Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 16

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Posted: 3 years ago

I am really looking forward for the Rathore family scenes. I am sure they are gonna gel with neel within minutes. And he will be more comfortable with rathores tha chaturvedis 🤣 i am more excited for neel aryan bond 🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: JananiSanthosh

I am really looking forward for the Rathore family scenes. I am sure they are gonna gel with neel within minutes. And he will be more comfortable with rathores tha chaturvedis 🤣 i am more excited for neel aryan bond 🥰


Your wish will be granted in Chapter 7 😘

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Posted: 3 years ago

Very nice as always. I liked Aryan's thoughtfulness. Their chemistry was also very good. As usual felt sad seeing Aditya and Malini's condition. Imlie always thought about others and did what was right in that situation. She never thought about how that decision will affect her. I liked it that you have kept that trait in your story. Do continue writing

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Posted: 3 years ago

Accusation: you misled me


Confession: i cheated!

Edited by SundariP - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

👏☺️How beautifully you have showed their relationship

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Malini is in so much pain... Sometimes I do think that can your pain redeem the acts you made to purposefully cause pain to others?

In 'eye for an eye' the old saying - for stands for restorative behaviour rather than destruction or revenge!

Obviously this is not the best example, because M's pain isn't caused by imlie but fate.... Well maybe I'm stuck in a loop here! Help me.



Honestly didn't like her request that imlie take care of baby ... I know it's insensitive towards the kid who only deserves the best but I think M has a nerve to ask that favor and imlie has no obligation to fulfill it.

Make it super-insensitive in above line.



Ok I take my words back! I'm probably a step behind someone in insensitivity afterall!




Shift focus to my (our) fav couple:

Braiding her hair really? Are there real men who actually know how to braid? Even I learnt that way into my 20s🤪

Bas karo yar ... Aru pehle se itna swoon-worthy hai.... Abb iss dil me kuchh bacha nahi usko Dene ke liye


Ok so this adoption thingy isn't surprising for me (as u know I cheated after being misled by you) so as a punishment no comments on that!


She's needs water while sleeping in his embrace ... Dare I say I know where this is going? Wiggle wiggle 🤨


Whoa whoa whoa ... So you really did mislead me on purpose 😲

Can't believe I'm so naive/idiot!!


Love the way she asks ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SundariP

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Malini is in so much pain... Sometimes I do think that can your pain redeem the acts you made to purposefully cause pain to others?

In 'eye for an eye' the old saying - for stands for restorative behaviour rather than destruction or revenge!

Obviously this is not the best example, because M's pain isn't caused by imlie but fate.... Well maybe I'm stuck in a loop here! Help me.



Honestly didn't like her request that imlie take care of baby ... I know it's insensitive towards the kid who only deserves the best but I think M has a nerve to ask that favor and imlie has no obligation to fulfill it.

Make it super-insensitive in above line.



Ok I take my words back! I'm probably a step behind someone in insensitivity afterall!




Shift focus to my (our) fav couple:

Braiding her hair really? Are there real men who actually know how to braid? Even I learnt that way into my 20s🤪

Bas karo yar ... Aru pehle se itna swoon-worthy hai.... Abb iss dil me kuchh bacha nahi usko Dene ke liye


Ok so this adoption thingy isn't surprising for me (as u know I cheated after being misled by you) so as a punishment no comments on that!


She's needs water while sleeping in his embrace ... Dare I say I know where this is going? Wiggle wiggle 🤨


Whoa whoa whoa ... So you really did mislead me on purpose 😲

Can't believe I'm so naive/idiot!!


Love the way she asks ❤️


I think Malini knows deep down that only Imlie will love Neel as her own, for her that trumps anything else at this point because time is short. Yes she has always been envious of Imlie because she is moral, upright bad golden hearted. Finally for Malini she wants the very best for her son. So yes, she swallows her pride and asks Imlie.


Karma is a very interesting concept indeed. IF you can wrap your head around it, which I can easily having spent years thinking through various spiritual philosophies. I don't claim to have a PhD in it but I have a good grasp of the concept. I appreciate not everybody agrees though. That is fair too. Be happy to elaborate in a PM should you want to delve. Not everyone wants my pravachan I bet 🤪


Braiding hair. I have seen two men who can I guess. A brother and an uncle. Of course they were braiding their daughter's hair. 😃 If they braided their wives hair I was not privy to that, TG.


