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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
arent we all!
take ur time sweets!
in editing it now ;)
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
cool story. just luuuuuuuuuuuved it. post next chpt soooooooooooooooooooooooooooon.

u guyz r having a hectic time? i'm having summer holidays. still i've got 2 complete my hwsssssssssss...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
Hey, everyone, this chapter, was writtin kinda in a hurry, so if its not good forgive me.. just have a lot of stress and all....
thanxx to my editor viash...
and everyone who reads this stroy


"So Lily how was the dance?" Alice asked at breakfast buttering her toast.

"Actually, it was-"

"Mine was better then awesome." Nicolle said cutting Lily off.

"I know, mine too!" Alice exclaimed.

Alice and Nicolle began talking about the dance, while Lily sat and listened with a fake smile on her lips.

Why do they always do that? They always ask but never let me answer, it's like they don't care about me-- No, that's not why, this is what friend ship is about…sharing things, but I wish sometimes just sometimes they would let me share, it's just rule obeying Lily Evans for them.

"---he was the best dancer!" Nicolle was saying.

Lily once again dazed back into her thoughts but this time they focused only around the hazel eyes that had slowly taken over her every feeling.

"Heya Lily." Tanu said as she took a seat next to her.

"You seem lost, everything O.K?" She asked

"I'm good, you?" she replied.

"Same old, same old." Tanu replied, "Hey how was the dance?"

"It was okay." She lied, "how bout yours?"

"Actually, I didn't go!" Tanu replied.

"Why not?" Lily asked curiously.

"Well, ---yea I didn't know we were having a dance." She said, and then hurriedly added, "I wouldn't go even if I knew."

"Wait, you didn't know, it was the only thing talked about for two weeks." Lily said highly amused.

"Hey, I was busy!" she replied.

"Sure…. Anyways if you knew, you wouldn't go?"

"Nope, I don't go to dances, don't wear dresses, and lastly, I don't dance." She replied as if that was the only thing she had said in 2 weeks.

"Interesting!"

After a pause Lily walked off to the heads dorm, she didn't feel like talking.

"Galuchi." Lily said absent mindly.

The door swung open hitting her with a bitter, sweet aroma. She walked cautiously over to James who was making a potion. He was sitting on the coach with a book in his lap, scratched his head in puzzlement. His brows stitched in deep thought.

"You need help?" Lily asked casually.

"Umm, yea if you could that'd be great." He replied relief apparent in his voice.

"What is this for?" Lily asked casually looking into the cauldron.

"Slughorn gave me a potion to do for breaking 5 of his most valued cauldrons." He replied.

"Oh, I see."

Lily took a seat next to him, "JHere, let me see the book." She read the instructions three times before peeking into the cauldron once more.

"You added too much sendu vile." She said, "Your ganna have to redo the whole thing."

"Oh Man!" James said hitting his with the book, then rubbing his head furiously.

That was so cute--- Wha—Snap out of it Evans…

"I'll help you."

"You will?" James asked peering over the book.

"Yea, its not like I have anything else to do." Lily replied, mentally kicking herself for saying she'll help him. It would take 5 hours for this to finish, how was she going to survive.


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"Ahhhh, James your doing it all wrong."

"Well Lil—hey you called me James!"

"Don't get to overly excited, I just said that because I felt frustrated."

"So I should frustrate you more, so you'll call me James?"

"No, just pass the kinkudok."

"What's that?"

"It's the little green thing."

"Are you talking about your eyes? Why I would never do such a thing that should harm your beautiful eyes."

"OH POTTER, NOT AGAIN, JUST GIVE ME THE GREEN BOTTLE."

"Okay no need to shout sweetums."

"Don't call me that!"

"SHUT UP BOTH OF YOU!!!!" Gryffindor shouted from his painting, "Five hours straight you guys have been fighting. I need peace and quiet. I'm going to visit my ol' pal fruity."

"Fruity?" James asked his face with sudden seriousness.

"Yes, any problems?"

"Oh no, it's just that, that name fruity is such a fruity name."

"Bye!" Gryffindor said agitated with the two teens.

"Fruity?" James asked again looking over at Lily.

The both busted out laughing. "Hey Lily, fruity is calling!"

It took about three straight minutes for them to calm down. "Hey look the potion is ready!" Lily said excitedly, this potion was such a advanced potion that even Lily had looked baffled.

