Pookie Wookie Boo | Chapter 3 | Page 4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: krepe

its lubli........waiting for the next one 😃

Thanx! 😳😃

Originally posted by: umrao_jaan

It's awesome!!!I specially love the way you shift from Traya's POV to Jayda's POV and vice versa!!! It makes the whole story more interesting and powerful. I'm a bit confused with writing the twins names but will get more used to it I guess! I LOVED that part when I LOVE YOU was doodled on James face. Just one suggestion-don't use emotcions in your writings.
Nutzie 😉

Usually we don't but it was a heart drwn on his face so it fit! I'll keep that in mind though! Thanx!

Originally posted by: Mini786

Hey!
Very nice..
Cant wait..
Please continue!
😃

-Mahak-

Thanx Mahak! We'll continue soon!

dis fan fic was ammmmzing.....
i like your idea of twins !!!...
it gives a very diferent feeling to whole thing...
waiting to read more....
Kittens

I love it and very funny at parts. Please post soon 👏 👏

It was so cute!!!!! made me laugh so much!!!
the style is really good!!!!
great job!
want to read next part soon...

The other writer has just joined IF! Her ID is Jayda_Carmon 😃 😃

Originally posted by: pm4eva

The other writer has just joined IF! Her ID is Jayda_Carmon 😃 😃

Heyy peoples. You guys are like soo nice 😆

I'll hurry with the part I'm writing right now just because reading all those comments put me in such a lovely mood!!

😳

OH, and guys! We promise every update will be as long as the first one! About 2000 words! 😃 😃

Hey that is a really cool fan fic
pls continue soon 👏 👏