Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 15

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


Do you mean the Story Index thread that exists?


That too but you can make your personal index thread to keep track of your own stories.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SundariP


That too but you can make your personal index thread to keep track of your own stories.


Hmmm...I will try when I get back from work. If....I ever finish mera kaam!

Damn Multitasking is using up too many of brain cells.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


Hmmm...I will try when I get back from work. If....I ever finish mera kaam!

Damn Multitasking is using up too many of brain cells.


Not more than this shitshow 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SundariP


Not more than this shitshow 🤣


And to top it all, I had once participated in a MRI study and this is what they told, you have a pretty, tiny brain. I thought, damn. Couldn't you say something a little more complimentary than that. I mean I am glad that they said it was pretty.....oh no wait, I guess they meant pretty as a quantity didn't they!? So, I already have fewer than average cells to begin with I guess 🤪And then I spend so many of them on this show and related stuff 😃 koi nahin, maybe I will be a pretty happily demented woman someday with good old addled memories of my shipping days.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sahi hai....

My Adi_lie dedication song for you jatey jatey.... Gn!!


https://open.spotify.com/track/2rizacJSyD9S1IQUxUxnsK?si=M6AnAkqITnC6MaJ7QmwbcA&utm_source=copy-link

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Posted: 3 years ago


Goodnight. Rest well my friend!

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Posted: 3 years ago


Beautiful just beautiful.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Mera review udhar raha tha. Holidays are over, so I can only reply properly in the late evening. I did skim read this morning but I read it properly again. Loved it !

The morning scene got me all tingly - you write romance so well without spelling everything out. They share an awesome understanding and at least we get to see a playful, flirty Aryan in your story... in the show we have a long way to go.

English Madam is in hospital too... at least others in her proximity are safe from her harm in the meantime 😉

The whole Malini situation is traumatic for everyone involved. Isn't it amazing how people's lives become connected and intertwined through no action of their own?

Mr Chaturvedi and Imlie - interesting how pain and suffering can bring people together. Imlie is being so considerate and kind towards him despite their past.

Glad to see Malini's reflections - their conversation was so emotional and got me teary. Who doesn't like a happy ending.

On the contrary, what on earth is Aditya doing? Neel does not need a father like him.

Finally, Aryan and Imlie, although different personalities, they share the same core values, both are compassionate.

Thank you xx

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Zara2021

Mera review udhar raha tha. Holidays are over, so I can only reply properly in the late evening. I did skim read this morning but I read it properly again. Loved it !

The morning scene got me all tingly - you write romance so well without spelling everything out. They share an awesome understanding and at least we get to see a playful, flirty Aryan in your story... in the show we have a long way to go.

English Madam is in hospital too... at least others in her proximity are safe from her harm in the meantime 😉

The whole Malini situation is traumatic for everyone involved. Isn't it amazing how people's lives become connected and intertwined through no action of their own?

Mr Chaturvedi and Imlie - interesting how pain and suffering can bring people together. Imlie is being so considerate and kind towards him despite their past.

Glad to see Malini's reflections - their conversation was so emotional and got me teary. Who doesn't like a happy ending.

On the contrary, what on earth is Aditya doing? Neel does not need a father like him.

Finally, Aryan and Imlie, although different personalities, they share the same core values, both are compassionate.

Thank you xx


@bold: Convenient huh! 😉

Edited by mltr16 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

You’re writing has shown the side of Malini that was always there hidden underneath. Hence it doesn’t seem odd reading her character in your writing. Also, what an elegant way you’ve written out the intimacy between Aryan and Imlie. Haaye, when are we going to see these scenes on TV?!

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