SS: Arranged Marriage - SaRa: Last part/pg-3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey all i am back with my another SS... đŸ„ł

you people might be thinking that i gone mad đŸ€Ș that i am writing daily one or the other stories...😆

I thought i wrote FF, OS then why not a Short story (SS) so here i am

this is short story of may be 3 to 4 chapters.

today i am posting the first chapter.. hope you will enjoy 😳


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Chapter-1 Page-1
Chapter-2 Page-2
Chapter-3 Page-3
Chapter-4 Page-3
Epligoue Page-3

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Indira wandering in her room cursing her mother for nth time. Mandira is applying lipstick sitting on the bed ignoring Indira's curses. Indira goes and remove the lipstick from mandira's hand disturbing her lips.

Mandiar makes a face "di, aap mom kaa gusaa mujhe pe kyu vutaar raha hoo.. dekho kama kaaam mera lipstick karab kardi ya"

Indira "you are bothered about your lipstick, here my life is in danger. Oh god again another match. Delhi ki sare ladkho ko shaadi ka alava aur koi kaam nahin hain kya"

Mandira "why are you worried di, as usual when they ask you to talk with the guy either you damkaavo the guy or I will talk with the guy's brother or friend to reject the match. Simple hogaya"

Indira "how many times I will do that" biting her nails.

Immediately Mandira pulls her hands "di, I have applied nail polish with so much care. You are spoiling everything"

Indira sighs heavily and prays "oh god please, make that guy reject this match. mom ki taraha 100 nariyal chadavoo gi"

Mandira disturbs her prayers "di, vasia have you see jiju's" Indira glares at mandira immediately she corrects " mean guys pic, he is looking so handsome. You both will make a good pair"

Indira "dekho mandira, if you want a big share of my pocket money for this month you will do as I say."

Mandira mummers "Hitler kahi ki, everytime blackmail me" and gives her a fake smile "ok di as you wish. But agar mera boyfriend nahin hota tho maaa mom sa kaha thi ke mujhe iss ladka sa shaadi karao' wow he is looking so handsome" Indira did not even glances at the picture still planning how to flop the match.

Indira Sharma 22 years old, elder daughter of Kutumb and Inder Sharma. She completed her graduation 6 months back and wants to either go for higher studies or want to do some job to her qualification. But Kutumb is well-bent on marrying way Indira. Kutumb always says the same sentiment dialogue of all mother, "aree higher studies or job ki kya jarurath hain. We are becoming old and more over we have two daughters for marriage and it is not a joke to get good guys these days." Inder tried his best to explain kutumb but waste of his energy, kutumb wonot listen. She wants her both daughter get married before Inder retires from his business.

Indira hates marriage at the most the arranged marriages. She hates to get decorated and sit infront of so called supposed would-be and his family. She imagines as if she is visiting a Zoo fully getting ready in saree or lengha. She successfully rejected or got rejected by 24 matches. Either Indira warns the guy to reject or she will blindly rejects the guy or sometimes takes help of mandira to bagavoo the guy's family. Today she has no such chances because Kutumb is well-bent to fix this match, she warned both Indira and Mandira to behave well. The match is from Diwan's - one of the rich and well known family in the society. That is the reason Indira is praying all gods to help her to reject the match.

A guys is happily sleeping on his bed, the alarm starts ringing 9o clock. The guy tries to switch of the alarm making it fall from the table. The alarm rolls on the floor towards the entrance door of the room. Rishi stops the clock and picks it in his hand stops the alarm, looks at his elder brother who is still sleeping oblique to the world.

Rishi shakes his head and goes near his bed "Sameer, get up. We need to go to see the girl today."

Sameer rises his head alittle trying to look into Rishi's eyes but pulls his sheet on his face burying his head in the pillow.

