CV's SERIUOSLY Needs to WORK on.....

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Something is missing in editing. The scene sequences are missing to create the fuller impact. Somewhere it looks choppy and missing some emotions to create the full impact. More finer shots are needed to capture the finer emotions to get the finer Scenes.

The Female Lead needs to work on her acting skills especially in her facial expression when she messed up something. Pulling off the Funny Scenes are not easy, as she is a new comer she have serious struggles in getting it right. She needs to work on that area.

She can do some homework by reading few finer nuances of acting and getting it right
http://bassbrass.org/movie/Actors/Facial%20Expressions.html

Eyes are the window to someones soul. If you get the eye expressions right that will get you the job done. The eye makeup can be improved for the Female Lead so that it can help her a bit more in expressions. Rather than simply lining in the Lower and Upper crease, create a definition to the eye. It will get an attitude.

The drama needs speed in the screenplay. Ofcourse the story will move slowly but the viewers should not feel that the story is moving slow. The speed in the screenplay can compensate that.

Looking forward for the Improvements...





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Agree on editing just that I seriously wonder if this show has a writer or every day the CV and director get together and decide what to shoot ... they shoot it hand it to editors who just put scenes together without noticing anything and bang epi ready ... because if there was a writer you would expect some flow in scenes and situations at least, some depth, some detailing ... here its mostly like patch work (wont say always but mostly) ... take one from here one from there ... whether it makes even slightest sense or not don't worry ... just put the epi on air.

Certainly not something i expect from 4 lions
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soaps1

Agree on editing just that I seriously wonder if this show has a writer or every day the CV and director get together and decide what to shoot ... they shoot it hand it to editors who just put scenes together without noticing anything and bang epi ready ... because if there was a writer you would expect some flow in scenes and situations at least, some depth, some detailing ... here its like patch work ... take one from here one from there ... whether it makes even slightest sense or not don't worry ... just put the epi on air.

Certainly not something i expect from 4 lions



You echoed my views
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For me Humsafars is not normal and up to the mark in production quality and script even by the standards of daily soaps ... its' too obvious and I just don't get why is it so. And why they have made no effort to improve on these things even slightly ever since people have been pointing them out. As 4 Lions is an experienced PH with hit shows ... i don't know what in the world is even going on. Take example of yesterday epi, it is supposedly the beginning of leads coming close and they don't even give a second though that what they r showing should make at least little sense ... conveniently ignore even the slightest thought
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soaps1

For me Humsafars is not normal and up to the mark in production quality and script even by the standards of daily soaps ... its' too obvious and I just don't get why is it so. And why they have made no effort to improve on these things even slightly ever since people have been pointing them out. As 4 Lions is an experienced PH with hit shows ... i don't know what in the world is even going on. Take example of yesterday epi, it is supposedly the beginning of leads coming close and they don't even give a second though that what they r showing should make at least little sense ... conveniently ignore even the slightest thought



The leads lack chemistry... its very obvious the female lead is struggling in expresions and causing the impact...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Totally agree with the thoughts, even the changing of the director does not help her expressions, she needs to work on each and every one of them, for matter yesterday episode in the car when they head butt each other, it was totally blow off, I was wishing when it will be done. HC was awesome as long as the camera was on him the scene was conveying the emotion, the moment FL comes into frame it looses its lusture...even the comedy scene were left feeling me empty...after a month of into the character I was hoping she will show some improvement but alas... Even the scene when a stranger approaches you in the middle of a forest the expression of fear./intimidation, was missing...now they have reduced me to watching one episode a week or choose the episode where I get to watch a lot of Sahir...
I am all up for new people and being optimistic..so still hoping she will improve...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I've tried watching this show so many times, but the female lead just lacks depth in every emotion and the show comes off looking amateurish. Also, the scenes don't flow very well. I'm always left confused. Oh well for me I guess.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The production quality is mediocre to say the least. The production house just found untrained directors, took a few scenes from their hit production serials, introduced 50's 60's looking vamps and viola a serial is produced.

I know that Harshad's PR machine is at play here; as it is in all his serials, and his acting will never be spoken of in a bad light. But here I find his expressions completely off in some scenes. It seems like he is lost and does not quite understand his character. They have hardly developed it, and they are onto the romantic scenes. The development of his character, would involve more work for the production team, why would they do it??


Shivya is one of the better newcomers, that I have seen. She totally understands her character and is fully into it. Maybe the production house worked more on her character. As far as her expressions go, think it is the fault of the director. How many directors do they really have?



Is Yash Raj also churning out serials on tight budgets as it's movies? Quality and promotion of movies jaye bhar mein, bas bahut saari movies aur serials produce karni hai.
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