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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Junoonian
Pearly the entire poem is beautiful - I want another word to use other than beautiful... cause I am always saying that about your poems.
Anyways like I said the entire poem made me go uff... but the below para... kya boloon... it made me smile and feel sad and happy and pained...
Us raat ke andhere main
Main dhoontha chala
Aur chandini mein mujhe
Sabse chota tudka mila

This maybe the smallest piece but the most powerful. Love the poem.

Hey Jun ! Thanks so much for the appreciation. All the encouraging words in this forum are my motivation to write ! 😳

I like those lines too , in all the darkness , love is the only light in SAC's life , isn't it ? Hats off to the writer who created such a character and of course to the flawless portrayal by HC !

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Oh my goodness!

Brilliant brilliant absolutely brilliant!

Loveee!

Oh wow. It most certainly moved me, and how very SAC this is! You my dearest, you! You're amazing! And how impactful this proved.

Suno.

:')

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purva

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

wow Pearly very good poem..👏

very beautiful writing 👏

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pearly14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Oh my goodness!

Brilliant brilliant absolutely brilliant!

Loveee!

Oh wow. It most certainly moved me, and how very SAC this is! You my dearest, you! You're amazing! And how impactful this proved.

Suno.

:')

Thank you so much ! Glad you liked it !

Suno indeed ! His one word that says everything 😳