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Pooja you actually managed to lure her to this 🤧😂 manna parega tujhe!

Res

The title tho..screaming 💓

Will get back to it soon 😊🤗

Amazing 🤩

You wrote everything we wanted imlie to say. Right from remembering everything Aryan did for her to choosing him❤️

Especially the PD part. It had left a very bad taste. But reading this has made it better.

Do write more🤗

Gotta say, you have presented us with an amazing take on the scene, something we all wished happened, but we all knew wouldn't.

The way you freed Imlie from Aditya, and consequently from the Tripathis, a standing ovation.

Welcome back to the land of writing, we hope you enjoy it as much as we enjoyed your work and give us more AryLie content to drool over.

Thank You for Writing This....❤️

I was so blow away by the story also my Hindi is not good but I tried to understand the conversation. It would have been nice if you could translate the Hindi into English.

The story is amazing because it should have been the conversation which gives more depth than what was shown on 📺.

The difference between Aditya and Aryan so world apart, one who wanted to keep her caged while the other was willing to set her free and come back on her own will to him and the family.

Hello Dearies... As per Demands from most of you I have updated subtitles in the dialogues... Now I hope you will not feel trouble reading it 😊

And once again.. Thanks a Ton for showering all your Love on me and this story 🤗

Luv Aakriti ❤️

Originally posted by: Priti1610

Thank you sundari to motivate her... You wrote so good and so amazing... This all we wanted from makers all the conversation between aditya n imlie was necessary yes now she has her own home... Where she gets unconditional love and soon she will realize her love to aryan.. Keep udating here bcoz we need such a amazing writer... 😍😍

Thank you so much Dearie for your lovely comment 🤗... I will try my best to come up with something more for sure ❤️

Originally posted by: Juwii29

This is how I wish the conversation went. With Aryan there too witness it all. Who knew the words Chal Ghar Chalein would hold so much power. Ooooof welcome back to the world of writing!! This was so good! Can’t wait to read more your work! ❤️

That's exactly what I wanted in the show and hence this Idea came into my mind...

Thank you so much dear for all the love... Hopefully will try to be regular ❤️

Originally posted by: egle

Welcome to the writer's club (or welcome again?)

We have the best readers and writers here so it's exciting to see another one join the madness!

Ok, as I went through each dialogue, my reactions went from

hmm, oh, ok, yes, very good, haila, Haila, HAILA!, KYA MAST BAAT BOLI, JE FIIIIRE!!!!

I loved how you started the conversation with Aryan asking her to come home, and then turned them back full circle with Imlie asking him the same thing. That was smooth. So very well done.

There were some beautiful dialogues in there but the one that has my heart is:

Wo Imlie jise na to ab aapki fikr hai aur na hi zarurat.. Jo ab apna raasta khud chunegi aur usi chune hue raaste par hi chalegi.. Us insaan ke saath jisne kabhi uski udaan ko baandhne ki koshish nahi kari balki use pankh diye taaki wo aur uncha ud sake.

Now I'm going to be dreaming about some version of these dialogues making it into the show.

First of all thanks a lot for the warm welcome 🤗

I am new to this forum but now on IF as I was on kind of Vanvaas from many years 😆

And Secondly thanks a lot for all the love you have showered on this story... I am so glad that you liked it... The Song "Chal Ghar Chalein" (also the title of this story 😆) is my favorite song and when I was listening to that song an Idea came to my mind and I kind if shaped it like this... I am glad you loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: mahiaana

Res

The title tho..screaming 💓

Will get back to it soon 😊🤗

No Issues.. I will be waiting 😳