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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is my new OS inspired by Arpitha's death and how Avdhesh will come to know the truth from Ran Vijay.

i hope everyone you all like it 😳

Dedicated to my devil baby Amna and Jo🤗

Note : please don't kick me after reading it and i am warning everyone that there will be death of leads......






"Arpitha" he yelled. "NOOOOO!"

She walked out of his life.. His beautiful Angel.

She was gone.


Flashback:


"Avdhesh are you there?" Arpitha came to their room to see whether he was there or not.

Then she came to hall searching for him then Chulbul said that he saw him going to stairs and so she went to there but to her horror he was drinking like a mad man.

"Jaan what are you doing ?"Arpitha asked him when she tried to hold him.

"How Dare you to Cheat me Pari" he pushed her roughly to wall and pinned her with his strong arms.

"how many men were there before me tell me 🤬" he shouted and also he was beyond angry. He loved her, hated her, but still loves her like a madman!

How could she betray me?

Out of anger, he kept drinking and drinking.

he was shocked even though he didn't mean to say that the word to the women he loves and he saw how her beautiful face was hurt and tears started flowing from her mesmerizing eyes.

"I don't what you are talking about?" she pleaded him crying.

"here Ran Vijay Showed me evidence about your relation with him and here it is" he throw the pictures on her face and grabbed her hair threw her down.

Arpitha stood their stunned seeing those pictures then she understood the trap which RanVijay laid.

"Please BELIEVE me Jaan this is not true and it's Ranvijay's plan to separate us and i will do anything for your love,Please give me a chance to prove my innocence. I love you. I truly do." she said.

"How do you expect me to believe you? You have all this evidence against you!" he shouted.

"No! It wasn't me! You said you loved me! I swear It wasn't me! Please believe me!" she again begged, with tears coming out. She was on her knees. "Trust me!"

His anger rose and finally he let his anger out. "You 🤬! YOU LIE TO ME SAYING YOU LOVE ME? YOU LOVE HIM! YOU BETRAYED ME!"

She was shocked' she resorted to her final option.

"I Don't Believe you and please do me favour get out of my life" he said her while brushing tears from her eyes.

"I-I talked t-to a m-man saying that h-he willl prove my i-i-inocence. All I can say is p-please trust m-me!" she cried, while crying.

"You are the lowest of the lowest. How dare you make up a stupid lie. Shut up and leave." He screamed at her.

"you are my reason for living and if you don't believe me then i don't think i have any more reason to live in this home."she said brushing her tears and left from there with her head held high.

When she was going and he realised something from him is going so far that if he doesn't stop her now he may not able to see her again and the pain ran through his body.

"Pari..i thought you will fight for our love but you left me, so that's true then you love that Ranvijay 🤬." he said while opening the new bottle of whiskey but he stopped suddenly he still can't believe that his Arpitha his pari will betray him.

he quickly went to stop her but before he tried to stop her by then, she was already gone.

he went to their room and he would feel the emptiness from the room without her then took keys from draw and clutch their wedding picture to his heart.

"we will sort out everything even though you don't love me and i will give you a chance to prove your innocence and my heart says that you will never deceive me, i will bring you to my not OUR home back."he said determinedly and went to start his car.

Arpitha POV


"I don't know what to do and i have to find that man somehow to prove my innocence to Jaan and i know him he still have faith on me."she was think while searching that man who can help her.

i was about to cross the road then someone from behind came kept the cloth on my mouth and then i fainted.

i tried to again my consciousness but i failed then i saw Ranvijay talking to someone about me in phone but my head started aching very badly i couldn't listen anything.


Fews Hours Later


i again my consciousness few hours later then saw my both hands and legs were tied in rope and Ranvijay Smirking at me.

"your husband is coming soon and i am gonna destroy you both."he said and left

i tried to remove the rope but i failed then suddenly one of the Ranvijay's man came removed the rope and set me free

"please go from here before he kill you and i know you want to know the reason why i am trying to save you but it's no time for it please leave immediately " he said. i said thanks and left there but i collided in to Ranvijay before he could catch me i ran in to stairs.


Normal POV

"where do you think you are going my innocent flower?" Ranvijay said

"how dare you to deceive my husband?i thought you were trying to help me to win his love but you 🤬 destroyed my whole world"she said venously then she started to move back while he was front of her and playing with her hair and she tried to push him back but no use.

"Ahhh Come on Honey! did you think that i will leave you that's easily for rejecting me and my love over that Avdhesh Singh Thakur." he tried to kiss her but she slapped him was about to run but he grabbed wrist and was about to slap her then a hand stop him do it.

he turned to check who it was he stood there stunned it's Avdhesh then he punched him and went to quickly near Arpitha to check whether she was okay or not.

