FF- Sirf Tum!!! UPDATED PART 4 - PG-7 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Suvika.

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">No thanks required Shakti. The concept grabbed my interest the moment you mentioned it. There was no way I was going to let you keep it to yourself. And my encouragement or no, I don't think you would NOT have posted this one.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">Now her world not only crashed but she herself physically found herself trembling with a lump swallowed in her through and a tumor getting hemorrhaged in her heart brains and the limbs sensing paralytic affect on her. It was not less than a seizure which takes ages to get cured.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Loved this description.👏👏👏</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Would have loved to have more conversations Shakti. You know...kind of instead of Fakir then says its Allah's decision.. "Beta, that is Allah's decision." Maybe you can try it in the next part?? That would make it even better than it already is. Just a suggestion though. Please don't mind.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Love this strong Arzoo. When is the next part coming??</font>

Was waiting for your comment literally!!! Now If you wouldn't have been my support asking me to give a shot, am sure I would have ended up keeping it n my Sys... Lol

I wanted to portray her pain and her journey from chirpy innocence to heart throbbing pain of betrayal followed by dargah scene and the cruel incident the proceedings post the that ... Everything I wanted to portray as to how one feels if in her shoes... Which made me write that...

Yaar sick thing os I have written everything in bilingual mode Hindi n English with a touch of good personalized conversation but by the time I keyed ctrl+s power killed my efforts... Later on my phone o rewrote everything... As you correctly pointed that personalized version would have made it more warm to read...

Next update pakka will the way you suggested... Oh please no minding business of a better suggestion anytime ...

Next update soon...:-)

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Helloo...Shakti. 😊
Have just read the first part of this O.S...and sincerely i must admit this...we could plan a whole 5 days episodes from this...with the highest T.R.P's.. 😆
Well this is brilliant stuff...fabulous , well penned ... 👏 ⭐️
You did Justified Aarzoo and her reactions till the end...
Again like we feel why the show's C.V's did"nt thought like this...
And there were some brilliant dialougues also...which were bang on..
I think Aarzoo was still banking on Fakhir baba's words...but first she has to come clean and let out her Anger first on Everyone of those who deceieved...her..
Zaki..totally wrong directed guy in the show...how he should have been and how he is shown now...is like we should pity on him...
Sahir , i can't say anything about him it is self explanatory...for me...and i should only say something about him in the next part...
Wonderful update...
Continue soon...
And P.M me if possible...

Heya... I assume your name to be mayur...for now till u clear it..hehe
Am really glad you loved the scribble thank you so much it means a lot...

CVs Ko maro goli pata nahi akal kaha ghaasss charne jaati hai... Unlogonki...

Lets see how I show arzoo giving back zaki the jahara bhaktan and sahir the shark and alvira a lady who never accepts a defeat... ;-) quite tricky ...sure will PM you the next update link

Originally posted by: Romanticfreak

Was waiting for your comment literally!!! Now If you wouldn't have been my support asking me to give a shot, am sure I would have ended up keeping it n my Sys... Lol

I wanted to portray her pain and her journey from chirpy innocence to heart throbbing pain of betrayal followed by dargah scene and the cruel incident the proceedings post the that ... Everything I wanted to portray as to how one feels if in her shoes... Which made me write that...

Yaar sick thing os I have written everything in bilingual mode Hindi n English with a touch of good personalized conversation but by the time I keyed ctrl+s power killed my efforts... Later on my phone o rewrote everything... As you correctly pointed that personalized version would have made it more warm to read...

Next update pakka will the way you suggested... Oh please no minding business of a better suggestion anytime ...

Next update soon...:-)

That was really good ya. 👏

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Take my suggestion... get google drive into your laptop and save your documents. That way every word you type in your word doc will get saved. You can access it from anywhere too. Even your siggies and other creations. Put them all in Google drive. I know the pain of losing something we have written. It happened only once. I never took the chance again.

I will do it write away... I was like What the... Serious pissed... Then later in the early morning I have come up with super sonic English version hehe

Originally posted by: Romanticfreak

Heya... I assume your name to be mayur...for now till u clear it..hehe
Am really glad you loved the scribble thank you so much it means a lot...

CVs Ko maro goli pata nahi akal kaha ghaasss charne jaati hai... Unlogonki...

Lets see how I show arzoo giving back zaki the jahara bhaktan and sahir the shark and alvira a lady who never accepts a defeat... ;-) quite tricky ...sure will PM you the next update link

Yeah my name is Mayur only... 😃
That's interesting thinking for the next plot or update...
Would love to recieve a P.M from you...
Continue soon.

