IF KEKTA TAKES OVER PROD OF IC.(PART 12) - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Adi is helping Chand to go upstairs. Chand is better than before bt still her condition is not very gud. Tara is witnessing all these.She is getting jealous n worried coz her plan is not on the rite track.

A :- let me call the doctor.

C:- Its ok Adi. I ll b fine.

Adi takes Chand to the room .He makes her sit on the bed.He gives her a glass of water.

C:- thanx Adi.

A:- acha ab tum itni formal ho gayi ho mujhse.

C:- Nahin vo main. I mean.

A:- I kno ab tum mujhse pyaar to dur mujhe apna dost bhi nahi manti.

Tara also heads for that room bt sum of her imp guests arrive n she has to attend them. Tara is trying Kamini's number bt its busy.Tara is now getting impatient.


Where is Kamini? Wat ll happen to their plan? Sumthing ll happen in the party which ll change the life of Adi n Chandini. Bt wat?????????

Wait for the next part.........................

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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
This is the fifth part bt no response yet. 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
Super Kool, relax.....

Dont cry. 😆

Post the next part fast.............I am anxiously waiting for it. 😛

Good work 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Arrey yaar don end ur stories in such a suspense......it keeps me eagerly waitin 4 d nxt part

Jokes apart....damn gud......keep it up!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Adi n Chand are in the room.

A:- Chandini main ab bhi tumse pyaar karta hoon.

C:-(Who is not in her full senses.) I also luv u Adi.

Adi is smiles bt then he realises he is getting selfish.Chand is Rohan's fiancee n he shud not talk like this.Bt then in other moment he think

A:-(Thinking aloud.) To kya hua? Chandini Rohan se pyaar nahi karti.Vo to mujhe chahti hai.

Par vo to abhi poore hosh mein bhi nahi hai.No no I m wrong. before my luv takes over my composure n balance i shud leave frm here.He is abt to leave bt suddenly Chand's cel rings.Rohan was calling her.

A:-(In dilemma.) Kya karoon? Shall i pick up the phone or not.(He cuts the phone.)

kamini is attending sum guests.Tara approaches her.

Tara:- Tum yahan guests attend karo aur vahan humara plan mitti mein mil gaya hai.

Kamini:- (Quiet relaxed.)Kya hua? Y r u getting so hysterical?

Tara:- Adi Chandini saath saath hain.(She tells the whole incident to Kamini.)

kamini:- (Bit worried bt the she givs a cruel smile.) Tum yahi chahti ho na ki Adi Chandini alag ho jaayein.yahi hoga.Phir Kya farak padta hai ki Adi Chandini se nafrat kare ya Chandini Adi se?

Tara:-(Confused.) Kya matlab?????/

kamini:- Tum bas dekhti jaao mein kya karti hoon.Just wait and watch? 😉

U ppl also just wait n watch.kya sach mein Chandini Adi se nafrat karegi ya things ll go the other way round.To get answers to these questions wait for the next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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way toooooooooooooo go suvi....i juzz chcked the entire thing.....u ve done an amazing job yar....

plz continue.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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im now feelin ur fic is mor addictive dan IC itself.......plz post d next part fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Super kool Suvarna.

post the parts jaldi jaldi. Loving it. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx to u all for appreciation 🤗 .It means a lot.I ll b posting the next part by evening. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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In the room

Adi is still in dilemma.He is looking at Chand.He recalls their beatuful moments.His eyes get filled wid tears.He changes his decision of leaving the room.he sits beside Chand n just watches her.He then giv her an affectionate look n puts his hand over her forehead.Chand smiles.(Must b having a gud dream.)

In the party hall

Kamini is searching for sum one.Rohan is standing near the bar table.He is constantly trying Chand's number.

Kamini:- Hello Rohan! Kuch pareshaan lag rahe ho.Kya baat hai?

Rohan:- Kuch nahi mam vo Chandini kahin dikh nahi rahi or na hi phone pick up kar rahi hai.

Kamini:- Acha vaise Adi bhi kahin dikh nahi raha pata nahin kahan gaya.kahin dono saath nahi nahi its not possible.

Rohan gets worried.

Kamini:-(Smiles.) Arey tum pareshaan kyun ho rahe ho? Maine yeh thodi na kaha hai ki dono saath hi honge.

Arey uper wale room ka darwaza kaise khula.Rohan plz jaakar use band kar do na.

Rohan:- Ok mam.

Wat ll Rohan c inside the room?will it change their lives?Wait for the next part.😊

Edited by Super Kool - 19 years ago

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