My Opinion on this Current Track

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It has been a while since I have written a post, though have been visiting this forum everyday and reading on everyone's post. So here it goes.

Given this new Brain Tumor Track, It has certainly brought HD back in contention with other ongoing Sitcoms on Zee and other networks. We have definitely seen the TRP's increase and believe the fan base of HD has also increased. But the CV's are creating to many loopholes and bloopers within the current track. There is lack of continuity from one episode to the next. The creatives need to focus on Rishi and Indira. Rishi needs to learn of Indira's Illness and the creatives need to show the pain, emotions and struggle and care of a husband Rishi towards his wife Indira. The creatives need to show how a husband deals with the situation and supports his wife in this trying times. Creating unnecessary twists within this track is not warranted. If the creatives follow through with their current theme, this track will end up like the Kidnapping track and we all know that it was a big failure.

This is just my opinion and hope that you all share yours within this post.

Thanks.

Sal. Hari

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Actually I do agree with u.. Sometimes the episode ends with indira fainting, but the next day's episode will just start with a brand new day... I mean , sometimes I just dun get it.. Since the family has been witnessing indira fainting a few times, then why dun they bring her to a doc...?? Or at least start the episode from where it ended the previous day...
Well this is what I feel & have been wondering about... Not sure who else share the same feeling... Hmmm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rupzgal

Actually I do agree with u.. Sometimes the episode ends with indira fainting, but the next day's episode will just start with a brand new day... I mean , sometimes I just dun get it.. Since the family has been witnessing indira fainting a few times, then why dun they bring her to a doc...?? Or at least start the episode from where it ended the previous day...
Well this is what I feel & have been wondering about... Not sure who else share the same feeling... Hmmm



One of many bloopers.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏Agreed👏

Looks like CV's want to show couple of things happening in this track and they are just doing that... showing couple of scenes with no story-telling or continuity. Their work is so patchy, it looks like they have not thought the track through. Forget about thinking abt the whole track end to end, they seem to have not planned well what they want to show for a week. This way this track may get trps for a while, but might soon lose the charm because the intensity and the suspense element will fizz out if u have weak story telling.

Also, i agree they shud involve Rishi and involve soon. In EHMMBH, the scenes I liked more were when the girl's family get to know the truth and how they struggle with the truth. Her individual struggle how much ever well well executed was hard for me to watch because its too sad and devoid of hope. Pls don't mind my comparison, but I want HD to get good TRP's.

With this track HD might have a good plot but it definitely lacks the script and creativity. Buck up CV's
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: n7genius

👏Agreed👏


Looks like CV's want to show couple of things happening in this track and they are just doing that... showing couple of scenes with no story-telling or continuity. Their work is so patchy, it looks like they have not thought the track through. Forget about thinking abt the whole track end to end, they seem to have not planned well what they want to show for a week. This way this track may get trps for a while, but might soon lose the charm because the intensity and the suspense element will fizz out if u have weak story telling.

Also, i agree they shud involve Rishi and involve soon. In EHMMBH, the scenes I liked more were when the girl's family get to know the truth and how they struggle with the truth. Her individual struggle how much ever well well executed was hard for me to watch because its too sad and devoid of hope. Pls don't mind my comparison, but I want HD to get good TRP's.

With this track HD might have a good plot but it definitely lacks the script and creativity. Buck up CV's



The current track is a bit personal to me because my Sister passed away two years ago of Malignant Brain Tumor. I have seen the pain of my parents, my brother-in-law and the family. I have also witnessed the financial burden it creates and the struggles a family goes thru. So far HD has not produced such emotions of any family members. I also agree with your opionion, the creatives have a good plot but they lack the creativity.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So Sorry to hear about your Personal loss . 😔
One can only imagine how strongly this track would be resonating with your Heart and senses . 😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good observation.In fact,there is no chain-of-events whatsoever in "HD",at present.I mean,at times,esp. during the trial track,Rishi had been shown as a witty person,intelligent and smart,who read people's motive so easily.But now,he has mysteriously turned dumb.He can't even read between the lines,e.g.,Indira very often talks about having very little time left;that he should get re-married,etc.Such words and such actions can never be taken lightly in real life;it would scare us.Besides,whenever Indira is visiting a doctor,she goes alone;whereas in such condition,when a woman is expecting,either the husband,or any other family members always accompanies.Here,Rishi doesn't even know the situation,he is not even made curious to see the sonography,which usually excites the father-to-be.Moreover,Rishi is deliberately made a dumb character at present,by the writer and CVs,probably to show the importance of the protagonist.

In one word,the writer has poorly characterized the character Rishi and other;focusing the story only from the protagonist's perspective.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sphari403



The current track is a bit personal to me because my Sister passed away two years ago of Malignant Brain Tumor. I have seen the pain of my parents, my brother-in-law and the family. I have also witnessed the financial burden it creates and the struggles a family goes thru. So far HD has not produced such emotions of any family members. I also agree with your opionion, the creatives have a good plot but they lack the creativity.


sorry to hear about your loss... it must have been painful..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I agree with all of you. End of the one episode should be connected to next. Appears to me that next show starts in the middle and we missed out the biginning . Very frustrating indeed. We come to know that every thing is rushed. In HD ,. It would have great to see conservation between Rishi and Indira after some of the ending you all have mentioned.
Sorry to read about your personal lost. it must be very hard to deal with this current track.!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: twila

So Sorry to hear about your Personal loss . 😔

One can only imagine how strongly this track would be resonating with your Heart and senses . 😔



Thanks for understanding my loss. Though at some point in time we move on because life moves on, but my sisters memory never fades.

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