Mohabat...(Short FF) the end- page 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Sunaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗



Welcome back!!!!!!!😳😳

OMG!!!!! Missed u so much!!!!😭😭🤗🤗

But what an awesome surprise u gave us with ur comeback!!😳😳

Really loved ur OS...👏👏

I can still feel the same magic in this part....⭐️⭐️

But u left the story in cliffhanger situation...😆😆

Plzz update soon..😃😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sunaha, it's a lovely OS but poor Arpi had to get shot. Hopefully Avi could save her before it's to late.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Updated my post on page 2
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunaha6

@ priya...Luv ya tooo dear...i thought it as an OS first later decided to write it down in 3-4 parts...And thank you so much 4 all the luv...❤️


when you wrote Arpi was shot then i was thinking about it...there is alots of story left in it like how they met and are they in love etc ..i am glad you are making short FF 😳

me waiting for my biryani in Paradise

love ya tooo 🤗

PS CKD rules No Sorry and Thanks
Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PS----I forgot that there is already a FF written by priya titled as "Forever with you...."
so changed the tilte to Mohabat..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunaha6

PS----I forgot that there is already a FF written by priya titled as "Forever with you..."
so changed the tilte to Mohabat...


hey sunaha 🤗

I was made to love you is my first FF which i am writing 😆 😆

i think you got confused with the OS which i wrote 😆 btw it was Waiting For You not Forever with you 😳

i never wrote any OS with that title and also i think Forever with you suits the FF then Mohabat 😳

love ya 🤗
Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i *unres* my post at first page
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, this was interesting

I love your descriptions of Avdesh. Just wonderful

I hope to read more

Yuks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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helooo folks...i completed my work early and managed to write...kindly forgive me if there are any typing mistakes.
Happy reading and a happy weekenddd


Part 2

Awdesh sat beside the bed with Arpitha's hand in his. He looked worried and let his fingers caress her forehead gently while she was fast asleep resting. The bandage on her hand disturbed her. She cuddled in her bed. Awdesh watched her and helped her rest comfortably. He watched her silently. Flashes of the past came straight in front of him.

It was a year ago. Arpitha was preparing for her term exams seriously in her college garden. Awdesh came that way to meet his friend. He walked past her and something wanted him to turn around. But he ignored that feeling and continued towards his friend. Arpitha looked at him carefully from behind and she was struck by something unusual.

Arpitha (to Awdesh)—"Excuse me"

Awdesh turned around. He could see only her pretty face in front of him. Arpitha spoke to him. But everything seemed to be in mute for him. He was just completely lost in her innocent face. Her flying hair was adding to her beauty. She looked amazing in short kurtha with a pencil in her hand. Arpitha's attire was so cute that he felt like kissing her on her cheek. He smiled at his silly thought. Since Awdesh was lost in his own thought s and didn't respond to her, arpitha became annoyed.

Arpitha (Waving her hand in front of his face)—"Hello…I am talking to you. Are you listening to me?"

Awdesh coming out of his trance identified the world around him and looks back at her.

Awdesh —"yeah. What do you want?"

Arpitha (surprised)—"what you mean by that, I am shouting from the past 10 minutes to step away from my bag. You are standing on my bag."

Awdesh looks down and steps back. He picks up her bag, dusts it and hands it over to her. Arpitha holds it and waits for him to leave it from the other end. Awdesh holds it and is not in the mood to leave it. Arpitha looks back at him questioning why he is not leaving her bag. He smiles and leaves the bag free. Arpitha puts her pencil in her bag and starts to move away from him. Awdesh is still watching her and desperately wanted her to look back. Arpitha hurries without looking back. He takes a deep breath and exits from there.

After his meeting is over with his friend, he comes back to the very same place of the garden where he saw arpitha in the morning. He sits there in some blind hope that she may come down to meet him. He waits till its dark and finally retires to go back. He was about to leave when he heard the sweet noise made by the bangles of some girl. He quickly hides behind the tree. Arpitha silently comes towards the spot and sits down with her bag. Seeing that no one is around, she pulls out her dairy and starts to write seriously. Awdesh watched her silently. He didn't want to disturb her. She would smile sometimes and blush the other.

A girl—"Arpithaaa. Come dear, we are getting late"

Arpitha closes herd dairy in haste and in a hurry drops her book behind and leaves the garden. Awdesh watches this and goes behind her with the book. But she is already gone. Awdesh searches for her and gives up. He looks down at the dairy in his hands. He looks around if anyone is watching him. He goes towards a bench and settles down. He places it on the bench beside him and closes his eyes in rest. Memories of the morning come in front of him. Her sweet little face disturbs him continuously. Air adds to his desperateness by blowing harder. His hair flies in all directions and irritates him. He opens his eyes and finds the book open and it's fortunately the same page that arpitha wrote earlier.

Awdesh hesitates initially but somehow tells his heart that he is not wrong and starts reading the dairy.

"Dear dairy. Today went on very well I gave my final exam. I am happy that finally my term exams are over. Apart from all this, something unusual happened today. I met a person*this bought a slight smile on Awdesh's face*. He is very manly. He teased me a bit. I liked it but didn't let him know that. He is good. I don't know why, but somehow I know he is a nice person. All my tension on giving the exam vanished with his smile.

Must tell you dairy he has a very sweet smile. Wish I could meet him again. I think I am thinking more about him. I must not, but the next moment he is again in my thought dairy, I don't know what to do. Help me out of this feeling dairy. What might he be thinking at this point of time? Does he remember me at least?

Dairy, am I falling for him????????????????????

No…no…Arpitha no….He is a stranger and let him be so.

Ok cya….bye dairy…Luv you loads and loads…miss me luv….byeee

LUV,

Arpitha"

Awdesh's happiness knew no bounds. He understood that arpitha was equally disturbed after their meeting that morning. He desperately waited for the next morning to meet her in person and tell her that he felt the same. He loved her too.


Chalo now you guys don't let me wait for your valuable comments...Comment for sure...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry guys i am in ahurry so can't PM you all...Plzzz Bear with me...

Luv,
Sunaha

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