Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 31

Wow, this made me so emotional. You have explained Aditya very well, all his agony, thought process, realisation, guilt etc etc is very well written. I feel so sad for Aditya. He might have had his weakness (who doesn't) but he was a principled man. He lost everything due to his weakness, even himself. Right now he is trying to fight back. Let's see what happens next.

Awesome chapter

Beautiful writing

I don't know how you do it, but you did. You managed to make me sympathize with this character again, against all odds. This was needed. It's almost like I needed it to reconnect with Aditya- the human, rather than Aditya- the f*ck up.

The simplicity of the situation you created where Aditya finally found out the truth was perfect, and so effective. The nighttime, the bushes, the upchucking.

His thinking that there would be no more children- oooof. That one hit hard. His pain was palpable. His guilt eating at him was obvious. That slow downward spiral he embarked on was so wonderfully explained.

I don't love Aditya, never did. But this side of him- damn I actually felt a little sorry for the fool.

You are beyond talented and it would be a crime if you ever stopped writing.

Beautifully written💜 i always had a thought that what would be AKT pov in this type of situation. You nailed each and every part in style. Now i am eagerly waiting for malini and aditya conversation. Even though i have thought and imagined in so many ways but after reading your pov and story portrayal always amazed me. I am really very eager and excited how you will be bringing their convo or confrontation or guilt or anything.. bigggg clap for your thought process ❤💫 waiting for your future update.......... Ardent Reader 😍

Unres my comment.😀

P.s: how do u tag some1 . Been silent for too long since IF updated itself😳

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Unres my comment.😀

P.s: how do u tag some1 . Been silent for too long since IF updated itself😳

You can tag in the bar below comment box but only on a original comment not while editing a comment.

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Ohh that must be it , I tried in a edited post n it didn't wrk . Thank u for the help 😊

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Ohh that must be it , I tried in a edited post n it didn't wrk . Thank u for the help 😊

Okay, chal ab comment bhi kar, me still waiting aur 4 words mein likhegi to daantungi!

Originally posted by: mltr16

Okay, chal ab comment bhi kar, me still waiting aur 4 words mein likhegi to daantungi!

Unres kardiya on pg 43

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

I have so much to write.

The constant growth of Arylie as partner is so smooth .what really describe their relation is not glossy romance . They grew as one soul, their understanding was the foundation of their relation they walked step by step. Now they are team who rely on each other . Where words doesn't matter coz they knew each other thoughts, views and love. Their trust .

Ek umr ke baad manzil mili

Andheron se ubharne qandil mili.

What Malini is going through is sad . But ye makafat e Amal hai meri jaan . Neel is such a energy booster how his father didn't come to love him is beyond me. You love a child no matter wat the situation is child is innocent no matter what . Adi sure needs help . I hope he grows leaving behind the consequences of his own choices . Neel definitely needs him

Now I shall take my time gushing over Arylie .did I mention Aryan is gem of a person sure imlie landed with a boon .

Love love love it

Ha ha ha ha!! Ye IF lingo meri samajh ke bahar hai. I take back my "bullying" as Pooja calls it.

I had to google Makafat to see what it meant. What an apt word it is for this whole concept, isn't it??

Unfortunately, Aditya is so lost in his grief that at one point he wonders who he had become not to be moved by his own child.

Now where is the gushing over Arylie? Nahi toh you will get another bullying note from me 🤣🤣🤣

No but seriously, I noticed you were reading my stories and reacting but not writing. I am so very grateful to you for taking the time to write your thoughts. I loved the little verse you have included that describe Aryan and Imlie's connect. Thank you again! Keep reading. I hope you remain engrossed in this journey till the end.