Arpitha noticed that Ranvijay was about shoot Avdhesh on his back so she pushed him down then bullet hit on her chest and

she felled from terrace and

lay in a pool covered by blood.

Ranvijay and Avdhesh stood there in same spot and it was Avdhesh who came to reality then he shoot Ranvijay and left form there to find to Arpitha.

Flashback End

when he came near pool and he found that Arpitha's body in water.

"Arpitha" he yelled. "NOOOOO!"

She walked out of his life.. His beautiful Angel.

She was gone

He held her, drenched in blood, screaming.

Others were shocked and upset.

She was gone.

He loved her.

He needed her.

She was the girl with the most beautiful black eyes.

She was the only one who made him fall.

She never betrayed him.

It was him who betrayed her.

He left her, abandoned her in the cruel dark world.

He pushed her to her own death.

He should have trusted her, but he didn't..

He loved her'. And'


She Loved Him.


It is funny how he realized this, only after she was gone. Only after she left.

He wouldn't be able to see her smile. Won't be able to see her shining black eyes, that shone like a jewel. He would never be able to see her innocence. He would never be able to hear her melodic voice.

He also realized, he can never forget her and he had no reason to live because his Pari left him.

So he took gun from the ground then shoot himself and Everyone there was stunned to see Avdhesh Singh Thakur committing suicide as he was shot himself, he smiled. He will be with her again. In heaven.

This time, he swore he will set things right.

' I love her.

I will trust her words and do everything I can to see her happy.

I love her.

Not for her beauty, her smile, or her eyes.

I love her.

She had the most beautiful heart and

I love her,

Because she is his Pari, his Arpitha.

He truly smiled, happily and closed his eyes, waiting till the time he could see her again.

As he died, he whispered "I truly love you, my beautiful Pari , my beautiful Arpitha."

At the funeral, he was buried next to her, and his tomb stone was next to her.


Hers read:


"She was beautiful, kind, and innocent

She was always loved by all

She loved and was loved in return

Although she died, we know she's in heaven"


While his read:


"He left for the one he loved

He had a heart that was bigger than expected

He died happy and we all know

He loved, so let them be in heaven together."


"Love is stronger than death even though it can't stop death from happening, but no matter how hard death tries it can't separate people from love. It can't take away our memories either. In the end, life is stronger than death."


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Edited by Prashuu 😳

waiting for you views and any mistake i'm sorry....feel free comment😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey this is nice

there is still continuation right?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really very nice 👏👏...............hope u continue it 😊

the last few lines n d writing on d tomb were touchng n sad , made me cry 😭😭 ...........hope they dont die in d show at d end 😭😭😭😭.............. but very very well written 👏👏👏👏
Edited by coolguy3 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Priya 🤗
This is really cute 👏 Very nice 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes di continuation is there but i will post it in 5 minutes 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Priyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa🤗🤗

OMG!! I had tears in my eyes 😭😭

Such a beautiful OS!!!!!

Im Speechless!!!





World didnt let them stay with each other.😡😡😡....

Atleast They will be happy together in heaven.....😊





Loooooooooooooooove you a lottttttttttttttttttt❤️

This is Superb OS!!!!
👏

You are a ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️


👏
Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Priya dear, it was awsome,👏
oh God i can't believe you have planned their death, you said that you dropped the idea, well ,😭
hope you chagne your mind again,
just love to read your writing dear,
compleat it soon.....
waiting for it.🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hat's off pappa!
You are a fantastic writer.

...............🤣 For the dedication.
Though It was a sad ending but still loved it to the core.


But arpi is coming back in GKD😆 So death is never death in dramas and FF's. Next one should be that arpi comes back in gunda avatar🤣🤣



Love you loads.

p.s: i was playing with the colors🤣

Edited by amnaM - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hye dear,
it was something called heart touching.

Its better for them to die b'coz this world will not let them live happily after death they can be in peace and allso the people who are around them can know the extent of there love.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolguy3

really very nice 👏👏...............hope u continue it 😊

the last few lines n d writing on d tomb were touchng n sad , made me cry 😭😭 ...........hope they dont die in d show at d end 😭.............. but very very well written 👏


Thanks CG 🤗

i am really glad you like it 😳

awwww come on say that keep your finger's crossed our Arpi will be back soon...😳

i want to write it before but Jo said she can't see them dieing...so i delayed it 😆

Once Again thank you very much for your review 🤗

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