Arylie Fanfic (2)-For the love of you - Chap 34 upt pg 26 - Page 5

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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mltr16


It means, in the process of reading, will come back and edit once I am done. Starting at chapter 1 while I work....so it might be a while.😃


I hope you like the way write.
I love your writing mine is not as good though.😛

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Posted: 3 years ago
#42

Newww girrrlllll in the plot đŸ€Ł imu 😏 please write more bhojpuri dialogues black faree đŸ€©

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

Aww seriously their friendship is so honest and they say whatever they feel for n don't pretend to be another person infront of each other so pure... N yes i can assume that now imlie she will be jealous further ..wow amazing update

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Posted: 3 years ago
#44

Chap 9-smoke

It was day and half journey, from Mumbai to Delhi and Delhi to Kalka. Imlie was looking out window the breeze kissing her cheeks. Night hasld bestowed upon them.

“Imlie khana” Ahana called out.

“I made home made food for everyone” “pav bhaji” she smiled. She looked like somebody who loves feeding people. She had big tin with food enough for everyone. Everybody ate heartily satisfied. Anya was busy talking with Aryan they had met after long am sure they have catching upto do. Raja and Sumit were busy looking at some videos , ahana and her chatted to each other. She found out Ahana was ectastic for this trip because her and Sumit hardly gets time to spend with each other infact their lives are so hectic because of Sumit’s profession, they did not even go to honeymoon.

“Enough about me babes, i want to know about you. “


“Are my life is open book am sure Sumit must have told you i work at Bhaskar times as journalist. I live here alone i recently lost my mom .” Her eyes glistened. Ahana kept her hand on her arm as silent empathy “i hardly have friends but now i have feeling you are going to be my bestie” she winked and smiled.

“Of course, me and Pihu-Vinayak wife meet once a week have a lady night . You can join our oh so boring club”

“Dont worry we will spice it up” she laughed.


They continued until 12 am when Sumit called her to sleep. Everybody got up to set up the berth. Aryan and Raja were going to sleep at the bottom, Imlie directly above Aryan and Anya above raja’s berth. Sumit and Ahana seats were on the parallel the private two berth.


Imlie was tired and sleep came to her in jiffy.

Around 3 or 4 am Imlie wasnt sure, she woke up to go bathroom. She noticed Anya and Aryan both missing. Hmm. She could hardly open her eyes. Once she was done, she didnt notice them while going to bathroom- they were standing at the edge of the entrance of the train door. Both were smoking and chatting seriously. Imlie went upto them her one yes hardly open. “You two smoke?”

“Imlie, look at you hardly can open your eyes and worrying about us smoking. Go sleep” scolded her.

“Answer me” trying to open her eye.

“Yea”anya answered in matter of fact tone

“Well i hate smoking. You guys need to quit.” She grabbed the nastiness (cigrettes)from both of their hands and threw.

“Imlie Stop” Aryan was pissed

“Who gave you right , we can do whatever we want. Pura mood bigad diya. Go sleep “his voice little louder.

Without saying a word, Imlie scurried from there not caring that she has pissed of Aryan. “Whatver, i am going back to my sleep” and she slept like a baby.


In morning after all freshen up, Imlie avoided Aryan gaze . She stole on glance, boy he was staring at her like he was about to stab the fork he was eating breakfast with on her hand.


“Imlie , idhar aao want to talk to you”

She sighed and went him near the door.

She folded her hands across her chest.

“What was that at night?”

“Mujhe smoking nai pasand”

“So its none of your businesss, what i do and dont. You are friend”

“Exactly as friend i gave advice and wahi haq se feka”

“You”

“What” she dared him.

“Look we havnt reached yet and we are fighting Imlie yar. Smoking ek din mein nai jati”

“I know that, you can start from today”she retorted back

“Like i said meri marzi. Thats end of topic. I do not want to fight.” He sighed rather annoyed

“Me either” she looked outside.

“Lets go back”

He gave her his hand as if to say they patched up. “Chal”

She rolled her eyes when he wasnt looking.


They reached Delhi and settled in their next train without any incidents. They started planning the rest of the journey.

Day 1 they will rest and then explore the town.

Day 2 drive to shimla , explore along the way

Day 3 snow day

Day 4 explore food joints - raja’s idea

Day 5 hiking and camp at mountain top

Day 6- packing and chill day

Day 7-home!

