Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle
Hellluuu M,
Finally catching up after a long, long time and we are already halfway there in the process of Surrogacy.
First of all, absolutely loving the accuracy of the medical details, like that's SO, SO REFRESHING.
I know it might help to write with with your background but the way you make it accessible to us as well, like make it easier for us to understand is noteworthy. No bits were boring but all of it was crisp and to the point.
Poor Imlie, it must be daunting on her. Especially since she is fiercely protective of her modesty, and then to discuss her personal details especially a topic like her own conception must be a tough pill to swallow.
Ohhh, Aryan is deffo attracted. Taking notice of her appearance and all but he is a true businessman as well, drives a lenient but hard bargain. Loved how you kept his characteristics intact.
Loved Dr Verma in this chapter and the previous chapter as well, the world would definitely be a better special place especially India, if we all get Gynecologists like her. She is professional but caring. The trauma Imlie suffered after the intrusive procedures, were really impactful. Her anxiety and sadness was raw and palpable.
But love her group of friends, so happy that they are there for her. ❤️ She needs all the support she can !
Ohh, also was that a little shoutout to cannon when Narmada and Arpita turned out to be AryLie shippers ?! NICE TOUCH, that one.
The surrogate and the parent falling in love will be complex for sure but really loved how you developed this story so far ! This is getting addictive. But glad that I had so many chapters so savour.
Thank you so much for taking out the time to write this M 🤗
Take loads of lovee,
Lisa