Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 32

Dear M,

The story’s pace is going great.. I loved the chapter where Neel and Aryan warmed up to each other.. ❤️n last two chapters are amazing Aryan and Aditya’s conversation was a needed one.. Even Imlie and Aditya one was also much needed.

Aditya’s inner thoughts while he is fighting his addiction and withdrawal symptoms…

So far…

I forgot to add Neel is such a cutie.. ❤️

Weeee, I’m so excited to be reading ☺️

I love the pace you’ve set with the story and the way you’ve introduced their lives 5 years into the future. It’s believable that Imlie’s ties with the T’s can never be totally severed, considering the fact she’s a half-C; and it’s absolutely believable that Aryan would not stop Imlie from doing something she’s determined to. She wants this connection to the T’s & C’s, and so she’s honored it to the best of her abilities. I like how Aru is measured and contemplative, as well, very much in character. there’s growth, change, and maturity to everyone mentioned 5 years down the line. It’s unfortunate that Adi’s a drunkard but there’s no other way to better physically depict the bitterness and delusion his path in life has taken.

Narmada is a cutie, “Picnic but like in bedroom” 🤣😍


EDIT: this is for chapter 1 — didn’t realize the chapter links were within an actual thread 🤣🤣

C2 thoughts :

I want to add to my thoughts for chapter 1, first: Malini having cancer makes me feel like the negative energy she put out there began eating her up inside 😔


I love how you have weaved this sweet affection within the story. Him inhaling her hair, giving a kiss, observing his “usually bubbly sweetheart” allow for the atmosphere or simple things to speak volumes.

Keeping with Aryan’s normal caring traits, he’s providing Imlie with nourishment and attention work isn’t greater than her. Her undeniable strength isn’t used as an excuse to believe that she’ll be okay or that she will figure out her own way to succeed. He’s not taking the easy way out when it comes to their communication or interactions.

We all must suffer for our sins at some point but I’m curious what Malini wants from Imlie. She’s so unstable

Originally posted by: moksha89

Weeee, I’m so excited to be reading ☺️

I love the pace you’ve set with the story and the way you’ve introduced their lives 5 years into the future. It’s believable that Imlie’s ties with the T’s can never be totally severed, considering the fact she’s a half-C; and it’s absolutely believable that Aryan would not stop Imlie from doing something she’s determined to. She wants this connection to the T’s & C’s, and so she’s honored it to the best of her abilities. I like how Aru is measured and contemplative, as well, very much in character. there’s growth, change, and maturity to everyone mentioned 5 years down the line. It’s unfortunate that Adi’s a drunkard but there’s no other way to better physically depict the bitterness and delusion his path in life has taken.

Narmada is a cutie, “Picnic but like in bedroom” 🤣😍


EDIT: this is for chapter 1 — didn’t realize the chapter links were within an actual thread 🤣🤣

Yayyyyy! You are finally reading my stories!!! Welcome and I hope you enjoy them. Long way to go though and the chapters do tend to be long (Pooja's #1 complaint 🤣). But I pray they are gripping enough to keep you reading! I am so very excited! Writing Chapter 13 as we speak 😃

Oh 🤗 so glad you are lovin' it so far. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and leave me feedback. ❤️

Originally posted by: Anukrissh

Wow, this made me so emotional. You have explained Aditya very well, all his agony, thought process, realisation, guilt etc etc is very well written. I feel so sad for Aditya. He might have had his weakness (who doesn't) but he was a principled man. He lost everything due to his weakness, even himself. Right now he is trying to fight back. Let's see what happens next.

Thanks Anukrissh for always taking the time to comment and reflect on the story. I appreciate it more than you know ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: JananiSanthosh

Beautifully written💜 i always had a thought that what would be AKT pov in this type of situation. You nailed each and every part in style. Now i am eagerly waiting for malini and aditya conversation. Even though i have thought and imagined in so many ways but after reading your pov and story portrayal always amazed me. I am really very eager and excited how you will be bringing their convo or confrontation or guilt or anything.. bigggg clap for your thought process ❤💫 waiting for your future update.......... Ardent Reader 😍

Oh my dear Ardent Reader ❤️ the malini - aditya conversation is one that even I am looking forward to writing. But its not going to happen just yet. There are a few more things to iron out before we get there. Keep reading! I love your comments. 🤗

I loved getting into Aditya’s head. It really made me feel so bad for him, malini, Neel, and imlie! His emotions are so raw yet he doesn’t need to feel that way towards Neel yet can’t help himself. Emotions are high 😭

Originally posted by: Juwii29

I loved getting into Aditya’s head. It really made me feel so bad for him, malini, Neel, and imlie! His emotions are so raw yet he doesn’t need to feel that way towards Neel yet can’t help himself. Emotions are high 😭

@bold: Yaaas! Mission accomplished 😃😃 they are going to stay ramped up until Arylie decide its Epilogue time. 😃

Hi S!! 🤗❤️

Thanks as always for taking the time to comment and your compliments for the story. The Adini conversation will happen in time. I have a couple of things to get out of the way first before I start writing that one. Its going to be very challenging given the head space that Aditya is in. As of now, even I wonder how will he, in a sober state, respond to Malini's plight? Soche ke padi. Bahut soche ke padi.