Arylie FF: Second Chances - IMPORTANT NOTE - Page 15

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Posted: 3 years ago

Abhi mahi par atey hei....give me back my sista! Give my sista back! Ammi ne jarur galti se meri twinny ko hospital chor ayi


Little swimmers 😂 i can never use this swim word Normally from now...or see a swimmer swimming and feel normal. Nothing feels normal about this swimmer word anymore 😭😂


Imlu's pool...and aru's sperms swimming there....oh my god she changed the whole conceiving image/process for me 😂 biology book who?


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Yeh heavy agreement kab khatam hoga 😭🥺 mujhe hi kaisi ajeeb tension tension si laag rahi hei...imlu pe yeh torture na kar bechari ..iske liye sacchi mei bura lagta hei

Ek woh serial wali...irritate karti hei

And teri story wali ..innocence si ladki ...too naive for this cruel world...

But wait the way she quickly changed that embarrassing situation into a bravado one. Aryan impress na hoke jaye kaha

Naive hei innocent hei....thori dari sehmi si hei (due to her situation) .but dimaag se strong hei...knows how to take a stand...how to give it back...


Your highness,

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Jis tarha se tune naive and innocent + strong headed ko add kiya. Itv to apne F L ko innocent dekhane ki chakkar mei gobar bana deta hei dimag se.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Btw you sure

3 times would be enough? I mean I'm not too familiar with those med infos....


But those lil swimmers are strong enough? Right? Umm if you want...we can have some practical testing before.... natural regular way ...not those ivf uvf ones..imma standing in line ...I'm just saying ..you know...if you need a helping hand 🤧

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mahii!! bas kar meri behen. Thoda sa bullying kiya, toh maar daalegi kya hasa hasa ke. Are you serious about that last question? I will PM you with a clinical answer if you are. 🤣

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PPLEASE tag this mature!! Sending you info.

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Hellluuu M,

Finally catching up after a long, long time and we are already halfway there in the process of Surrogacy.

First of all, absolutely loving the accuracy of the medical details, like that's SO, SO REFRESHING.

I know it might help to write with with your background but the way you make it accessible to us as well, like make it easier for us to understand is noteworthy. No bits were boring but all of it was crisp and to the point.

Poor Imlie, it must be daunting on her. Especially since she is fiercely protective of her modesty, and then to discuss her personal details especially a topic like her own conception must be a tough pill to swallow.

Ohhh, Aryan is deffo attracted. Taking notice of her appearance and all but he is a true businessman as well, drives a lenient but hard bargain. Loved how you kept his characteristics intact.


Loved Dr Verma in this chapter and the previous chapter as well, the world would definitely be a better special place especially India, if we all get Gynecologists like her. She is professional but caring. The trauma Imlie suffered after the intrusive procedures, were really impactful. Her anxiety and sadness was raw and palpable.

But love her group of friends, so happy that they are there for her. ❤️ She needs all the support she can !


Ohh, also was that a little shoutout to cannon when Narmada and Arpita turned out to be AryLie shippers ?! NICE TOUCH, that one.


The surrogate and the parent falling in love will be complex for sure but really loved how you developed this story so far ! This is getting addictive. But glad that I had so many chapters so savour.


Thank you so much for taking out the time to write this M 🤗

Take loads of lovee,

Lisa

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Hellluuu M,

Finally catching up after a long, long time and we are already halfway there in the process of Surrogacy.

First of all, absolutely loving the accuracy of the medical details, like that's SO, SO REFRESHING.

I know it might help to write with with your background but the way you make it accessible to us as well, like make it easier for us to understand is noteworthy. No bits were boring but all of it was crisp and to the point.

Poor Imlie, it must be daunting on her. Especially since she is fiercely protective of her modesty, and then to discuss her personal details especially a topic like her own conception must be a tough pill to swallow.

Ohhh, Aryan is deffo attracted. Taking notice of her appearance and all but he is a true businessman as well, drives a lenient but hard bargain. Loved how you kept his characteristics intact.


Loved Dr Verma in this chapter and the previous chapter as well, the world would definitely be a better special place especially India, if we all get Gynecologists like her. She is professional but caring. The trauma Imlie suffered after the intrusive procedures, were really impactful. Her anxiety and sadness was raw and palpable.

But love her group of friends, so happy that they are there for her. ❤️ She needs all the support she can !


