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Beautifully written 👏so emotional...loved it 😍Thanku so much dear😍

Originally posted by: chotoranii

This was really good! I understood all the short dialogues but would it be too much to ask for the English of all the long dialogues: I understood some of it but would love to understand it the way you meant. If it’s too much trouble no worries! I hope to see more of your writing!

Not an issue… I will put the subtitles for you🤗… Just give me a day time😊

That was soo beautiful 🤧

Like i remembered you write soulfully.

Now I'm going to gloat a bit for goading encouraging you into writing on these two. 🤭🤭 Proud of myself.

Loved loved loved theses lines.

“Ghar chalein ABP?”

It was my dream to see this on the episode, anyways we have fanfics to fulfill our incomplete dreams from episodes.

It seems like both her past and future are there at the same time and she being the present has to choose to whether she still wants to live in the past or move forward towards her future.

Also this is my another favourite para... It's a take from the episode that I totally missed.

And lastly, absolutely loved imlie's realisation about both men. I know it's going to be a long journey in the serial and have fastened my seatbelt for the same, but this was comforting for the time being. ❤️

Tagging few behnas to read this gem.

Originally posted by: SundariP

That was soo beautiful 🤧

Like i remembered you write soulfully.

Now I'm going to gloat a bit for goading encouraging you into writing on these two. 🤭🤭 Proud of myself.

Loved loved loved theses lines.

“Ghar chalein ABP?”

It was my dream to see this on the episode, anyways we have fanfics to fulfill our incomplete dreams from episodes.

It seems like both her past and future are there at the same time and she being the present has to choose to whether she still wants to live in the past or move forward towards her future.

Also this is my another favourite para... It's a take from the episode that I totally missed.

And lastly, absolutely loved imlie's realisation about both men. I know it's going to be a long journey in the serial and have fastened my seatbelt for the same, but this was comforting for the time being. ❤️

Tagging few behnas to read this gem.

Awww... Thank you so much Dearie 🤗

Your detailed comment made my writing worth ❤️

And as for your favorite para then that's what came to my mind when I saw that scene.. That scene kind of resembled Imlie being on cross roads where she has two ways - Either go back to Past or head towards Future😊

Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment and Thank you for pushing me to write once again🤗

Love you Dher Sara ❤️

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Not an issue… I will put the subtitles for you🤗… Just give me a day time😊

Originally posted by: raveena0605

So good..beautiful written..Imlie ko kabhi apni gussa nahi dekhne dete hain write all the time Aditya and his so called love..ki baat hoti hain.

Thank you Dear.. Glad you Liked it 🤗

Of the many gems in this story in addition to the heartfelt Ghar chalein ABP...Apne Ghar...

I loved this one:

Islie ab humaare upar na to koi farz hai.. na karz.. aur na hi..ye teesri baat udhaar rahi...

I loved your take on this scene Aakriti. Wish the writers would keep them in character at all times, just like this. Loved your writing style. Welcome to the Arylie group of writers. 🤗❤️ I hope you keep giving us more such lovely stories. ARYLIE all the way, baby!!

Can I make one ittusa bada request? I know there are many who cannot read or process Hindi dialogs. @komald gets around that by putting the english translation at the end of each sentence in parenthesis. Maybe you can do the same, so its an easier read for some of us? I would hate it if people skipped over such a lovely piece of writing because they can't read it in Hindi. I admit, sometimes I labor over long hindi dialogs too 😳

Originally posted by: RainFire125

First of all this was fantastic Aakriti!!! So glad that you started writing and I am getting to read this. I wish that iska 5% bhi play hota with respect to Aryan I would have cried in that scene. I know it's not the right time for Arylie in that aspect but what you wrote was so so nice to visualize 🤗

And kudos to Sundari for pushing you to write again!! 👏👏

Thank you Dearie.... It feels good to be back again 🤗... I am so happy that I did justice to your expectations

Originally posted by: Noredink

Very nice☺️. I almost hear Aryan saying silently to Imlie:

Sahaj hai seedhi

Raah par chalna

Dekh ke uljhan

Bach ke nikalna

Koi ye chahe

Maane na maane

Bahut hai mushkil

Girke sambhalna

Aa Ab laut chalen

And Imlie: Akkadbagge, chal ghar chalen ❤️

Thank you so much dearie 🤗

Originally posted by: nmurali

So good, Imlie telling off Adi is amazing. I mean the dude still will not get it but she said her piece. Also unlike the show I loved how Aryan stayed and brought Imlie back with him. Would you do a part where they are back at R Mansion and having their little chit-chats, nok-jhoks..😊

First of all.. Thank you so much for liking it as I was not sure that whether it really came out well or not and second I will keep your request in mind and Will try to come up with something 🤗