Aryan-Imlie/Arylie OS - Dil Kya Kare - Link to New SS @ Pg 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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These two have my heart, and your OS makes it beat. The dialogues, the scene, everything was so in tune with what they are. I loved it.❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was heavy on the drama, but appreciated the translations and hopefulness of this story.👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Where i didn't get it

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priti1610

Where i didn't get it


What you didn't get dear?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aapne abhi koi upload kiya kya... Subhe wala i get it...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This OS is beautiful! The detailed description of emotions are really beautiful!


Their argument was really cute. They both definitely become like kids when they fight! Arpita has seen Aryan having feelings for Imlie,but Aryan doesn't want to accept it! You have explained it beautifully by saying that he may be afraid that he may lose someone dear to him.


I have always wondered why they don't show Imlie dealing with trauma after all the stuff she has faced. They just "brush it under the carpet" so to say! Glad she got a chance to fall weak after the trauma and she had someone to show her she is important and special enough to take care of!


This is really a beautiful write up! Will be reading it again!


Thanks for the tag! 🙂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priti1610

Aapne abhi koi upload kiya kya... Subhe wala i get it...


Maine wahi do posts update kari hain.. First and Second

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: happiness1

This OS is beautiful! The detailed description of emotions are really beautiful!


Their argument was really cute. They both definitely become like kids when they fight! Arpita has seen Aryan having feelings for Imlie,but Aryan doesn't want to accept it! You have explained it beautifully by saying that he may be afraid that he may lose someone dear to him.


I have always wondered why they don't show Imlie dealing with trauma after all the stuff she has faced. They just "brush it under the carpet" so to say! Glad she got a chance to fall weak after the trauma and she had someone to show her she is important and special enough to take care of!


This is really a beautiful write up! Will be reading it again!


Thanks for the tag! 🙂


Thanks a lot dear for your words of appreciation 🤗 because honestly I am still not sure how this part has been shaped it.. It was suppose to be the part 2 of my previous OS but things didn't came out the way I wanted and hence I posted it altogether as a new OS...


I am glad you liked it❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Then i have read it sorry i thought koi aur new post kiya hai aapne

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: komald718

These two have my heart, and your OS makes it beat. The dialogues, the scene, everything was so in tune with what they are. I loved it.❤


Thank you so much dearie.. I am glad you liked it 🤗

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