Rishi sighs "aree mera bhai, tum hari shaadi hain meri hain. You are sleeping as if you donot care"

Sameer mummers "exactly I donot care. Please let me sleep, I donot want to marry"

Rishi shakes his head "go and tell mom about this, she liked this match very much and she is so impressed with the girl that if it is possible she wants you to marry this girl today itself"

Sameer keeps a annoying face as Rishi pulls off the sheet from his face, very reluctantly gets up from the bed "Rishi please help me, I donot want to marry not this girl but no one till at least-" Sameer scratches his head and says "5 years"

Rishi "I donot think mom will allow you, she want to see her grand children soon. So it is waste of time, just go and get ready. We need to start @ 10"

Sameer "Rishi please, please help me to escape this marriage. I will give you whatever you want"

Rishi gets tempted "think before promising, will you give me anything"

Sameer without thinking "anything mera bhai, anything"

Rishi "then I want your sports car, deal"

Sameer glares at Rishi, Rishi gives a silly smile.

Sameer takes a deep breath and says "fine"

Rishi "yahoo, ok then just nod your head as no when mom asks you anything ok"

Sameer "sure" sameer goes to freshen up.

As soon as he comes Rishi "sam have you seen the girls pic, she is looking beauitful, agaar mein natasha ka saath serious nahin hota tho shaayad i would have think about this girl"

Sameer "cut the crap Rishi, when I have no interest in marrying then why should I see the girl's pic unnecessarily" throws the wet towel on Rishi earning a punch from Rishi.

Sameer Diwan, 28 years, business man. He is handling his father's business Diwan builders. He is a perfect business man. He donot want to marry as he feels marriage is a distraction to his business goals and feels no girl is worth to disturb his goals.

So, Indira Sharma and Sameer Diwan are going to face each other today. Will the sparks fly between them when they meet or both will be successful in rejecting each other. Let's see what happens next'

Edited by preethimadhavg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Preethi. I successfully applied ur technique and succeeded. I am happy and i loved this ss. Come back soon with updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhanya.r

Hi Preethi. I successfully applied ur technique and succeeded. I am happy and i loved this ss. Come back soon with updates.



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Thanks for liking the SS 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I really enjoyed while reading ur SS..Well written awesome SS..keep it up...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey preethi nice concept...im yet 2 read all ur ffs...i ve started all bt nt completed any😆on top of dat ur speed of updating is faster than my speed of reading😆
bt im looking forward 2 dis 1 as well😃im so gald dat d sharmas n diwans r much more saner than d actual characters in d show...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ur back i was kinda surprise tht yesterday only u wrote an OS nd today SS u have nice thinking ability unlike me have to think twice thrice before writing cuming back to ur SS again amazing
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hey all thanks for reading my SS and here is my next update 😊
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Chapter-2

Kutumb is busy in arranging everything. Her both sons Munna Sharma and Vidith Sharma and their wifes Sunania and Seema are busy following the orders of Kutumb. Inder is silently sitting on his chair reading his newspaper as if nothing is happening in the house. He is sure Indira might have planned some mischief to make the guy and his family run away.
Kutumb "aree sunania ye kya ab thak pakoda nahin bana, ladka vala aatha hi honga. I donot want any complaints"
Sunanina "mummy ji, aap shant hojayeya aur vasa bi Indira might have planned something to get away from this match"
Kutumb "iss baar koi gadba nahin hogi, I wonot allow Indira to talk with that guy at all"

By 10.30 AM Diwan family Mr. & Mrs. Diwan, Rishi and Sameer reached Sharma Nivas. Kutumb and Inder received them with a full of honor. Sameer kept a plastic smile for the sake of his mother. Rishi is enjoying the importance given to them. Sameer is sitting impatiently to say 'no' and run from there, he is having a meeting after this. To his mother's disappointment Sameer planned his next appointment just an hour from now.
Sameer whispers "Rishi where is the girl, I have to attend the meeting. Please ask her to come soon"
Rishi "Sam, shut up who told you to fix the appointment at this hour. Have some patience and try to smile a little"
Seema comes out first to serve the snacks.
Immediately Sameer tells to his mother "I did not like the girl, can we go"
Rishi nags Sameer says "if you want to marry her, vuska pati tumhara baad baja dega"
Sameer then notices her sindoor says "oh, ok"
Then comes Mandira with a broad smile says "namasta"
Sameer immediately turns towards Rishi says "mujhe lagtha hain ladki bohot choti hain, so I did not like her lets go"
Rishi "sam, good tum hara eye sight abeee teek hain, oh choti hain not your girl"
Sameer keeps a irritating face"expect my girl everyone are coming I think girl is not interested lets go", without thinking Sameer refered Indira as 'my girl', and he is about to get up some light falls on his face blinding his eyes, Sameer rises his head with irritation to see a girl coming out of her room in lehnga and the light is reflection of sunlight from the mirrors of her duppatta. Sameer sits with an open mouth looking at her. She is looking breath-takingly beautiful. With her red lehnga and minial make-up has enhanced her sharp features. She is looking like an angel in red lenhga coming towards him. Kutumb brings Indira down and makes her sit infront of the guests. Sameer is looking at the girl with a open mouth.
Rishi mistakes that Sameer is looking at the food infront of them says "Sam, close your mouth, it looks like you are seeing the food for the first time" Sameer turns towards Rishi shouts "kya?" making everyone look at them.

