IF KEKTA TAKES OVER PROD OF IC.(PART 12) - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
😆 😆 I believe you Suvi.

IC writers are sleeping or are checking our IC forum for the story development. They cant come up with such an original idea as you can. 😆 😛 😉

Anyways you are doing very well. 👏 👏
waiting for the next part. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
thanx a ton.u ppl really encouraged me to write the story.

Thanx.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Adi is shocked as Chand falls over him coz she has been hit by a bullet.

The shooter escapes(on his bike.)

A:- Chandini chandini! oh my god yeh kya ho gaya.

Adi lifts her up n take her to his car.Adi rushes for the hospital.he is driving fastly wid tears in his eyes.Adi's shirt is stained wid blood of his lady luv.

A:-(While driving.) Oh god! Chandini ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.
main tumhe yahan lekar hi kyun aaya?
Jisne bhi ye kiya main uski jaan le longa.
Tumhe kuch nahi hoga Chandini.

Adi reaches hospital.Chandini has been taken to operation theatre(OT).

Adi calls bg.

A:- Hello bg(with heavy heart.)

Bg:- kaun?

A:- main Adi.Vo Chandini.....

Bg:- chandini!!!!! Vo to tum se hi milne gayi thi na.kyun aai nahi kya abhi tak?

A:- Nahi bg vo main.

bg:- Adi kya hua? Chandini theek to hai na??????

A:- Bg vo Chandini par kisi ne attack karvaya hai n she is hurt.

Bg:- (Tearful.) yeh tum kya keh rahe ho???kaisi hai meri chandini?????/

A:-Main abhi City hospital mein hoon aap plz jaldi se aa jao.

Bg reaches there.

Bg:- Kaisi hai Chandini aur yeh sab kaise hua?

Adi tells her the whole incident.

(After 4 hrs.) doc cum out of OT.

A:-How is Chandini?Vo theek to hai na.

Doc:- Vo theek hai.She has lost a lot of blood in this incident.kuch din aapko uski bahut care karni hogi.Slightest of ignorance can lead to complications.

A:- Yes doc.Vo theek to ho jayega na.

D:- Aap pareshaan na hoon.everything ll b fine.

Bg:- Adi tum ghar jaao.Tumhare to kapde bhi kharaab ho gaye hain.

A:- Par yahan par meri zarrorat hai.Main yahan se nahin jaaonga.

bg:- Meri baat mano.Tum thodi der baad aa jaana.tab tak main hoon na.

A:- Theek hai.Agar koi bhi zarorat ho to plz mujhe call kar dejiyega.

Bg:- haan.tum jaao tab tak main form bhar deti hoon.

A:- Uski tension aap mat leejiye vo sab maine kar diya hai.

Bg:- Theek hai.shukriya Adi.

Adi leaves.

Adi thinks of calling Rohan n telling him abt this.

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Will this accident result in closeness b/w Adi n Chand 😳 or This ll clear the misunderstanding b/w Rohan n Chandini 😕? will Adi Chand get 2gther? discover this in next part. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
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Kya tension wala scene hai!!!!!!!! aage kya hone wala hai??
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 damn gud yaar.............but in ur fic's case how cum Adi aur Chand ke beech Tara nahi aayi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
waah waah! kya baat hai humari very own junior kekta
AKA popta lali 😛

dis is kool stuff lagta hai aane waale kuch time mey tum original kekta ko bhi peeche chod dogi 😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Arey yaar kektaria ho gaya hai. 😆 .

main ekta ko peeche nahi chod sakti for that i hav to becom boss of hotties like HITEN,RAJIV,EJAZ.

Vaise if i m the boss of these stars i dun't mind.I ll make them dance on my tunes.

NAACH MERI JAAN.(M i sounding like GABBAR SINGH? 😆 )
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Adi then changes his mind.

A:-(thinking aloud.)main Rohan ko kal call karunga vaise raat ho gayi aur chandini bhi khatre se bahar hai.

Next day:-Adi has cum bak to hospital.Bg has now left for the home as she was there whole night.

Adi calls Rohan on his cel.

A;- Hello Rohan!

s:- saahab Rohan saab to apna mobile yahin bhool gaye hain.

A:- Aap kaun?


S:- Main unka naukar.

A:- acha kahan gaye hain vo?

S:- offive ke kaam se kal raat ko hi PUNE chale gaye.

A:- Wat?Acha theek hai.thank u.

A:-(To himself.)Office ka kaam.par pune mein to humara aaisa koi bhi zaroori kaam nahi tha phir rohan vahan kyun gaya hai???///

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Will Adi b able to contact wid Rohan?Will Tara create sum new problems?
Wait for the next part.
Edited by Super Kool - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59

mmmmm kool
waise im surprised abhi tak neither chandni nor kamini the kameenee or tara r pregz wid somebody elese's hubbyz baccha

kekta mata aisa kiye bina serial complete kaise kar sakti hain😆

Edited by koolgal_anisha - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolgal_anisha

mmmmm kool
waise im surprised abhi tak neither chandni nor kamini the kameenee or tara r pregz wid somebody elese's hubbyz baccha

kekta mata aisa kiye bina serial complete kaise kar sakti hain😆



😆Den Chand vill be so unhappy on knowing about Tara's pregnancy dat Chand n rohan vill lev 4 Jalandhar n den after sum 50-75 episodes of crying der'll be a generation leap of 20 yrs in vich Chand finally returns to Mumbai......n den after 10 epis dey vill finally meet n Adi vill be shocked to c Chand alive as he thot she died in a train/bus accident😆

[Im now sooooo glad dat Kekta is not producin IC]

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