Arylie TS: The demons of my past, part 2 updated on page 5 - Page 2

Wow..... Amazing OS...Update soon.....

Love it, I want to know how she reacts. A part of me wished in the actual story she finds out before they get married and supports him and this becomes a catalyst for them to get closer.

Originally posted by: nmurali

Love it, I want to know how she reacts. A part of me wished in the actual story she finds out before they get married and supports him and this becomes a catalyst for them to get closer.

Actually me too. I would like to see this happen early on in their friendship phase. But because this is sort of related to the bigger SS I am writing, I tried to stick to the concept a little. So glad you liked it 🤗

Have been a silent reader/admirer of your writing style. The way you portray emotions is amazing!

I actually hope something like this happens in the show and Aryan is able to cry properly and be able to deal with his pent up grief!

Thank you so much. I am glad this story inspired you to unmute yourself. I truly enjoy hearing your thoughts and opinions 🤗

This os was much needed then any other... Wow i hope makers revealed the secret just like you did so beautifully you decribe i am speechless right now.. Sorry i am busy but i want to shower more words in this os but i will come back soon... Thank you thank you so much this is best love you .you are amazing

Just so outstanding 👏👏👏

Plz update soon👍

That was emotional the pain the heartbreak it could be felt in the words written a family broken wanting to heal but can't so sad.Aryan lost some one he loved respect and trust ,and having to bring Imile into the circle of pain that so heartbreaking.Awesome start beautiful written.

Originally posted by: dumas

That was emotional the pain the heartbreak it could be felt in the words written a family broken wanting to heal but can't so sad.Aryan lost some one he loved respect and trust ,and having to bring Imile into the circle of pain that so heartbreaking.Awesome start beautiful written.

Thanks @dumas. Tonight I get to meditate on Imlie's reaction to this terrible revelation and its implications. Hopefully she will respond in a way that everyone finds in character. 🤗 Appreciate the words of encouragement.

That was very engaging.

This was my favorite line:

"God, why do you have to be such a mountain of a man" she panted as she tried to budge him.

I love a bit of comedy. I think it adds spice to romance.

Very well done again. You must have been typing this a while. Did you take a break since seeing the episode? This was long!