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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: silky_harshad
This is so beautiful soup 👏 loved it 👏 We always knew that when sahir is going to fall..he is gonna fall hard ... and his madness for arzoo will be a treat to watch...

aww..thanx..😳

When a man like Sahir falls...in..love...it is a free fall for all of us!😉

Epic!

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Soaps1

@Soaps1

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Very well written

I really wonder what she did to him that made him want to run away from himself

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

aankhon mein kahi jo

saasein ruki hai meri

baatein berukhi si

khinche hai phir kyu yahin

tuhi toh wajah

meri iss bebasi ka raha

chaahe mera dil

teri dhadkan ki aahat sada

ruthe na kabhi bhi

teri kismat, teri kaamna

seene se humaare

nikale yahi hai dua

maange hai koi

teri chaahat ki chaaon sada

adhoori na rahe

meri rooh ki tujhe hai wafa

😳

rest - to everybody from Sony wale to Makers to Forum members to Viewers - DO WHATEVER YOU WANT TO DO MAN

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: prettypri
This beautifully depicts Sahirs loneliness,despair,hopes,love and pain!
He looked so forlorn trying to get a moment of peace sitting where he knows she sits too...but even that was lost to him as he is running away from himself!
The moment of relief when he was thinking of her in his arms...when he seemed to doze off was so poignant...showing what he really wants...and then reality struck him causing him to wake up again..

Very well written👏

Thank U...

U nutshelled it beautifully😉...😳😊

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Soaps1
Very well written
I really wonder what she did to him that made him want to run away from himself

???

Who? Zeenat?😆

She didn't do anything exceptionally bad, I suppose..other than some usual infidelity...🥱...but an artist's heart is like glass...it hides nothing...and when that was shattered...

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
aankhon mein kahi jo
saasein ruki hai meri
baatein berukhi si
khinche hai phir kyu yahin
tuhi toh wajah
meri iss bebasi ka raha
chaahe mera dil
teri dhadkan ki aahat sada

ruthe na kabhi bhi
teri kismat, teri kaamna
seene se humaare
nikale yahi hai dua
maange hai koi
teri chaahat ki chaaon sada
adhoori na rahe
meri rooh ki tujhe hai wafa

😳

rest - to everybody from Sony wale to Makers to Forum members to Viewers - DO WHATEVER YOU WANT TO DO MAN

Woo Hoo...Shayari...Found a gem, thanx to U...😳

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

that is HS ka tt ka lyrics mommy 🤔

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
that is HS ka tt ka lyrics mommy 🤔

😆

I wouldn't know, because I have hardly ever heard it...this appears to be a female version someone wrote here...😳😉..AAp ko pata hai...

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jahanaara1

@jahanaara1

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
aankhon mein kahi jo
saasein ruki hai meri
baatein berukhi si
khinche hai phir kyu yahin
tuhi toh wajah
meri iss bebasi ka raha
chaahe mera dil
teri dhadkan ki aahat sada

ruthe na kabhi bhi
teri kismat, teri kaamna
seene se humaare
nikale yahi hai dua
maange hai koi
teri chaahat ki chaaon sada
adhoori na rahe
meri rooh ki tujhe hai wafa

😳

rest - to everybody from Sony wale to Makers to Forum members to Viewers - DO WHATEVER YOU WANT TO DO MAN