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STRUCK IN CASE 4.1.26
CASE IN COURT 5.1.26
Lokah fame Kalyani Priyadarshan cast opp Ranveer in Pralay
Ikkis flops at the box office
Sudha Chandran's spiritual encounter with Kaali Maa!
SRK explains the actual meaning of most misunderstood word "Jihad"
Started Rewatching Jodha Akbar and addicted once again.Hoping for S2
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Newww girrrlllll in the plot đ€Ł imu đ please write more bhojpuri dialogues black faree đ€©
Aww seriously their friendship is so honest and they say whatever they feel for n don't pretend to be another person infront of each other so pure... N yes i can assume that now imlie she will be jealous further ..wow amazing update
Chap 9-smoke
It was day and half journey, from Mumbai to Delhi and Delhi to Kalka. Imlie was looking out window the breeze kissing her cheeks. Night hasld bestowed upon them.
âImlie khanaâ Ahana called out.
âI made home made food for everyoneâ âpav bhajiâ she smiled. She looked like somebody who loves feeding people. She had big tin with food enough for everyone. Everybody ate heartily satisfied. Anya was busy talking with Aryan they had met after long am sure they have catching upto do. Raja and Sumit were busy looking at some videos , ahana and her chatted to each other. She found out Ahana was ectastic for this trip because her and Sumit hardly gets time to spend with each other infact their lives are so hectic because of Sumitâs profession, they did not even go to honeymoon.
âEnough about me babes, i want to know about you. â
âAre my life is open book am sure Sumit must have told you i work at Bhaskar times as journalist. I live here alone i recently lost my mom .â Her eyes glistened. Ahana kept her hand on her arm as silent empathy âi hardly have friends but now i have feeling you are going to be my bestieâ she winked and smiled.
âOf course, me and Pihu-Vinayak wife meet once a week have a lady night . You can join our oh so boring clubâ
âDont worry we will spice it upâ she laughed.
They continued until 12 am when Sumit called her to sleep. Everybody got up to set up the berth. Aryan and Raja were going to sleep at the bottom, Imlie directly above Aryan and Anya above rajaâs berth. Sumit and Ahana seats were on the parallel the private two berth.
Imlie was tired and sleep came to her in jiffy.
Around 3 or 4 am Imlie wasnt sure, she woke up to go bathroom. She noticed Anya and Aryan both missing. Hmm. She could hardly open her eyes. Once she was done, she didnt notice them while going to bathroom- they were standing at the edge of the entrance of the train door. Both were smoking and chatting seriously. Imlie went upto them her one yes hardly open. âYou two smoke?â
âImlie, look at you hardly can open your eyes and worrying about us smoking. Go sleepâ scolded her.
âAnswer meâ trying to open her eye.
âYeaâanya answered in matter of fact tone
âWell i hate smoking. You guys need to quit.â She grabbed the nastiness (cigrettes)from both of their hands and threw.
âImlie Stopâ Aryan was pissed
âWho gave you right , we can do whatever we want. Pura mood bigad diya. Go sleep âhis voice little louder.
Without saying a word, Imlie scurried from there not caring that she has pissed of Aryan. âWhatver, i am going back to my sleepâ and she slept like a baby.
In morning after all freshen up, Imlie avoided Aryan gaze . She stole on glance, boy he was staring at her like he was about to stab the fork he was eating breakfast with on her hand.
âImlie , idhar aao want to talk to youâ
She sighed and went him near the door.
She folded her hands across her chest.
âWhat was that at night?â
âMujhe smoking nai pasandâ
âSo its none of your businesss, what i do and dont. You are friendâ
âExactly as friend i gave advice and wahi haq se fekaâ
âYouâ
âWhatâ she dared him.
âLook we havnt reached yet and we are fighting Imlie yar. Smoking ek din mein nai jatiâ
âI know that, you can start from todayâshe retorted back
âLike i said meri marzi. Thats end of topic. I do not want to fight.â He sighed rather annoyed
âMe eitherâ she looked outside.
âLets go backâ
He gave her his hand as if to say they patched up. âChalâ
She rolled her eyes when he wasnt looking.
They reached Delhi and settled in their next train without any incidents. They started planning the rest of the journey.
Day 1 they will rest and then explore the town.
Day 2 drive to shimla , explore along the way
Day 3 snow day
Day 4 explore food joints - rajaâs idea
Day 5 hiking and camp at mountain top
Day 6- packing and chill day
Day 7-home!
They all promise to stick to plans. Imlie thougbt otherwise knowing how boys aee sometimes!
