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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sunaha, this update was fabulous with Avita's reunion and shaadi. I loved it completely. Thank goodness the marriage happened without any problems and even their SR. Now RV can't really want Arpi but he might want Avita dead for disobeying him. I had a gut feeling that the man was Rv when the entered the home, Arpi should have asked Avi before opening the door to strangers. Now they are in trouble. But maybe little sunaha could help face off RV, like throw ice cream at his face and throw kid punches.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ prashu priya, danooo and sidda and all...feels good when you comment guys...it makes a great differance to me...will LOVE you so much for it...since i can't thank you, i am going on with my lambi speech...ok,,,,enough of it now...here comes the unexpected end...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Can't imagine that GKD i ending in 5 more days...😭😭😭😭😭😭 and i am ending my FF today itself...🥱🥱🥱...Will miss you guys so muchhh...

Loads of LOVE,
Sun@h@


The End

Awdesh's expression turned pale. He was shocked to see Ran Vijay. He was supposed to leave last night. In fact Awdesh himself had dropped him at the airport and left to buy arpitha a gift. Awdesh spoke nothing. He stood silently searching for a valid reason.

Ran Vijay – "So, you got married. Your wife is beautiful. I must say, your choice is good."

Awdesh smiled thoughtfully. Did He not recognize her? Or is he just trying to cheat him. Everything was confusing. In the mean time, arpitha came into the scene holding cup of coffee. While the two men were staring at her, arpitha handed the cup to Ran Vijay and stood behind Awdesh. Ran Vijay started gulping down the coffee and thoughtfully watched arpitha.

Ran Vijay – "I think I know you Miss. Sorry, Mrs. Awdesh Singh takhur."

Awdesh gestured her to leave and looked cautiously at ran Vijay. Did he recognize her truly? Pappu entered with Chulbul.

Pappu – "how are you my friend?"

Awdesh – "good. You were supposed to leave last night right!!!"

Pappu – "yeah, but you do know it right. Our master had a great fall in his bathroom singing his favorite song and landed up with an injury on his head. He forgets things often. These days it's grown too much. He even forgets his name sometimes. Yesterday he boarded a wrong flight. Thanks to the airhostess who had found it in time and dropped him back at the airport." *dono how you guys will react to it. I know its damn funny,,,,hehehehe….Bechara RV…usey Gajini bana diya,,,LOLZZZ*

Awdesh took a breath of relief. Yes, how did he forget that? Well, it was to happen to RV. He had deposited the wrath of many people and now he is going to repay it himself.

Pappu – "I am escorting him and will leave to the next flight and it's just in 2 hours from now. Shall we go RV?"

RV – "Who?"

Pappu – "This is the situation Awdesh. Fine, we are leaving and I won't return back either. Miss you my friend."

Pappu passed on a hug to Awdesh and left with RV. Awdesh was highly relieved and smiled at Chulbul.

Chulbul – "where do you want to go now?"

Awdesh (confused) – "what do you mean. Where would I go?"

Chulbul – " for the honeymoon."

Awdesh starts blushing. And Chulbul further teases him by imitating. Awdesh runs behind him and catches hold of him finally. Arpitha comes out with the breakfast and watches them fight playfully with a smile.

Chulbul – "bhai… wait what did I say wrong. Let's ask arpitha ji."

Awdesh gives him another hit and gestures him to leave.

Arpitha (laying the table for breakfast)– "what is Chulbul ji talking about?"

Awdesh comes silently with a lovely look and holds arpitha through her waist from behind.

Awdesh – "you really want to know."

Arpitha – "aham…"

Awdesh (shouts) – "oye…Chulbul…book two tickets. Your babhi wants to go to."

Arpitha (worried) – "where? I don't want to go anywhere. Without you I will go nowhere"

Awdesh – "without me what will you do alone on a honeymoon?"

Arpitha understands him straight and blushes. Awdesh doesn't let her go away and held's her against the table. He comes near her and whispers into her ears.

Awdesh – "so where does my LOVE desire to go?"

Arpitha blushes and lowers her head.

Awdesh – "tell me. It will be anywhere you desire."

Arpitha – "to the bungalow in the forest. Remember."

Awdesh smiles and hugs her tight.

Awdesh – "yes, my Lady. As you wish"

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The bungalow was cleaned and everything all a fresh. Arpitha walked down the lawn and remembered her good olden days. While she blushed, a strong hand encased her waist and sent a happy smile across her lips.

Awdesh – "did you like it?"

Arpitha – "yes"

Awdesh – "I want to know what you like and wish as a gift from me. Please ask arpitha. On this happy occasion I want to gift you something."

Arpitha turned around facing him, and still is in his hug. She cups his chin in her hands and smiles.

Arpitha – "my most precious gift is with me. What else do I need more? Ahhh yes…I do need a gift from you."

Awdesh – "and that is?"

Arpitha – "a promise"

Awdesh – "I do promise. Now tell me what did I promise?"

Arpitha (with lots of love for him) – " that you shall never leave me in your life."

Awdesh – "Never."

Awdesh holds her tender waist tight in his arms and kisses her while; the entire forest watches it in silence.



❤️ with Mohabbat❤️

Sunaha

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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
all the silent readers...its now or never...come on yaar...do comment...you likes are equally important to me and your comments are much more worthier to me...
Suhana6 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

hehehe...so back to your first comment position priya...coool
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Sunaha6


hehehe...so back to your first comment position priya...coool


i am back with bang 😎

i was first in intro and i am in last part too 😎

btw waiting for Mela 2 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
well anusha
i just love this part too
u r OS is very romantic.and end toh mindblowing tha
i miss u so much na😭😭😭
Edited by danno - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Anusha🤗🤗🤗

Well ..an unexpected end😛 nd I tot there wld be dishoon dishoom😆😆

Never mind...As long as Avita are together..I don have any probs😳 Wld love it always😳

Nd Btw..Ranvijay is ghajini🤣🤣🤣 Memory Loss...Nd tht dialogue...When Pappu says shall we RV? nd RV asks who??🤣 This left me in splits🤣

Again Anusha..ur FF was as magical as Mela😳

You are romance queen dear☺️ Romance in the each part of the FF was beautiful

Mohabbat was Mindblowing, superb, excellent👏 Loved it to the core⭐️⭐️⭐️


And One more thing...

We will be Friendz..nd u have to come on Forum after show ends too😳😳 with new FFs and Os's😛


Thts an order😆😆😆





Love ya always❤️

Hugs to you🤗



Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Suhaha dear thankyou sooo much for such a lovely SFF

wow from the first to last up date its just mind blowing
😍

b Gajini RV was just great mind blowing hahaha,

u know , today's epi n the promo made me cry n ur sweet update bring my smile back , thanx for it dear😳

i just love ur writing ,👏

wow will wait for next os or ff hope u will write on Avita even after the show too😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Updated my post on page 12😊

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