FF on InShi (Ye Ishq Nahi Aasaan)[Part 4 on Pg-15] - Page 10

one more mind-blowing wu ...lovely ...

what is rishi mystery ...

nice part ...

but ya rickshaw puller n indu's convo in english .is not realistic .

u can put 3rd person pov ,or indu's or rishis pov in english .but using enmglish at chandni chawk wid a rickshawpuller seems funny .
next time b carefull of dat .

u write realy well.

nice one ...

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

nice part ...

but ya rickshaw puller n indu's convo in english .is not realistic .

u can put 3rd person pov ,or indu's or rishis pov in english .but using enmglish at chandni chawk wid a rickshawpuller seems funny .
next time b carefull of dat .

u write realy well.

Dear, when a writer narrates any story...he writes in a language which expresses the scenario in a better way. Not the language which those characters actually used. For example, the novels and long stories which we read in books, they have indian characters manytimes. But writer writes the dialogues in english because he thinks he can explain better in english. It happens with every book. Seconly, there are many many members on IF who dont know hindi. So i thought english is the best language to use.
And, OFCOURSE I KNOW DEAR, KI RICKSHA WALA BHALA ENGLISH ME KYUN BAAT KAREGA...HEHEHEHE. SO FUNNY. I hope you got my point.

Originally posted by: safe-n

nice one ...

but some ware i mconfused...the story ...i mean some thing is missing in ur ff...🤔/..

i know that many things are maybe missing. The backgroung and mystery. But i will reveal as the story progresses. I thought its better to show InShi scenario before I disclose other things...i am sorry if u are smwhere disappointed,,,i usually have very less time to write this FF...so i m not able to give longer and clearer updates...

oh gavie...i started to read your ff and was really surprised to read it...


your writing is really great and the intensity of the emotions thru your words is too good for words to describe...keep up yur good work...

waiting for ur part 4...

Originally posted by: sonudew

oh gavie...i started to read your ff and was really surprised to read it...


your writing is really great and the intensity of the emotions thru your words is too good for words to describe...keep up yur good work...

waiting for ur part 4...

hey thanx a lot dear. Its a great motivation when i get responses like this. I will update the next part tomorrow.