Originally posted by: --Ari--

That was really good ya.👏

I loved your take on the whole fiasco. It was so different from what we really got to see and so much more sensible and relatable.

Zaki being treated the way aarzoo treated him for continuosly bothering her was👍🏼I loved her words to him and sahirs happiness and pride at that. Very well done.

Allah knows a strong aarzoo who uses her brain is such a treat to watch/read😆

Your take put a much better perspective on aarzoo calling sahir and sahirs guilt.😃

It was a really good read. Looking forward to the next part and how aarzoo tackles sahir ;) Update soon :)

Aww thanks dear... I always wanted the girl to be brainy with guts ...but CVs hell bent on showing her as gutty with no Brian's

Part - 2

Before I proceed further , I am writing this in bilingual mode Hindi and English...

Zakis heart skipped with pain of rejection while Sahirs chin was up with pride that Arzoo can never accept anyone.

Arzoo turns to Sahir asking him as to what does he think of himself. He will impress, confess and turns down saying it's all a drama??? He reveals the reality that he is already married? Asks her to stay off from his sight for what she gave him???

Sahirs face went pale with shock the way Arzoo is shooting questions at him...

He gulped with shock looking at this Arzoo who is questioning him to equate his actions to his words...

Arzoo: Kyun sir... jawab nahi hai aapke paaas... Appne aisa kyun kiya...aap pehle daant te ho nafrat dikhate ho... phir humare ache bure waqt pe humare saath dete ho, Agar aapko mujhse itni hi nafrat thi toh tab kyun mujhe aapke karee bane diya sir... bataien mujhe... Aur jab aap ke zakhmon pe malham lagaa rahi thi ..tab chup kyun the...jab sab log mere kirdaar pe ungliya uta rahe the tab kyun bachaya hai... tab aapko nahi laga ki mein paison ki bhooki hu? Aaj pata chala aapko?

Sahir: Mujhe koyi safaayi nahi deni hia kisi ko bhi nahi... ur tujhse to bilkul bhi nahi...kyunki tum layak bhi nahi ho ki mein tujhe jake safaayi du .. aur mein kaha tha tujhe ki mere saaamne mat aya karo ...

Arzoo: Basss ek lafz aur nahi sahir sir...mein aungi jitney baar aap mujhe dhakka denge zalil karenge utne hi baar mein phir aungi...

Isliye nahi ki aap sab sochte hai ki hum makkar hai ya phir paison ki bhooki hai...par isliye ki mein aapke barein mein jaane ki haq rakti hu... mera haq banta hai ki mein aapke barein mein jaanu kyunki aapne mere dil ke saath khela hai...aur mein jaan na chaahti hu... aapke dil itni pathar si kyun hia... Kyunki jab bhi aapko dekhti hut oh mujhe nahi lagta ki bure ho... Agar aap itna hi bure ho ...toh aap mujhe bachane nahi aate aur meine us pal dekhi hai aapke ankho mein who darr... who fikr...

Sahir Alvira keeps on looking at Arzoo the way she is reasoning and standing for her right...

Tik hai aapne kehdiya ki aap shaadi shuda hai ...toh hai ...apne kaha ki aap mujhse nafrat karte hai toh hai... Lekin aaap hote kaun ho mujhe apne dil se rokne wale? Mein ne mohobbat ki hai aapse ...koi jurm nahi ki hai...aur ha jab mujhe aapse pyaar hua tab mujhe eh baat pata nahi tha ki aap shaadi shuda hai... Lekin ab jab aap keh rahe hai ki aapke shadi ho chuki hai toh bataiyen na aapke biwi kidhar hai who kaha hai aur aap ke saath kyun nahi hai...

Jab aappne mujhse nikah karne ki baat kiye the tab mein ha nahi kahi par jab mere dil ko laga ki mein nikah keliye tayaar hu tab aake aapko apni dil ki baat ki hai...lekin aapne kya kiya mere iss dil ko tod diya...lekin mein haar nahi maanungi...

Jab bhi aap mere saath the mere kareeb the mein mehsoos ki hai ki aapke dil mein mere liye jasba hai... zubaan se nikli har laft sach ho zaroori nahi hai sir... sports stars pe film stars pe sari ladkiya marte hia iska matlab eh todi toh hai ki un stars ke biwi nahi hai...tik usi terah... Aap shadi shuda ho ya na ho ...mein aapme ek inspiring professional ko dekhi hai ...mein aap ko idealize karti hu ...mein aapse pyar karungi sir ...jab tak aap mujhe aapke ateet ke barein mein nahi bataeinge mein aapse hi pyaar karungi... Aap mujhse pyar karte ya na karte ho who aapke problem hai meri nahi ...

