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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Loved the update!!
Raghav's mother is so caring...😳...and priya she nice too...guess priya and sia are good friends...also cant believe that sia has suffered alot...how😔 sad she had to see raghav with someone else...cant wait for the open up of the suspense...what has got them soo far...awww..
waiting for the next update eagerly...update soon with a long one!!😊
Edited by muskanpuri99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Heel i'm extremely sorry that i couldn't catch your updates cz of busy schedule but i'll surely start reading them soon. so please write more. i apologise for being so late
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi all 😊
sorry for late update ..well i wont bore u all this time with my blabbering so go on Enjoy!


*****

Chapter Four...(b)

"eh...ehuh." mohina(raghav's mom) cleared her throat for the second time to grab raghav's attention but he was lost in his own dream world and one could easily make out from the huge grin which was spread all over his face that probably he was thinking about someone...

"Raghav!" she shook him by his shoulder "Beta..are u ok?" she asked concerned..

"huh..wo..mai.."

"Beta tum thik ho na"

"sorry mom...wo mai kuch soch raha tha "

kya kar raha hai tu raghav! abhi toh Gia se mill ke tuje char ghante bhi nai hue aur tu uske khayalo mai khone laga hai ...iss Gia se toh dur hi rehna padega ..He thought ...

*****

"waise tum past ki baat chodo aur ye batao ki tumne drink kyu kiya tha ?"

"huh?"priya broke her chain of thoughts ...after a few seconds she realized what she asked so she tried to brush it off

"kya bakwas kar rahi hai...mai aur drink.haha joke of the year...acha wo sab
chod ye bata tu kaise hai ? pure do saal baad dekh rai hu tuje..."

"dekh sia topic mat badal !"priya got a bit hyped "maine tere kuch test kiye the ..aur mujhe pata hai tune drink kiya aur yahi reason hai ki tu Raghav ki car ke samne aagai aur tum dono ka accident hogaya...toh drama mat kar samjhi.."

"dekh priya hum ye sab baad mai discuss kar sakte hai na..."

"kya discuss karna hai?" Raghav interrupted as he an mohina entered ...

"kuch nai Raghav...wo hum ye baat kar rahe ki itni raat ko Gia kaha jayegi akeli toh mai isse keh rahi thi ke ye mere ghar chale .." priya covered up...

"Noway ,tum akele Gia ka khayal kaise rakhogi ,you both are coming with us" mohina said..

"But aunty.." Gia tried to protest

"No arguments "and the argument was closed their itself ...well no one can argue with mom's ...




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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Hey Heel wow thats quite nice update =D but i just love long updates.

read the update so refreshingly. you did a great job writing this update.thumbs up.

eagerly waiting for next part for more of Raghav Sia

please do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Nice update...Raghav in sia's thoughts...wow!! ...lovestory restarting!!!😉😳
Hawww!! Sia ne drink kiya...lets see ab aage kya hota hai... update soon!!😊
Edited by muskanpuri99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
chapter 5...

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Raghav was driving and priya was sitting beside him ,while i and aunty sat on the back seat of the car ...mohina aunty was busy instructing someone on phone and Raghav and priya were having a banter over which band is the best ;coldplay or GnR(guns and roses)...initially i supported priya ,she was debating for GnR ...But after sometime i lost interest and started looking at the vehicles passing by...thats when something caught my eye...A shop...there was small flower shop out there named
"Pushpa flowers" ...and a smile covered my lips as all those bitter-sweet memories flashed into my mind ...

Flash Back...

three years back i participated in the NBC (National Boxing championship) ,I was beyond thrilled and excited as for the first i was participating in a National level championship after that delhi boxing incident ...it was a really big opportunity for me to prove myself ...and this time there was no place for mistakes...


A night before the championship all we girls were sitting my hostel room chatting,fighting over silly things and having a gala time ,sama was preparing my diet chart and aaliya was helping her while pooja and tanya were busy packing my bags ,they packed the best of outfits for me and decided my look as it was a national level tournament so a lot of media was going to be present and they wanted me to look my best ...after the delhi thing everyone changed ..they became more caring and loving ,everyone made sure that i was full of confidence as they were Hell scared! that if anything went wrong i would again perform the same "drug" stunt ...
it felt good to be surrounded by so many caring friends sab kuch perfect tha sirf ek kami thi


"sama ,aaliya bas karo yaar ...mai sirf ek week ke liye ja rahi hu aur tum dono ko dekh kar toh aesa lag raha hai jaise mere pure year ka diet aaj hi plan karoge...aur pooja-tanya mai boxing championship ke liye ja rahi hu femina miss india mai nai participate kar rahi so STOP fussing over my looks..."

"But sia..."sama interrupted

"NO buts ..aab tum sab jao aur ja kar sojao...i will be fine.."

"are u sure "tanya said in concerned tone

"Yes,tanya...now GO guys!"

"ok -ok"said pooja and everyone left after wishing me luck for the last time and left the room
i closed the door behind me and took a sigh of relief ...my lips curved into a smile while i stared at the mess we created ...cold drink cans ,wrappers of chips ,almost a dozen clothes spread over my bed ...i fetched through all of them and finally found the thing i was looking for..the last gift which he gave me...the watch ...it was his only belonging which i had ...i placed it close to my heart and closed my eyes..."I love you pushpa" a tear trickled down my eyes...as i remembered those sweet moments those nok -jhoks which we had ...i missed him ..a lot....

...to be continued

Edited by Bhavikakosambia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Wow!! U've updated sooo soon!! It is again a very nice update!! Loved the flashback😳 and the pushpa flower shop😆...nice idea!!😉😊... Can't wait for the other update and like always the
open of the suspense ( what happened to raghav ( memory loss ?? How ?? ) ) update soon!!😊
Edited by muskanpuri99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskanpuri99

<font color="#ff6600">Wow!! U've updated sooo soon!! It is again a very nice update!! Loved the flashback😳 and the pushpa flower shop😆...nice idea!!😉😊... Can't wait for the other update and like always the
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<font color="#ff6600">open of the suspense ( what happened to raghav ( memory loss ?? How ?? ) ) update soon!!😊</font>

thanks muskan 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Another superb update Heel.

totally loved it. its wow that you're updating regularly and keeping SIRA alive to us

Hats Off

eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Awesum Update Jheel 👏

The Flashback seems interesting.. Please Continue Soon ! 😊
Edited by jane_krittzz... - 12 years ago

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