"Yea, now imagine Slughorns face when I hand him this!" James said closing his eyes, as if ot imagine the fury in Slughorns face.

"Hey Lily," James said, "Thanks for helping me out, it really helped."

"It's nothing." Lily said quietly.

"Hey Evans, want to go out sometime."

"Not in a million years Potter."

Leave your reviews, i love reading them..
😃

~~~Mahak~~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
i'm lucky!!! i got 2 review it 1st!!! 😃

it was just cooooooooooool. post next chpt fast plz plz plz. 😉

cum on evans, why the hell don't u say yes to potter 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
😆 😆 😆
i already reviewd, technically, after editing but ill do it again!

awesum chap!!!!!!!!!!!!!

take ur time if its bin 2 busy!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
Really brilliant!!

Cont soon
Can't wait to read teh next chapther!!

Nikita
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
hey guys
thanxx for the awsome reviews.....
I'll try my best to continue soon....
but anyways...
thank you to my sweet editor viash...
im working on the plot..
Oy Sam where are you??
😃

~~~Mahak~~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
wow mahak..
first of all sorry for reviewing late as was out of time so finished reading the last two chapters..
they were awesome..
please do give us a bit long chapter to enjoy it thts a request😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
thank you lovelyprincesst
actually im trying to work on longer chappies but skewl is such a drag and i (being stupid) took all honors causing classess to be harder!!!
ill try tho
😃

~~!~Mahak~~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
Hey....
Next Chappie....
Oh and thanxx to Viash I know that this is kinda confusing so remember that most of htis is in James POV...PLease read and Review....

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"Oh man I feel like eating sugar cookies!" Tanu said as she took a seat next to Peter. "You know what I'm ganna go get some!" she said standing up.

"No hi, no bye, it's all cookies for this girl." Sirius said shoving loaf bread into his already filled mouth.

"And it's all food for you." Remus said disgusted at the site of Sirius.

"Hey guys..." Alice said sitting next to me, while Nicolle said nothing and plopped down next to Sirius, who had stopped eating and was now fidgeting with the napkin on his lap.

"H-hi Nicolle." He said uncertainly and was now staring at something right above his head.

"Ah Sirius mate, you ok?" I asked him.

"Yea James, I'm fine, great, couldn't be better, hey aren't we getting late for transfiguration?" Sirius said hurriedly.

"Yea, we are, let's go." Remus said, looking rather pale.

Looks like full moon is coming up.

We took our regular seats and even before Minnie begin teaching; Sirius started throwing notes to me.

"Right on time Miss. Evans, have a seat." Minnie said briskly.

Wow, Evans almost late, wonder what's up with her.

About ten minutes later a panting Tanu stumbled in, "What's your excuse this time Miss. Salim?" Minnie asked heatedly.

"Professor D-"

"-Had you running some errands." Minnie cut in.

"Yes Professor, I'm glad we understand each other; it makes things so much-"

"Meet me tonight at eight for detention!"

"-easier." Tanu finished, sighing. She took a seat next to Evans, who had her head down, not taking notes.

OH MY GOD, EVANS NOT TAKING NOTES!! Something must be wrong!! But her friends seem fine.

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"What are you wearing at the Christmas ball tonight?" Alice asked Lily, who looked paler then usual.

"We're having a ball, since when?" Tanu asked.

"Ya know Tanu sometimes when I talk to you I feel like I'm talking to a tree.." Sirius said.

"What why?" Tanu asked.

"Well we talked for a whole hour about the ball, and your asking if we're ganna have a ball!"


"Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, short term memory. Anyways who are you guys going with?"

"Well all three of us don't have dates." Nicolle said sadly.

"Oh, how bout you four?" She asked the guys.

"We don't have dates either." Sirius said.

"Really..." Tanu asked baffled.

"We didn't ask anyone." I said, my eyes flicked to Evans who was sitting there lifeless.

"Oh." Was all Tanu said.

"Are you going to come Tanu?" Alice asked.

"Yea, I'm coming."

"What happened to, I don't dance-" Nicolle began, mimicking Tanu.

"I said I'm coming!" Tanu exclaimed, her eyes never leaving Evans, who stood up, and suddenly ran up the stairs and disappeared into her room.

"Yea, we should leave too." Alice said, "Gotta get ready for the dance."

