Mohabat...(Short FF) the end- page 12

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Helooo my dear lovely people on GKD forum...missed you all tones and tones😭...my struggle for a job ended and i am now placed in a good MNC as a test engineer...😃
so i am back to entertain you...hope you'll like it...and i am not sure on when i am going to update it next...

happpy reading...:))

❤️Mohabat...💔

Part 1
After the long shower arpitha entered her balcony drying her long black hair. She looked from the edge of her eye onto the roads. The long abandoned road didn't scare her. In spite she watched at the road as if she wanted someone to come. Someone she waited for all the time. Someone, who was always in her heart and mind, interrupting her thoughts a small kid with her cute smile, hugged her from behind. Arpitha turned back to face her dearest friend. It was sunaha.

Sunaha-"didi (means sister)…chalo…lets have an ice cream"

Arpitha-"Now…Its getting dark…If uncle finds out, he'll get angry"

Sunaha-"we'll return soon. Please di"

Watching arpitha's stubborn expression sunaha used her ultimate weapon to plead her. She made a weeping face. Arpitha softened and finally accepted to go out with sunaha for an ice cream.

All the way sunaha talked endlessly. Arpitha tenderly smiled at her innocence, as she loved kids and Sunaha was her sweet friend. She knew her since her birth. Reaching the ice cream stall, sunaha jumped in excitement.

Arpitha (to the boy)--"Two strawberry please"

Sunaha-"Only two"

Arpitha -"yes. Only two"
Sunaha-"then what would you eat."

Arpitha smiled at the Sunaha's words. Arpitha bent down and kissed her.

Sunaha -"no!!Even for this kiss I am not Gonne give you my ice cream"

Arpitha (smiling)-"k. you can take both of them"

Arpitha took the ice cream and handed one to sunaha. Sunaha watched her for a while.

Sunaha – "Okay. You hold the ice cream till I complete this one."

Arpitha laughed at her. She loved Sunaha so much. With her around, she never felt the need of any friend. Sunaha visits her every day after school and tells her all that she did that day. Arpitha patiently listened to her and finds solace in her company. Why wouldn't she? Arpitha lead the life of an orphan even though she had a dad, who would just finance her living. Since her mother's death, arpitha was either placed in a boarding school or sent to her uncle's house for holidays. She never complained on her state. Her uncle was caring and friendly.

Arpitha walked silently with sunaha licking the ice cream fondly. There was some noise all of a sudden. Some noise of someone running. Someone ran past Arpitha sending her hair to fly. She turned and in no time a man in white kurtha ran hitting her hand. Arpitha dropped the ice cream. Sunaha started to weep watching her ice cream melt on the ground. Arpitha couldn't watch her in worry.

The man finally gets hold of the one he chased. She turned to him.

Arpitha (shouts)-"Heyyy…you…are you blind or what???"

The man who was raging with fury turns towards her. Watches an angelic figure dressed in white, shouting at him. Arpitha scans his face. His furious expression scares her. Still managing to hold her fearless expression,

Arpitha-"Umm…you dropped my ice cream"

The man threw the one he chased into the arms of his goons and walked towards the girl in attitude. Arpitha watched him with her eyes wide open. He was rough. He had wavy hair dancing as he moved. He had a strongly built body and brownish complexion. But his face was a part covered with dense beard. Arpitha for a while was taken aback by his manly attire. He proceeded to walk towards her and reached her.

Arpitha (a little nervous)-"i...i...Ice…….cream"

Sunaha –"why are you stammering didi…Hey you…because of you my ice cream fell down…"

Completing her sentence sunaha folded her little hands and looked at him demanding an answer. The man walked past them and bought an ice cream. He reached back arpitha and forwarded the ice cream. Arpitha stood silent and watched him. Her thoughts kept her busy.

Arpitha (Thinking)-"Who is he? I have seen him earlier. His face reminds me of someone. Who could that be?"

The guy simply forwarded the ice cream to sunaha. Ruffled her hair and smiled gently. Arpitha was still lost in her thoughts. The guy walked past her watching her curiously. He placed a step forward and would turn back to capture her image through his eyes.

In the background, the man who was chased somehow gets rid of the goons and picks a pistol and shouts.

Man-"Awdesh Singh takhur……….."

Arpitha almost froze as she heard the name. Her thoughts which were wandering came to a still now. It was Awdesh. Her AWDESH. While Awdesh was busy fighting the man he chased, arpitha walked slowly in joy towards him. All that she could see in front of her eyes now was just AWDESH. She felt as if her dream has come true. Her lost happiness is in front of her eyes.

Arpitha (Whispering to herself)-"Awdesh….it's you…Awdesh…"

While Awdesh was still busy fighting, arpitha walked in joy towards him. The man raised his gun and shot a bullet and it penetrated straight into the arm. Awdesh who bent down just in time, had drops of blood on his shoulder. It was arpitha who got shot. The world around her started blurring. All that she could see before her was her Awdesh, holding her in his hands.

Awdesh(strong and caringly)—"Arpitha…"

arey...kithey ja rahey ho ji...jara likewa button tho dabai diyo...😆😆😆arey...kithey ja rahey ho ji...jara likewa button tho dabai diyo...😆😆😆

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Part 2 - Page 3

Part 3 - Page 5

Part 4 - page 6

Part 5 - page 8

Part 6 - page 8

Part 7 - page 10 (my fav❤️)

The End -- Page 12


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yoga23priya thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sunaha 🤗 🤗




Whooopieee me first 🥳
WoW we are waiting for your OS and there you're back with bang😉

i am glad you took some time for us and wrote the OS...i truly appreciate for it 👏





it's seems to be interesting that Avi and Arpi know each other from before 😉

me waiting for next part 😳

love you 🤗

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sunaha dear.. Glad To See U Back
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sunaha dear,
It was realy nice,
I m pretty excited ,
Hope you will update soon,
N all the best for ur new job. 👍🏼
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hey anusha dear,
welcome back dear😆😃😃,
this OS is just mindblowing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
and this shayer is for u.........
phoolo se khushboo nahi aati tere bina
din ko chaiin nahi aata tere bina....
raat ko neend nahi aati tere bina..
aur kya keha....
chehre pe hasi aur dil me khushi nahi aati tere bina.,😳😳
Edited by danno - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Hey Sunaha dear.. Glad To See U Back


hai ramona dear....even i am happy to be back on the forum.......🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: joliefille

hey sunaha dear,
It was realy nice,
I m pretty excited ,
Hope you will update soon,
N all the best for ur new job. 👍🏼


@ bold......thank you so much..........

i think i'll take time to update....this week and next week are quite busily scheduled😕....so no chances of upadte.....Hope you guys will understand....😭😭😭😭......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hieeeeeeeeeee Anusha😳🤗🤗



I missed you too sweetheart....😭 and ur writing😭 and Ur back!!!🥳

Yayyyyy!!!!!


The FF was





Will wait fr ur update😳

They both are childhood sweethearts☺️☺️ nd they are waiting fr each other❤️

OMG!! Arpi is shot😲😭 But Avi is there na..! then nothing can happen to her😉


Sunaha is choo cute😳😉




for your new FF😉 and job!









Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i edited my post in Page 1😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ priya..........Luv ya toooooooooo dear.......i thought it as an OS first later decided to write it down in 3-4 parts........And thank you so much 4 all the luv...........❤️

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