IF KEKTA TAKES OVER PROD OF IC.(PART 12) - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Suvi.... 😊

Mazaa aa raha hai.........you are doing a fantastic job. I am enjoying it thororughly.

You know how to hook people 😊 😊 .
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanx ppl 😛 .Wait for the next part 😉 .i ll b posting it soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I can say nuthin but plzzz post d nxt part fast.....its sooo gud dat i cant stop vaitin 4 d nxt part!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Rohan heads for the room.

Rohan has reached outside the room n tabhi Adi cums outof the room.Both of them r surprised to each other

A:- Tum yahan?I mean tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

R:- Nahi vo main aaise hi.

the door is open n he sees Chand inside.

R:- Chandini yahan.

A:- haan vo actually main i mean uski....

R:- (Very angry.)Ohhh to tum aur vo saath saath the.Veryy gud aur main pagalon ki tarah Chandini ko dhoondh raha tha.(He watches Chand's mobile in Adi's hand.) oh now i understad y Chandini was not picking up the phone.

A:- Kya keh rahe ho? hav u gone crazy.Tum Chandini par shak kar rahe ho.Tumhara dimaag to nahi kharab ho gaya hai?

R:- haan pehle i was mad to think that Chandini has moved on bt now i hav realised that she is still stuck up wid her past.Aur vaise bhi mujhe use itni umeed karni bhi nahi chahiye thi.

A:-tum chandini ko galat samajh rahe ho.

R:- maine ab chandini ko sahi samjha.Vo dhokebaaz hai.

A:- Rohan(n he holds his collar.) Dun't say a word against Chandini.

everyone in the party is shocked to c both of them arguing like this.media there creates an issue of it n this incident gets highlited.

Adi asks everyone to leave as party is over now.
Adi Chand ko uske ghar chod kar aata hai.

NEXT DAY:- Chand discovers wat all ahppened in the party frm Ami who was also there in the party.Adi told her everything.She calls Adi.

C:- hello Adi!

A:- Oh Chandini! i m sorry kal vo main gusse mein rohan se kuch zyaada hi bol gaya.I m really sorry.Dekho tum naaraz mat hoona.

C:- Ab main kuch bolon.main tumse bilkul naraz nahi hoon.I trust u completely aur mujhe pata hai ki tum kabhi kuch aaisa nahi karoge jis se mujhe koi takleef ho.

Maine to tumhe thanx kehne ke liye phone kiya tha.

ADI dusn't kno how to react.

C:- Theek hai Adi main phone rakhti hoon.bye.

She then calls ROHAN.

C:- hello rohan!

R:- oh tum! Tumhe time mil gaya apne Adi se ya phir usne tumhe chod diya.

C:- Wat r u saying Rohan?

R:- Kyun kuch galat kaha maine.sach hi to keh raha hoon.hai na.jao tum apne Adi ke paas hi jaao.

C:- U r disgusting.(Puts down the phone.)

Next day:-(Khanna house.)Tara reaches there.kamini welcums her n they both sit in the drawing room.Chand also reaches there wid her resignation letter in her hands.

K:- tumhe sharam nahi aati.tum phir yahan aa gayi.

Adi tabhi vahan pahunchta hai n he asks his bhabhi to behave herself.kamini gets angry.Tara n kamini move frm there to a room near beside that haal.

A:- Chandini tum.

C:- Vo main apna resignation tumhe dene aai thi.

A:- Kya hua? Rohan se baat hui.

C:- Ab sab kuch khatam ho gaya hai.

A:- Dun't worry sab kuch theek ho jayega.
Adi calls rohan n asks him to cum to a place as he wants to meet him.Adi then asks chand to get ready as they ll both go 2gther to the place.

tara n kamini overhear there conversation.

T:- Tumne to kaha tha sab theek ho jaayega bt c Chandini ab bhi Adi par trust karti hai.

k:- main kya karun? maine to puri koshish lkar li inhe alag karne ki par......

t:- ab jo karna hai vo main karoongi.

tara leaves.

Wat is in the mind of Tara.Will chand n Rohan unite.Discover this in next part. 😊 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
You are a fabulous writer dear. 👏 👏 👏

Lots of Love
Preeti
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
damn gud yaar.......ur fic is gettin mor n more interestin......totally hats off 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanx ppl.I ll b posting the next part tom positively.Arey yeh tut ka home work karte karte to mera fuse ud jayega😡.neways i ll post the next part tom.

THANX ONCE AGAIN. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i know suvi.....hw is such a pain in the ***.....bt d bst part of ur fics r dat der rnt ny bloopers as in d original ic 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tara cals sumone n givs him sum orders.

tara then calls Rohan.

T:- Hi Rohan! tum abhi kahan par ho?

R:- Mam actually i hav sum personal work.

T:- i kno ur personal work aur isiliye hi maine tumhe phone kiya tha.Adi ne tumhare liye msg diy hai ki vo aaj tumse nahi mil paayega.

R:- Wat??? Par mam Adi ne to mujhe khud cal karke kaha tha ki he wants to meet me.

T:- haan vo tumse hi milne aa raha tha par vo jo deligates ka grp kal aane wala tha vo aaj aa gaya hai isilye he had to leave immediately for the meeting.

R:- Bt Mam.

T:- Rohan maine kaha na.Aur tum immediately office aao.Jo contract humein karan hai uske tum manager ho isilye tum abhi office aao.

R:- Ok! mam.

Rohan tries Adi's no. bt its out of reach.

Rohan then leaves for office.

Adi n Chand hav reached the place n they r waiting for Rohan.

C:- Adi mujhe nahi lagta hai ki Rohan aayega.Chalo yahan se.
Aur yeh kaun si deserted place par tum ne yeh meeting fix ki hai?(remeber his phone is out of reach.)

A:- Chandini Rohan aayega.Todha intezaar kar lete hain.

C:-(Bit angry.) Fine.Tumhe jo karna hai vo karo.Vaise bhi tumne kab meri baat mani hai jo ab manoge.hamesha apne man ki hi karna.Tum bhi na.....(She suddenly checks herself.)

I m sorry.

A:- Its ok.

There is silence bt tabhi the silence is broken by a gun shot.

Who has been shot?Is it Adi or Chandini to discover it wait for the next part.
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PS:- Guys yeh shot karne wala idea i thought first bt in IC ke writers ne meri story chura li 😡 😉 .Bt sach mein main jhooth nahi bol rahi hoon. 😛 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
ur fic is gettin mor n mor interestin day by day suvi.......hats off.......damn gud 👏

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