Ohh, also was that a little shoutout to cannon when Narmada and Arpita turned out to be AryLie shippers ?! NICE TOUCH, that one.


The surrogate and the parent falling in love will be complex for sure but really loved how you developed this story so far ! This is getting addictive. But glad that I had so many chapters so savour.


Thank you so much for taking out the time to write this M 🤗

Take loads of lovee,

Lisa


Awwwiee! Lisa, welcome to Second Chances. I commented on a my alumni WA group the other day when I saw that one my friend's son was now going to attend our alma mater and said, something to the effect of many blessings and may you turn out to be an intelligent but compassionate doc. And guess what, I was made fun of for being such a family medicine doc. Sigh! So, in my vision, all doctors must have compassion. Being ill or outside the parameters of normal health is scary, shouldn't your doctor be holding your hand and walking beside you instead of being a paternalistic boor? So, I will always wish such blessings on any new doctor in the making, that may they always find ways to be compassionate and caring, because one kind word can go a very long way in fostering a relationship with your patient or another human being. Ahhh there I go, on my soap box again. You do that to me every single time!


You've captured Imlie just right. She comes from humble beginnings, is modest in her upbringing, not an innocent but still naive at times. You need to read Chapter 8 to see what Aryan thinks about her .....that is your teaser for the next one. I truly enjoyed writing 8, just because it gets into the meat of an issue which is dear to her and Aryan has a chat with his family. Entrer another one of my favorite characters. 😃 That update will happen tomorrow morning, IST.

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Awwwiee! Lisa, welcome to Second Chances. I commented on a my alumni WA group the other day when I saw that one my friend's son was now going to attend our alma mater and said, something to the effect of many blessings and may you turn out to be an intelligent but compassionate doc. And guess what, I was made fun of for being such a family medicine doc. Sigh! So, in my vision, all doctors must have compassion. Being ill or outside the parameters of normal health is scary, shouldn't your doctor be holding your hand and walking beside you instead of being a paternalistic boor? So, I will always wish such blessings on any new doctor in the making, that may they always find ways to be compassionate and caring, because one kind word can go a very long way in fostering a relationship with your patient or another human being. Ahhh there I go, on my soap box again. You do that to me every single time!


You've captured Imlie just right. She comes from humble beginnings, is modest in her upbringing, not an innocent but still naive at times. You need to read Chapter 8 to see what Aryan thinks about her .....that is your teaser for the next one. I truly enjoyed writing 8, just because it gets into the meat of an issue which is dear to her and Aryan has a chat with his family. Entrer another one of my favorite characters. 😃 That update will happen tomorrow morning, IST.


You mean Welcome back M 🤭 Remember, how apprehensive I was before about Aryan being bitter but the fact that you made him a little bitter but not uncaring has melted all my apprehensions away.


Oh, I left the latest update of Full Circle after seeing your reply (You have me fully trapped with your FFs 🤧🤌) Compassion is definitely a morale booster to the patients and hope that they will be better, it's always a delight to find such Docs, and touchwood since I have spent a lot of my time in hospitals due to someone close, she found the best Docs as well who made her believe that she will be able to cross every obstacle towards her path of recovery despite her age AND SHE DID. But a lot of credit goes to the Docs for providing that encouragement and strength. To understand and feel her side. Now, that's compassion. But the reason I talked about the Gynecologist was because, here in India, they have the worst reputation. I don't know if you have heard about the countless horror stories ?

I have heard such tales from people I know, from shaming unmarried women for being sexually active, not prescribing birth control if not married and even if required for PCOD and such syndroms, in some rural areas : its about the husband stitch.

It gets worse and worse. In such a place, Dr Verma sounds like a dream. Thinking about the patient's consent first, guiding her to make a choice.


It's NEVER soap box, I learn so much from these interactions with you. The previous interaction we had about grief left such a big impression on me that I did something I didn't think I was capable of before. It felt like an achievement and growth, and I know I had to clear my mental barriers but A LOT IF THE CREDIT goes to you. You pushed me forward so I am very grateful. I try to take everything I absorb from here and it's wonderful communicating with you. I feel privileged tbh.


ALSO, ON THAT NOTE SO EXCITED FOR TOMORROW. NEW ENTRY YAYYY.

UPDATE YAAYYY.


LOOKING FORWARD TO TOMORROW

Thanks for penning this down M !

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