Wow trains trip are always beautiful journey its long but joy of traveling in train is something ..aryan is to found of ahana bechari imli plse make a scene na where imlie also get some random guy in train n she too talks so much and there aryan notice imlie being fluent with that guy... I am loving this trip n aryan imlie
Love it. Try to add another male character for imlie like colleague or friend a bit flirtious. We will see aryans reaction as well.
Too early for that, i will get male character but when aryan finally realize he is love it will be more fun right now he wont care much
Chap 10- Gifts
They finally arrived in Kalka. The hotel was pretty decent. Anya and her were going to share the room. They all went out later to the market. Imlie bought things for everyone , she didnt tell them its for the group she went by herself while everybody was busy shopping.
She got ladies the bracelets with charms . She was little biased so she decided to extra charm bracelet to Ahana. For Raja , she got wallet she had seen his almost tored wallet. It would be perfect. For Sumit it was hard because they had hardly interacted so she got him a simple souvenir - it was snow clad mountains with two beautiful couple statue at the foot. She kept Aryan for the last. She had come prepared. She bought a very heavy wooden carved frame it had inticrate designs . The word Family was carved on base. She took out a picture she had gotten from Mr Anil before they had left for the trip. It was a beautiful happy photo of Mr Anil his wife Narmada and Aryan. It was as if the frame was made for this picture it fit perfectly. After paying the shopkeeper, she went to look for the group. Imlie had decided the right moment to give them these gift would be when they will hike up to the mountains and lit a campfire.
Next day , they drove to Shimla it was a exhilarating trip everybody was singing having fun and pulling each other legs. Imlie had started to feel little jealous because Aryan hardly spend time with her. But ofcourse she had to remember her feelings cannot overpower their friendship and she has to be normal.
They visit the snowy mountains, Imlie even tried skiing but she kept falling on her butt. Same with Raja. They had snowball fight which ofcourse Imlie won. Imlie felt free of inhibition. She took a pose by putting both her arms out and looking up at the sky and just consuming the peacful atmosphere. Aryan sneakily took a picture of this moment nobody noticed.
Anya was an ok roomate, Imlie felt inferior. She looked so good everyday with clothes styled perfectly. Imlie wore her salwar kaameez .
Sometimes Anyaâs talked hinted that she doesnt like Imlie. Like once she said â Imlie pura time salwar kaameez how come? Try something new yeh behanji lookâ this could have been said in softer tone but her voice insuiniated something else. Imlie gave her answer ratherly rudely â i can whatver i want . I did not know wearing traditional gives anybody to judge them.â
Aryan came to Anya defende which irked Imlie.
âImlie she was just trying toâ
âIts ok â anya said innocently.
In Imlie mind, she wanted to drop the hot sizzler on her lap. This whole fiasco happened at day four of the trip. That night Anya did not join in her room she went out to look for her worried that she was too rude. She heard her voice in Aryan and Rajaâs room. She put her ears near the door. âYou know Raja, Anya had huge crush on me in college infact i dated her for week. â Aryan called out
âYa, he was so shy back then but after he dated me dont know where the overconfidence came from he was changed manâ
âOf course! You were the hottest girl and i was lucky one to go out with you.â Pride in his voice.
âAap single ho kyaâ Raja interrupted
âHaâ
âMere saath chalo na dateâ Imlie laughed Raja sounded like a teenager. But also a lone tear dropped from her eyes.
She went into her room . Why is it that she had to fell in love? Kyu Sita Maiyya maja aavat rahe tohre ko? She wiped her tear. Envy was churning in her heart. Jealousy wasnt a good emotion it has abilty to break relations. Imlie had hard time sleeping but she also thought of new friends she made in Ahana and Raj. She was thankful for that to Aryan. Anya came early morning, she was drunk she fell on bed and was knocked out. Imlie got up removed her shoes and tucked her in a blanket. She has have good sleep as tomorrow was hike day and they had said they wont reach the mountain too until late evening.
When she woke up, she was surprised Aryan was sitting across on a chair staring at her.
âUth kumkaran, everyone is ready except you. I came to wake you up but you looked so cute like a child so waited so you wake up on your ownâ he said.
âAaj dost ki yaad aagai tumhe?â She taunted upset by his behavior this whole trip.
âMatlabâ he asked
âKuch nai Aru. I will go freshen up and meet you downstairsâ she said sighing.
She got up before he says anything else and left.
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Brace for the next chapter it will be emotional and heartbreaking.đ For imlie
Nice..... I wanted to write SS like u...but first trying a few OS then I will try to OS....its hard to write longer stories... Appreciate your work.. Love it.. Do write more....đ
Love itđđŒđđŒ continue soon