FF-'DESIRE'--Part 12'the Prom night'part-2 pg 47 - Page 32

Originally posted by: jasveensokhi

Hey Neha di sori for being late 2 unres mah post

so now ur update... it's realy vry nic di u have shown

d true luv between Avi n Arpi wow di fantastic

well main isse jayada or kuch nhi keh sakti coz

i m speechless😊 thanx di for such a wonderful

update n sori again for being late😳

well update soon😊

Thanx for comment dear ,

no matter how late but atleast u did it b4 next UD hehe thats enough😉

will try to UD soon😳

Sugar Pie... Why Dont U kill everyone else & Let AviTa live in peace.. Poor AviTa.. Feel sorry for them. Serial mein bhi dono ko itni takleef hui. Atleast FF mein toh let them enjoy. Dat RV & his Dad.. Getting so angry on them. Nw I want a steamy scene.. *Me Blushing*

Hye jo,
update update update it soon dear,
i am waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Sugar Pie... Why Dont U kill everyone else & Let AviTa live in peace.. Poor AviTa.. Feel sorry for them. Serial mein bhi dono ko itni takleef hui. Atleast FF mein toh let them enjoy. Dat RV & his Dad.. Getting so angry on them. Nw I want a steamy scene.. *Me Blushing*

hey Cuty Pie thanx for comments

hehe don't worry me too didn't like the way CVs end it up hum Avita ko ab zuda nhi hone denge (unless hume koi jhatkedaar end na pasand aa jaaye 😈) hehe

"steamy scenes ": oh thats something i can't🤢 sorry boss , bz thats what i have to learn from Priya n Prashuuu hehe n top of them all you i read ur Promo n i can smell some hotty hotty shots ☺️ (uuii maa)

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye jo,
update update update it soon dear,

i am waiting for the next part.

Hey Rups dear thanx for reminder hehe,

will try to Update tonight 😉

lov ya for this😊

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Heyy Neha !!🤗

I read all the pending parts from Storm burst out-2

I really enjoyed it..It was awesome !!👏👏

U r an amazing writer !!👏👏

I was about to cry reading the accident convo..😭😭

Oh God !! I thought now we will have some happy AVITA moments...& again u brought this family twist..😡😆😆

Waiting for next !!😊

hehe thanx for making time to read it dear

yap me too hope that v will have some Avita moments here hehe😆

lets c if i can write it or not ,😆

n about Family hey without Family prob how can this story complete haan?😆

will try to make it fast ,

love u for commenting dear😉

Are wow jo u are going to update tonight only that will be great.
And about the reminder,
i am back now so i will keep reminding & irritating u daily. So that u will update jaldi jaldi.

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Are wow jo u are going to update tonight only that will be great.
And about the reminder,

i am back now so i will keep reminding & irritating u daily. So that u will update jaldi jaldi.

hehe keep me irritating if its going to be this way ,😆

btw i will try can't promise bz i believe in keeping words n if my net dies at last moment

i don't want to keep u guys waiting ,

n me too waiting for few UDs like Priya's Ramona's Nidha's

hehe i m crazy for them😆