Indira comes out of the room with an annoyed look. Comes down and sits infront of everyone. Kutumb introduced her to everyone and when kutumb introduced Sameer, Indira dropped her eyelids without glancing at him. She sits infront of Sameer bending her head.

Sameer's sudden shout made Indira to raise her head and look at him. At the same time Sameer turned back to look at Indira. Their eyes met for the first time and locked for eternal, the sparks started flying in the air. Indira felt her breath caught in her throat looking into Sameer's eyes. He is looking devilishly handsome. With his rough look, broad shoulders and his T-shirt enhancing his well build body. He is looking like male model came from ramp. Indira never went for physical beauty but something in his eyes which made her capacitive. They both forgot that a lot of people are around them. Without saying a single word to each other they felt as if they know each other from long time. Sameer nods his head slightly towards Indira as if he is asking her to breath. Then Indira noticed that she stopped breathing. She takes a deep breath, swallowing the lump form in her throat. Looking at Indira's reaction Sameer smiles, it sends a thousand butterflies in Indira's stomach. She blushes and bends her head. Sameer breath stops this time seeing Indira's blush. She looks both sides and slowly rised her head to look into his eyes. She is behaving like a blushing bride for the first time in her life. If anyone has noticed this they might have fainted by now looking at the blush formed on Indira's cheeks. Sameer is openly admiring the beauty infront of him. If anyone noticed Sameer now they can say he is ready to marry Indira on the spot.

Sameer impatiently waits to talk with Indira alone. But to his bad luck kutumb already decided not to allow Indira to talk with Sameer as she fears Indira will sure do some mischief to cancel the match.
Kutumb politely says "we never allow the guy to talk with our girl, it is not our tradition. Please donot mind" Sameer gets disappointed where Indira keeps a sad face as she know why kutumb rejected.
Indira curses herself 'oh I think god is taking revenge on me not allowing me to talk with Sameer, I donot know why I feel I really like him' the self-realization give her a wave of shock, she actually like the guy whom she is seeing for the first time and never talked in her life but she really feels some connection with him.
On otherside Sameer 'oh I missed the chance to talk with her but not a problem I can talk with her once our marriage gets settled, wait a minute marriage, am I thinking of marriage' Sameer sits in a shocked state as realizes what his mind and heart are thinking.

Slowly Rishi says to her mother that Sameer is not happy with the match and gives some bahana.
Sameer's mother still asks "Sameer you did not like the girl" Sameer is in trans still thinking what he realized just now. When Rishi nags him, Sameer nods his head as no as Rishi said at house without hearing what his mother is asking. Sameer's mother gets disappointed and they gets up saying "we will let you know our wish as soon as we reach our home" Kutumb understands the inner meaning of the words and gets disappointed and says "ok ji as you wish"

Rishi makes Sameer to stand and drags him to the car. As soon as they reach the car Sameer pushes Rishi's hand asks "why you bought me out we still did not talk with them"
Rishi "are you sleeping, as you said mom rejected the match"
Sameer "kya, but mein tho-"

Sameer want to run back and shout "he want to marry Indira" but no words formed in his mouth. Sameer silently sits in the car thinking 'how can simple looks break my determination of not marrying and to concentrate on my goal. Her one look did the magic; I feel it is worth to marry her over my goals. God what is happening to me?'

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update looking forward to another beautiful piece of writing from you.😊
After rocking FF,OS ,and now a SS👏
Way to go...đŸ‘đŸŒ

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