Maine kahaan mislead Kiya ki itni badi sazaa! 😳


Keep reading. I have seen people make 180 degree turns in their attitudes in life. Keep the faith. 🤗😘

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Le ... Are u mind reader as well...? What I was think after part 3 is in part 4 intro 😆

Spirituality...karma n all

Be a sieve... Love this line❤️

Aryan is definitely achhe karmo ka fal... Ok let me not digress because fal is a danger territory 🤣


Glad she realises that even though she had the strength from her dadda.... She'd forgotten that in the course of painful life she had and Aryan and his words encouraged her to find herself again and fight back.


Their love story is one of a kind man... (Matlab Aisa nahi ki it's non-cliche something never heard of.... But the how of this relationship never goes matlab...? They are so so worlds apart it's not even opposite attracts because their inherent nature is same, just the outlook of life is different.... Am I making sense here? Maybe not 🤪


Aryan loves to read.... Wow! I love to read as well... Ok that's just silly maybe i should just try to be like imlie sometimes and take a break from screen as well!

Oww... I really like where this is going her first heart tripping moment ... A picture no less (gotta love your imagination)

Oops mr. Grumpy is totally rattled - by the picture? Or the fact that she saw it?🤔

Oh! Imlie is not wrong in thinking that how come no questions... Does that mean he accepted her in his personal space?

And because junglee is back!

Spelling of "South America" really Aryan? That was low! But i allow you this time as you are clearly rattled!!

Owh that smile, he must have remembered good old carefree days.... So finally barriers broken ❤️


And just like that they transitioned from mujhe tumhari aadat hai to mujhe tumhari zarurat hai... Without any life-threatening situation or over the top drama... Just being around each other caring and cherishing the other silently with no expectations for themselves just wishing a little smile for the other ❤️


Phew? I say WHAT? Here I was expecting a proposal... Read para above... But it's so beautiful i won't delete it... Udhar samajh lena!!


Wah wah .. now I know why he's ARYAN SINGH RATHORE and I just called you chatur in some other thread.... And I'm rarely wrong too.... So this was a proposal or atleast lead up to it.... Too good man 👏


I repeat.... Using Aryans original lines is a criminal offense.... "Look at me" at this moment... Really? ☺️


F f f .... This is the most romantic proposal ever for me.... “I want to commit myself to you." OMG my poor heart... I don't even need the next line so didn't copy.... Officially in heaven. 😇



I wanted to end the comment here but can't help this line as well "we do not renege" that's got my ❤️ as well!

Edited by SundariP - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


I think Malini knows deep down that only Imlie will love Neel as her own, for her that trumps anything else at this point because time is short. Yes she has always been envious of Imlie because she is moral, upright bad golden hearted. Finally for Malini she wants the very best for her son. So yes, she swallows her pride and asks Imlie.


Karma is a very interesting concept indeed. IF you can wrap your head around it, which I can easily having spent years thinking through various spiritual philosophies. I don't claim to have a PhD in it but I have a good grasp of the concept. I appreciate not everybody agrees though. That is fair too. Be happy to elaborate in a PM should you want to delve. Not everyone wants my pravachan I bet 🤪


Braiding hair. I have seen two men who can I guess. A brother and an uncle. Of course they were braiding their daughter's hair. 😃 If they braided their wives hair I was not privy to that, TG.


Maine kahaan mislead Kiya ki itni badi sazaa! 😳


Keep reading. I have seen people make 180 degree turns in their attitudes in life. Keep the faith. 🤗😘


Bold : sure... Though I've a bit insight in part 4 but love to hear your elaborate version.


Red: ye wala ❓

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Posted: 3 years ago

😘 I love your comments and you just made my day. Period.

My, my, we do think alike don't we. And that's why I think you will enjoy the next ones too. Aryan is truly every girls fantasy. Because he is written in by one 😆😆😆 no but seriously I have met a few men who have such dedication to their wives and they are not there to put in a show. They have made my heart ache and made me want to bawl, so beautiful was their devotion. Aryan is my tribute to these men. 🤗

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