Allah knows sir, mein apne dil se mohobbat ki hai dimaag se nahi ... Aur ha mujhe nafrat hai khud se ki mein ek shadi shuda insaan se pyaar karne lagi...

Jis terah hum us farah ko nafrat karte hai kyunki unhone humare aami ki zindagi debah kardi ... Usi terah mein agar apse nikah karungi toh dusri biwi banungi jo harkis manazoor nahi hai mujhe...

Lekin mujhe apne zindagi kie safar teh karne keliye mujhe aapse kahi sawalon ka jawaab chaiye ...aur mein tab tak nahi jaaungi jab tak mujhe sawalon ka jawaab mil na jati

Sahir : Toh tumhe sirf nafrat aur khammoshi ke alawwa yaha kuch nahi milega... aur mein aaj bhi kehta hu ki mujhe nafrat hai tujhse ...

Arzoo: keejiye nafrat mujhse ...mein bhi dekhu aap kis hadh taq nafrat karsakte hai mujhe ... aur mein eh bhi dekhna chahti hu...ki aapke iss nafrat mein aur khamooshi mein dum zyada hai yar mere mohobbat mein dum zyada hai... kijiye nafrat...kijiye zalil mujhe ...

Sahir : Dekho bewakoofon wali harqat mat karo...aur mein jo kuch bhi kiya hai tere saaath wo sirf isliye ki mujhe tumhari niyat zaki ko dikhana tha aur mein kar dikhaya

Arzoo : Aur mein eh nahi maanti ... Mujhe sach jaan na hai aur mein jaan kar hi rahungi... Fikr mat keejiye sir ..mein yaha aapke ghar mein nahi rehne waali hu... out house mein bhi nahi rahungi...

Mein agle hafte taq aapke yaha se chali jaaungi... allah knows hum kabhi bhi kisi ke ghar mein muft ki ek bhi niwala nahi li hai... Alvira aunty hume ijaazat dijiye ...aapke kehne se hum yaha ruke the ...

Zaki: Jahara hum aapse humesha ek dosti hi rahe the lekin kab mujhe appse pyar hogaya hume pata hi nahi chala ...aur mein aaj bhi apne pyaar kaa izhaar kar bhi raha hu toh sirf aapke zindagi mein humesha ek humsafar banke dekhbaal karna chahta hu...bas iske alawa aur kuch nahi aap mujhe galat samajh rahe hai...

Aapke dil todne ka ya bharose ko todneka irada nahi tha mujhe maaf kardijiye ga

Arzoo: Zaki ...aap ko mein sirf ek dost maanti thi manti hu aur maanungi bhi ...aur ha rishte apne apne daire mein ho to hi ache lagte hai ... Mujhe toda waqt chahiye apko fir so dost maan ne keliye ..aur aapne kya kaha zindagi bhar humsafar... yakeen, allah know zaki mujhe kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai ...aur jiski zarorat hai who toh jhootebaaz nikla... Khair... Pehle tum apne zindagi mein khud ke parbote pe khade hone ki socho zaki ...ladkiyon ko patina awaragiri chodke zindagi mein kuch ban ne ki socho ..aur ha mujhe se ye umeed kabhi mat rakhna ki mein tumse nikah karungi...mein tumse toh kya kisi se bhi nikah nahi karpaungi...

Jo manzoor ho khuda ko wahi hoga... agar mujhe sahir sir se mohobbat hone ka faisla upar wale ka hai toh mujhe manzoor hai ...

Aur sir mujhe aap aapke ateet ke barein mein batanahi hoga...

Leaving Sahiralvira shocked Arzoo leaves from there ...

Here ends this short update ...

Friends...if you liked this update..pls care to share your view... your feedback means a lot to me ...

Adios & Signing off

Shakti (With Love)😉

Originally posted by: Suvika.

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#0000ff">Phew... ok...that took time. You said hindi and english Shakti. But this was total hindi.😡😆 Hence took time to read.😉</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#0000ff">This is one super strong Arzoo. Awesome👏👏. Like someone else that I have come to know recently. Sahir for once is lost for words. And she didn't spare Zaki either. Oh boy. No mincing words either. She has laid her cards on the table. Wonder whats going to be Sahir's next move.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#0000ff">When is the next update??</font>

Lolz I thought of English and Hindi but dialogue flow is showing up more personalized in Hindi so continued it without disturbing... In my imagination Arzoo is damn steong cam shut up anybody with determination... Anybody has to look up to her be proud that they have her... And same is with sahir too... And yes thanks for the feedback dear it means a lot to me :-) next update hopefully today night itself...