely piece of work. it explains how even the eternal couples have to face the human instincts, insecurities and pain. Waiting for the meeting 😉😉

It will come soon enough😉
Thank you Jayaa 🤗
Exactly. When born as human, a human life must be lived 😆

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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Beautiful update, Shru!

It was so refreshing to read Satyabhama's POV while Krishna was off fighting for the Syamantaka mani. I love how you described her journey from anguish to acceptance, and I her faith in Krishna.

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Mili

@LakshMila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

My Govind!!

Such a beautiful update.

I cannot describe the divinity I felt reading this.

Bhabhi,an absolutely outstanding update it is!

I am truly amazed😲

How can it something be so ummm..(sorry I could not find an appro word!!😆)?

Govind needs to be tricked 😈

Satyaaa ❤️

Her dialogues!!!And when she said 'Why marry someone...?'

That entire convo with her sakhis was superb.Truly.

And kudos for the thought ,Satya crying her heart with nature

A part of her own,well written.

Yours,

Laadli

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Ramya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Its so beautiful dear! Bhama's emotions brought out so well! Her crying with nature, fighting the lord for her arya. And lastly the heartbreak when she hears of jambavati! Loved it all! Waiting for the next part!

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Unress!

Wah Srutha wah!!

Am at a loss of words👏👏

Such emotions

Today I realised that these two were beyond mischief also😆

Satya was so pure... Crying with nature😭

And Ma Parvati too😭

And Dwarkadheesh playing tricks with His Lady😉

The Jamvanti part was heartbreaking

But don't worry Dharaa, He'll be back for YOU😳

Loved it!

Update soon

Mahi❤️

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Surya Sundarraj Sriram

@Surya_krsnbhakt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Just to see ...?

Her father? Krsna? madhavi? Her mother? Other sakhis?

I totally love this chapter for many reasons. One of them is that Devi Satyabhama's POV is explored so well, you can feel her reading it along with you! And another is that Parvati and Shiva and Brahma and Sarasvati were watching through their Home Theatre - these types of scenes have always amused me!

And also that Satrajit has finally understood wh(at)(o) is his favourite jewel.

Some other reasonss will come in your inbox.

And you brought Jambavati with out bringing in Jambavati.😆

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: EternalStars.
ResWa.
UnRes!😆

See I UnResd in the evening!😎 Need I tell you that KrishMa stories always end up taking me to a magical land?? The way these two behave is as human as it is divine!!😳 I love the additions of Mahadev and Mata Parvati beech beech mein!😆 Mata Parvati exasperated with her Priya Bhai's unending pranks.😆And Bhama's devotion to Mata Parvati!!😳 And little Subhadra!!⭐️ She is the cute little star of the story!😃
I totally loved the way you portrayed Bhama's anguish!!👏 And her heart shattering when she comes to know of our mischievious Kanha's marriage to Jambavathi! Ab Kanha se toh sab pyaar karenge hi na Bhama.😉Overall I am liking the flow of the story.👏 Update soon!!😃

You did 🤗
You do go into magical land? 😉 I know right? That's what I love about them
Mahadev and Mata Parvati are my ❤️
Of course Mata Parvati is. Have you seen His pranks? 😆😆
Little Subhadra is my ⭐️

Thank you 😳 I hope I have done justice to her :) That's my dream 😊
I know. I can feel what Bhama would have gone through 😭
Thank you :) I will :)

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sayee
Res

Unres
Its as usual awesome...apratim...waiting for the next part...

Thanks Sayee 😳

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..
Beautiful update, Shru!
It was so refreshing to read Satyabhama's POV while Krishna was off fighting for the Syamantaka mani. I love how you described her journey from anguish to acceptance, and I her faith in Krishna.

Thank you Januu 🤗
I just hope that I did right by her 😕 I wanted a flow of her POV to be there.
Thank you 😃 This is our Bhama, isn't it?