"We have three hours!" Sirius said appalled.

"We're girls!" Alice said, walking out with Nicolle.

"I'm ganna help Lily get dressed." Tanu said bounding up the stairs.

"I guess we should leave too." Sirius said seriously.

"Why?" I asked in suspicion.

"I'm hungry and the kitchens are always open."

The three guys left, and I went to my room to get my homework *cough, prank, cough* finished.

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"I can't do this!" Lily cried and sobbed on her bed.

"Lily, I can't say I know how you feel, I mean your parents died-"

"Murdered-say the right word-murdered, by death eaters, and Professor Dumbledore says I have to act if everything is fine, how can he think I can do that?"

"Lily, professor Dumbledore said that for a reason, I don't know the reason, but, he's doing this for your own good. How bout this, lets go to the ball, and come back then talk."

"Here, go take a bath and we'll fix you up." Tanu said.

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She looked pretty, no that's not the right word, beautiful, nope still not there, amazing, no, extraordinary, no she's—ah—curse my low vocabulary. She looked like the blissful stars that stood out in the dark. Her silver dress fell gracefully down to the floor; her earrings bounced at her every step. Her beautiful hair curled and fell gracefully behind her shoulders. Everything about her was perfect – except her usual glow in her eyes was missing. Her usually brightly lit green eyes, were now dim, more like dull and dead. Her painful eyes wanted to make hem cry, weep for her happiness.

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"Hey Tanu, glad you're here I need your help!" Sirius said signing in relief.

"What's up?" I said casually looking around.

"Well I want to ask Nicolle to dance how do I do that?"

"It's simple, really just ask her!"

"Oh man Tanu your no help!"

"Dude just go up and ask her."

"What if she says no?"

"She won't."

"How do you know? Oh wait you know, because your from the future." Sirius said excitedly.

"No I don't know."

"Why not?"

"Because I only looked at the main points of your life, not details."

"This is a main point."

"To you, not to me!"

"Your mean!"


"Go ask her before I become mean!"

"FINE!!"

Sirius walked over to Nicolle stumbling a little.

Hahahaha, that loser!

He seemed to be struggling, and Nicolle seemed to be laughing.

Oh god I think she said yes

Yea she did she gave him her hand and they walked to the dance floor.

I smiled, but then looked side ways, I heard a whimper. There stood Mincy, next to me crying.

"What happened?" I asked her.

"Sirius like her!" She said sadly.

"Oh!" I said biting back a laugh. I ran out of there, didn't want that girl to see me laughing at her.

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Slowly he made his way toward her. She was standing in one corner, looking lost.

"Hi!" I said to her.

"Hi." She answered distractedly.

"Uh..Lily."

She looked up at the sound of her name.

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She was caught off guard.

His eyes, she knew those eyes, but from where?

OH MY GOD, he was the masked guy that had Lily dazed. Potter was the masked guy!!!

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He pointed upward.

"Oh no…" she groaned, she and James were standing directly under the mistletoe.

"Hurry and get this over with." Lily said roughly.

They moved closer and closer…

But James suddenly backed off. Lily looked at him quizzically.

"I want our first kiss to be just there not forced."

"If you move away you know what will happen right?" Lily asked.

"I'll be hanged upside down for five minutes, with paint bubble hitting me, but its for you, its worth it!" and with those words James moved back, and was pulled into the air, and paint spluttered every where.

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A new found respect made its way toward Lily, James Potter, wasn't what he used to be he had change, yes he did pranks but those that made everyone laugh, even the one who got pranked. He didn't just pick on the Slytherins unless they did something wrong. He had changed.

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Nicolle and Sirius stood in each others hands staring into each others eyes.

She was just perfect in everyway.

He was just perfect in everyway, but she didn't just want to be a toy for him!

"Whoa Potters hanging upside down with paint bubbles shooting at him, it's hilarious."

Some one said, both Nicolle and Sirius made there way to James who was getting pantified as Sirius put it.

James was put down, a little roughly.

"Ha-ha, James you looked so funny, how'd it happen."

James looked around, "who every stands under the mistletoe, just kiss your partner, or worse will come!"

Thank you Viash for editing
thanks to everyone who reads and reviews...
I Love reviews!!!
😃

~~~Mahak~~~
Edited by Mini786 - 19 years ago

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