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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys i will be updating now...@ sami ,nimmi,pia -guys whtever u read was not the update i was jst preparing my update adding some flirty lines..removing some stupid lines and editing my update to make it better ...anyways thanks 4 the appreciation im honored ..it means alot to me and if ur interested then plz checkout my edited version of the previous update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really sry 4 repeating the word update so many times
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Comment update on page 8 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys plz don read the update i need 1 more day 4 it i cant edit the content
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just now read third chap Sorry i knw am late 😳

But the update was nice...loved it 😊

Temme one thing jheel do you like charlie... ????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jane_krittzz...

Just now read third chap Sorry i knw am late 😳


But the update was nice...loved it 😊

Temme one thing jheel do you like charlie... ????

who is charlie??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nimmi jheel used her as Priya in her SS 😊

Waise shes charlie chauhan Ex-roadies contestant and i dnt like her coz of sum reasons Dats why i was asking jheel if she likes her 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No ! I don like her ..i was luking 4 a cute girl and I found her cute anyways I don know wht kind of a girl she is ...i jst know her name cbharlie :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jane_krittzz...


Nimmi jheel used her as Priya in her SS 😊

Waise shes charlie chauhan Ex-roadies contestant and i dnt like her coz of sum reasons Dats why i was asking jheel if she likes her 😊


oh ok 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi all😊...Firstly im really vry sorry 4 the confusion created by me 😛...i know many of u have read my previous update 4 wich i never sent even 1 single pm...aur maine uss update ko "n' no of times edit kiya some of u read it twice ...wich may hav definately irked them😆...i say it again i'm srry n to make it up 4 tht im giving u all this update hope u like it...with loads of love (jheel)😳...


Chapter Four...(a)

Recap:~ a new character is introduced (priya) who is Raghav's fiance and also a childhood frnd of Gia but Raghav is unaware of this feact n so both the girls behave as if complete strangers...Raghav receives a Msg frm his mom saying tht she is waiting 4 them near the hospital reception counter or shld i say lobby 😛...


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"raghav'" someone called out his name ...

he turned around to find his mom standing near the Coffey machine ...soon he reached uptill her n gave a short hug to cool her down and assure her tht he is alright as he knew tht she would be really worried after getting his so called accident's news...But mom's are gonna be the same no matter wht...
"raghav tum thik ho na tumhe kahin lagi to nahi...aur accident kaise hua...aur tum.."he cuts her midway giving her another hug ...

"mom i'm OK in fact mujhe to ek bhi scratch nahi aaya ..."

"but ye sab hua kaise ?"

"mom mai apko sab bata dunga pehle aap mere saath chalo mujhe aapko kisi se milwana hai...come with me..."saying he almost dragged her to the elevator...


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"tumhe pata hai jab maine Raghav ko tumhare saath dekha toh mai ekdum shock hogayi ...4 a second muje laga k i was dreaming..."an excited priya said...

she was more than happy to see her frnd after almost two years...the last time they met was wen Gia was planning to fix her with raghav and was successful in it ...she never met her post her engagement with Raghav ...

"acha! jealous ha...kya laga mai tumhare fiance ko lekar bhag jaungi..."she said with a chuckle...

"ha ha ...vry funny ..khud toh jalke raakh ho gayi thi jab raghav mere saath flirt kar raha tha aur mujhe jealous bolti hai..."

"mai kyu jealous hone lagi wo tera fiance hai..."she debated ...trying to show as if Raghav means nothing to her...

"agar wo mera fiance hai to wo tera kya lagta hai..."priya sounded serious to her...ofcourse she was wen it comes to raghav she is always serious...

Gia tried to brush away the topic as usual but her voice betrayed her...God! its been three years but still he affects her so much tht only the sight of him flirting with some other girl makes her shudder...and her heart breaks into thousand pieces each time she sees him walk hand in hand with priya ...touching her nose naughtily ...hanging out with her...this was a pain to watch and thts the only reason behind her cutting all the contacts with priya...she never met her in this past two years...


Edited by Bhavikakosambia - 12 years ago

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