I want to believe - On behalf of SAC

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I want to believe, that though the drops of rain
Revived those wounds;
You are there, to heal my pain

I want to believe,that the beautiful moon
The one that you speak to;
Will not fade away soon

I want to believe,not what my mind does say
But like the others;
You wont walk away

I want to believe,that I dont have to explain
Why I am broken,that without words;
You can understand my pain

I want to believe,that my self imposed exile
Can only be broken
By your beautiful smile

I want to believe,that the darkest hour
Has now passed
And dawn approaches,real fast

I want to believe,the monster in me is slain
That after this battle;
I can finally love again

But I know I have wronged you
And you may never forgive
Please know though,that I am bound by my past
So this wretched life, I still live.
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pearly14 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved ... in case I write Aarzoo's reply
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really beautiful Pearly πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pearly omg 😲

This is Awesomeness personified πŸ‘

U n pri are good poets ..I has told her too u guys shud put this on a blog n take it up seriously πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful poem Pearly. You have kept it so simple yet it addresses Sahir's emotions and fears, viz-a-viz Arzoo, completely.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG u wrote this?? This is awesome πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Plz write more...πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ecrivain



Pearly omg 😲

This is Awesomeness personified πŸ‘

U n pri are good poets ..I has told her too u guys shud put this on a blog n take it up seriously πŸ˜ƒ


Thanks Ecri 😊 , I haven't been able to write in the last few years, but the way SAC is characterised , it makes me want to write 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tweetie19

OMG u wrote this?? This is awesome πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Plz write more...πŸ‘πŸΌ


Originally posted by: Junoonian

Beautiful poem Pearly. You have kept it so simple yet it addresses Sahir's emotions and fears, viz-a-viz Arzoo, completely.


Thankyou ! Glad you liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG thats great... soo soo apt! ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@pearly i really liked this poetry 😊..very apt for Sahir

this for reason reminded me of the beauty n the beast scenario...πŸ€”

Sahir is just like that beast in movie...who had a rough exterior n he cocooned his love n soft side in himself which can only be brought out by some1's true love n affection

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