They all promise to stick to plans. Imlie thougbt otherwise knowing how boys aee sometimes!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

Wow trains trip are always beautiful journey its long but joy of traveling in train is something ..aryan is to found of ahana bechari imli plse make a scene na where imlie also get some random guy in train n she too talks so much and there aryan notice imlie being fluent with that guy... I am loving this trip n aryan imlie

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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

Love it. Try to add another male character for imlie like colleague or friend a bit flirtious. We will see aryans reaction as well.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

Too early for that, i will get male character but when aryan finally realize he is love it will be more fun right now he wont care much

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Posted: 3 years ago
#48

Chap 10- Gifts


They finally arrived in Kalka. The hotel was pretty decent. Anya and her were going to share the room. They all went out later to the market. Imlie bought things for everyone , she didnt tell them its for the group she went by herself while everybody was busy shopping.


She got ladies the bracelets with charms . She was little biased so she decided to extra charm bracelet to Ahana. For Raja , she got wallet she had seen his almost tored wallet. It would be perfect. For Sumit it was hard because they had hardly interacted so she got him a simple souvenir - it was snow clad mountains with two beautiful couple statue at the foot. She kept Aryan for the last. She had come prepared. She bought a very heavy wooden carved frame it had inticrate designs . The word Family was carved on base. She took out a picture she had gotten from Mr Anil before they had left for the trip. It was a beautiful happy photo of Mr Anil his wife Narmada and Aryan. It was as if the frame was made for this picture it fit perfectly. After paying the shopkeeper, she went to look for the group. Imlie had decided the right moment to give them these gift would be when they will hike up to the mountains and lit a campfire.

Next day , they drove to Shimla it was a exhilarating trip everybody was singing having fun and pulling each other legs. Imlie had started to feel little jealous because Aryan hardly spend time with her. But ofcourse she had to remember her feelings cannot overpower their friendship and she has to be normal.

They visit the snowy mountains, Imlie even tried skiing but she kept falling on her butt. Same with Raja. They had snowball fight which ofcourse Imlie won. Imlie felt free of inhibition. She took a pose by putting both her arms out and looking up at the sky and just consuming the peacful atmosphere. Aryan sneakily took a picture of this moment nobody noticed.


Anya was an ok roomate, Imlie felt inferior. She looked so good everyday with clothes styled perfectly. Imlie wore her salwar kaameez .

Sometimes Anya’s talked hinted that she doesnt like Imlie. Like once she said “ Imlie pura time salwar kaameez how come? Try something new yeh behanji look” this could have been said in softer tone but her voice insuiniated something else. Imlie gave her answer ratherly rudely “ i can whatver i want . I did not know wearing traditional gives anybody to judge them.”

Aryan came to Anya defende which irked Imlie.

“Imlie she was just trying to”

“Its ok “ anya said innocently.

In Imlie mind, she wanted to drop the hot sizzler on her lap. This whole fiasco happened at day four of the trip. That night Anya did not join in her room she went out to look for her worried that she was too rude. She heard her voice in Aryan and Raja’s room. She put her ears near the door. “You know Raja, Anya had huge crush on me in college infact i dated her for week. “ Aryan called out

“Ya, he was so shy back then but after he dated me dont know where the overconfidence came from he was changed man”

“Of course! You were the hottest girl and i was lucky one to go out with you.” Pride in his voice.


“Aap single ho kya” Raja interrupted

“Ha”

“Mere saath chalo na date” Imlie laughed Raja sounded like a teenager. But also a lone tear dropped from her eyes.


She went into her room . Why is it that she had to fell in love? Kyu Sita Maiyya maja aavat rahe tohre ko? She wiped her tear. Envy was churning in her heart. Jealousy wasnt a good emotion it has abilty to break relations. Imlie had hard time sleeping but she also thought of new friends she made in Ahana and Raj. She was thankful for that to Aryan. Anya came early morning, she was drunk she fell on bed and was knocked out. Imlie got up removed her shoes and tucked her in a blanket. She has have good sleep as tomorrow was hike day and they had said they wont reach the mountain too until late evening.

When she woke up, she was surprised Aryan was sitting across on a chair staring at her.


“Uth kumkaran, everyone is ready except you. I came to wake you up but you looked so cute like a child so waited so you wake up on your own” he said.

“Aaj dost ki yaad aagai tumhe?” She taunted upset by his behavior this whole trip.

“Matlab” he asked

“Kuch nai Aru. I will go freshen up and meet you downstairs” she said sighing.

She got up before he says anything else and left.


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Brace for the next chapter it will be emotional and heartbreaking.😭 For imlie

Edited by blackfaree - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#49

Nice..... I wanted to write SS like u...but first trying a few OS then I will try to OS....its hard to write longer stories... Appreciate your work.. Love it.. Do write more....😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Love itđŸ‘đŸŒđŸ‘đŸŒ continue soon

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