Suno : On behalf of SAC

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ek raat jab neendh mujhse naraz tha
Main apne dil mein jhankne laga
Itne din se jo naqab pehna tha
Main us raat, usko utarne laga

Pata chala ki seeshe ki tarah
Toota hua tha dil
Use jodna tho door
Sametna bhi tha mushkil

Ek ek karke har tukde ko
Main utane laga
Meri bikri hui jindagi ko
Main phir se jodne laga

Thoda tha gussa aur bohout tha guroor
Par mein kushi dhoondhe laga
Jhoot aur fareb ke thukdon ko chod
Main sach dhoondhe laga

Nafrat ka ek bada thukda dekha
Par utane ka nahi tha man
Sabko pyar diya
Par bacha sirf akhelapan

Bewafayi ne jo dard diye the
Dekha uske bhi paar
Thoda si humdardi bachi thi
Par dikha kahi nahi pyar

Us raat ke andhere main
Main dhoontha chala
Aur chandini mein mujhe
Sabse chota tudka mila

Pyar ke us thukde ko lekhar
Main tumse milne chala
Par tumse izhaar karne ka
Ek bhi shabhd na mila

Tabhi mere dil se ek awaaz nikla
Mere wajood ki sachayiyon se usne kaha
"Suno"


P.S : Forgive my grammatical errors if any .. haven't written hindi in a long time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh wow...your hindi poems are also as beautiful as the english ones...😊
This one had so much depth in it...Loved it so much...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tweetie19

Oh wow...your hindi poems are also as beautiful as the english ones...😊
This one had so much depth in it...Loved it so much...😳



Thanks Tweety ! Glad you liked it !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful write-up! very nice! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dinki24

beautiful write-up! very nice! 😃



Thanks dinki !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pearly this is beautiful sweety 😳
Perfect dote for my Sunday 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏👏👏 Phenomenal!👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pearly the entire poem is beautiful - I want another word to use other than beautiful... cause I am always saying that about your poems.
Anyways like I said the entire poem made me go uff... but the below para... kya boloon... it made me smile and feel sad and happy and pained...
Us raat ke andhere main
Main dhoontha chala
Aur chandini mein mujhe
Sabse chota tudka mila

This maybe the smallest piece but the most powerful. Love the poem.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ecrivain

Pearly this is beautiful sweety😳

Perfect dote for my Sunday😃



Thanks Ecri ! Glad you liked it , hope you enjoy a nice and lazy Sunday !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

👏👏👏 Phenomenal!👏👏👏


Thank you so much chicksoup ! I am really happy that you liked it !

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